LSD and Retic Story

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LSD and Retic Story

Postby TheBagLobster » Tue Feb 20, 2024 1:32 pm

Hello everyone, I have recently posted a new story and would like to get some critiques on it if you have the time.

Here is the story link, I hope you enjoy

fatal, willing, digestion, feral snake pred, human prey, casual vore

https://aryion.com/g4/view/983526
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