This is a series I'm making based off of the manga "The 100 Girlfriends Who Really, Really, Really, Really, Really Love You". If you haven't read the original manga, I highly recommend it. I am on chapter 2 and hope to put out at least a chapter a week. Here's the Prologue.
The 1 Girlfriend Who Really, Really, Really, Really, Really Wants To Eat The Other 99
Haraga Kurumi had always struggled with her hunger. Whenever she desired a specific food, she would get nasty and mean until her glutinous desires were sated. Throughout high school, Rentarou and his other girlfriends had helped her find any outlandish meal that she craved. Once they entered college, they had even gone as far as to let her explore their bodies, when her hunger mixed with her lust.
Now, there was a major problem. She had come across a meal she desperately desired, but refused to indulge in. She started distancing herself from the others, not wanting them to take the brunt of her hanger. She kept her hood low over her head, hiding her drooling mouth and furious eyes.
The others respected her decision, even if it meant losing touch with her. They were always open to talk, but Kurumi knew she couldn't risk it. After all, the meals she so desperately wanted to eat were the other girlfriends in Rentarou's harem.
During her second year of college, she had discovered the fetish for eating people. Vore had first disgusted her, but the longer she thought it over, the more it appealed to her. Her stomach would roar any time she was with her fellow girlfriends. It was odd, but no other women, or men for that matter, caused her to desire their flesh. It was only the 99 other girls her boyfriend had asked out.
Since then, a year had passed. Kurumi was entering her final year and her desires flooded over the dam she had built in her mind. She was determined to eat the girls, even if it meant they wouldn't survive. Her raging emotions drowned out the logical part of her brain until one major fault with her plan came to mind. How was she going to eat people? This wasn't some cartoon. Even if she wasn't a beanstalk of a woman, she still wouldn't be able to eat girls whole. For that, she'd need some mad scientist's help.
That's when she started to cackle. She knew exactly who to ask for help. Not only that, her small size would make her the perfect prey for her first meal. The thought of stopping at eating one girlfriend was long dead. Kurumi was determined that she would eat all 99 of Rentarou's other girlfriends. It was the only way to sate her hunger.
Prologue End
Here are links to Chapter 1, Chapter 2 and a poll for who should be the next girl on the menu. I am open to criticism and recommendations.
The 1 Girlfriend Who Wants To Eat The Other 99
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