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YWATA: Liquid Vignettes (Year 2) By TwrchTwryth -- Report

Allison gets a new girlfriend, more adventurous, and kind of hungry.

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Alienraptor

Posted by Alienraptor 2 years ago Report

Im liking this... a lot

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 2 years ago Report

Thanks! Of course, now that I've posted it, I've thought of two more vignettes for Paris. Oh well, I guess there'll have to be a sequel...

Alienraptor

Posted by Alienraptor 2 years ago Report

Yes please!! More please!!

Throku

Posted by Throku 2 years ago Report

After the first part I was afraid that you'd go into bodymorphing like you've already established at the academy. While I like that concept a lot, you clearly have otehr means to achieve that so I was very glad to see you divert from that path and actually adhere to the opportunities that her liquid form presented.

A great story! ;)

After the introduction of Paris I thought Allison would be introduced to some cock-action-roulette. As in sucked up Paris's member to be released as the action started as a massive load(not cumified, but in her liquid form) But well one can't be sure beforehand if that release is going to be down someone's throat, up a cervix, or a massive bukkake over several girls, or some other weird stuff. I guess as she later managed to reduce her size, maybe she wouldn't have to be bucketloads of "cum"?

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 2 years ago Report

Thanks! As for roulette, so like Allison either goes into Paris's dick, or absorbs Paris's and attaches her cock, then when that dick next climaxes, it blasts liquified Allison all over/into the recipient?

Huh, that's a good idea.

Throku

Posted by Throku 2 years ago Report

Yeah, the first version was what I imagined, but then Paris didn't turn out to be a rod-wield-enthuiast. So perhaps she gets semi-kidnapped from time to time by one of the neighbours? I mean the classic way to defeat a slimegirl is with a straw after all.
And I get the impression that most girls don't want to be cummified before the party starts and a dick fanatic probably wants to arrive with a loaded gun, so this would be a compromize.

Then again Either Allison or Paris could start miss Paris' appendix after a few months without it, which would probably make for a more voulentary arrangement than I just lined out above.

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 2 years ago Report

I think we're going to see something similar in the third installment (and you inadvertently referenced another planned vignette in there). I've plotted out 6 more vignettes and have written one, so hopefully it won't be too much longer on the rest.

Vmaster608

Posted by Vmaster608 2 years ago Report

I would love to see a mass vore story from this school again.

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 2 years ago Report

I think we're due. I tried to throw a little bone that direction at the end, but maybe I should make it more explicit. Any requests for the type of vore?

Throku

Posted by Throku 2 years ago Report

Hmm... you seem to gloss over food transformation, maybe combine that with some object animation? Not sure if the animator would control, mabe when she sees fit, but more give mobility to otehrwise inanimate food items?
"So you turned them into non-stop? Seems wierd if they're not even moving to begin with...Let me help you with that..."
"Oh it was more of a play on my own addiction. You know when I start I can't... Hey!" *Wham* She slams her hand down and gather the wiggling, rolling and squirming colourful candies up with a swipe across the table before they had scattered too far and adressed her new content of her palm. "Where do you think you're going?"

Throku

Posted by Throku 2 years ago Report

Dunno why I started thinking of easter hunt now? Eggs hunting candies and girls hunting eggs and possibly the staff having bunnied up to make sure the game is played fair and also laying down the traps or whatever that transforms a girl into whatever... Seems a bit silly though, even if I like a bit of a competition every now and then and even highscores on occasion.

"Good Luck!"

"Thanks! I'll need it. last year I got turned into a piece of chocolate at the intitiation ritual."

"Still think you got better off than me. I got turned into a bubblegum shortly after and managed to stary out of harm's way until mid hunt. And then I spent the rest of it and all through the ceremony getting chewed. I never even saw her face."

Or maybe this is just a tradition of the food transformers where they fuck with everyone?

Meh, ideas at any rate.

Vmaster608

Posted by Vmaster608 2 years ago Report

How about a scavenger hunt? A group of girls are given a list of other girls they have to look for and eat. They can use any type of vore they want but you should mostly focused on one girl. As for the type of vore, I am unsure.

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 2 years ago Report

That could be a fun bonding activity for the Consumer's Club. I'll keep that in mind.

Throku

Posted by Throku 2 years ago Report

Heh, sounds like the scouts.
I got this badge "the newb" for eating my first unwilling, the "Hungry enough to eat a horse" for eating a centaur with a rider... Then there's the "Hungry hippo"...
...Still missing the "Clean house" though, you need to get a whole sorority for that one.

Vmaster608

Posted by Vmaster608 2 years ago Report

Cool.