Looking for feedback on endo stories

[Ender9107]

Hello, and thanks for just checking in on this post. Anyway, I've been getting pretty familiar with the whole writing process lately, and a few days ago, I put out what I consider to be my best work yet. I put my heart, soul, and two whole months into this story, and I've been anticipating what people might have to say about it. Of course, I'd like any feedback whatsoever. Displays of interest, harsh criticisms, and anything in between are all things I've been hoping for. But now that the story's been out for a while, there's nothing. Things like this happen all the time, but with how much time I spent on it and how much it's meant to me, complete silence is fairly disheartening. So if you could give your honest opinion on it, and it's not too much trouble, I'd love it more than anything.

Story here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/987478

Now, I won't be doing this for all, or even most of my stories, but if a situation similar to this one ever comes up, I'll consider putting it here. That's all, have a good day.

[Sylv]

Heh, I feel like I've read this story before!~ Wonder why that must be, hmmm..~