that lion den story.

by **regnor** » Sat Apr 15, 2006 2:15 pm

I looked at that lion den story the other night. I agree it has a bit too much scat, but the story is still okay. What do the rest of you guys think of it?

by **random_man** » Sat Apr 15, 2006 5:07 pm

It has alot of chapters but most of them are pretty short. Not my type of story.

by **Cilis** » Sun Apr 16, 2006 1:19 am

I think its a gag myself. The poop every other choice part gives it away.

I'd highly suggest deleting those chapters.

by **Tails** » Sun Apr 16, 2006 8:16 am

A lot of them are rather short, but I've been adding lengthier ones as much as possible ^_^. I just wish they had made it clearer wether the lions were antrho or not. The recent chapters mentioned the kings pants so obviously he is in that chain now, but the earlier ones had led me to believe they were not; hence why I have them as four legged in all my entries.

by **Nasonxian** » Mon Apr 24, 2006 6:39 pm

I actually rather like the scat in the story, though I'm not sure why... I've never liked scat before ^^;