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A Ravenous Rabbit Rises By ElyBlanche -- Report

Word Count: 6668
Another commission for the burp-lover,  bajillionandone! This one was a lot of fun. Role-reversal and bunny girl preds are always nice.

In a world where animal girls are plentiful, appear very similar to humans, and can only reproduce by procreating with human men, bunny girls are close to the bottom of the food chain. Wolves and others in the vast woodlands see them as nothing but an easy, quick-regenerating food source. One bunny, however, Rosie, finds herself in a position to change her village's fate, becoming the sworn defender of all bunnies in her settlement.

The artist of the thumbnail art is  LTAF.

I hope you all enjoy!
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bajillionandone

Posted by bajillionandone 1 year ago Report

Fantastic work as always, thank you so much!

EnderTG

Posted by EnderTG 1 year ago Report

Prey turned pred are always good, especially when they end up outdoing them

ElyBlanche

Posted by ElyBlanche 1 year ago Report

Mhm yes. Outdoing them and becoming worse people for it =3=

Laxhoop2526

Posted by Laxhoop2526 1 year ago Report

This concept is so great, yet it rarely gets covered.
I think my only complaint is that you really skipped over a lot of potential vore bits, like, is a bear the largest single meal she’s ever had? How large did her gut actually get in comparison to her?
I really think we could use a sequel, where we get four more flashbacks to before she has to start worrying about a lack of food, talking about how she ate a family of feral bears, and made her stomach 10 times her size, so big that the final bear almost managed to get away, stuff like that.
And in-between the flashbacks, we see her going out farther and farther to find decent meals, eventually growing so hungry, that she begins to wonder what she even protects the other bunnies for. “I don’t need their food, or their protection. They offer me nothing. Well, they COULD offer me something…”
But, it’s your story, if you wanted to make a sequel, it’d be your call.

ElyBlanche

Posted by ElyBlanche 1 year ago Report

The story was already nearly 7000 words lol. It would've dragged on too much if I just had more unneeded flashbacks regarding her transformation.

If you want a sequel, you can commission it. This story was a commissioned piece and I'm sure Bajillion wouldn't mind someone else commissioning its sequel.

Though... I don't think it'd be in Rosie's character to just up and denounce her family and village because she gets too hungry. She's the one protecting them and they offer her love and support.