Vitric's story thread! *December 28, 2011 update*

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Re: Vitric's story thread! *December 28, 2011 update*

Postby Indighost » Sun Jan 08, 2012 8:03 pm

Enjoyable story. I liked how you took us all the way through the full tour.
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Re: Vitric's story thread! *December 28, 2011 update*

Postby fatso21 » Sat Jul 21, 2012 9:32 pm

When are you going to write your next story? You have an excellent writing style.
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Re: Vitric's story thread! *December 28, 2011 update*

Postby VBJeans » Thu Feb 15, 2024 9:37 am

Great story, I enjoy non-fatal vore story, and I also like your excellent writing style.
So will we see more vore stuff about stretched clothing(such as stretched jeans) or mentions stretched clothing description?
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