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Part 2! Delayed for a little while since my computer died immediately after I posted part 1 and it took some time to come up with a workaround.
Part 3 coming . . . when it's ready.
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Posted by Plgc 2 years ago Report
ABIGAIL EDITS HERE made me laugh
Great story. Can't wait for part 3
Posted by saturn 2 years ago Report
Ha! I thought I deleted all the notes, fixing now.
Glad to hear you liked it!
Posted by Darktroll 2 years ago Report
I wonder how you feel about scat, farts, or at least, implied disposal?
Will you do an internal of Eric when he eats somebody?
Posted by saturn 2 years ago Report
I may do internals at some point - these particular stories just haven't shaken out that way.
As for the rest - not my cup of tea, so I'm afraid my stories won't feature said topics.
Posted by Darktroll 2 years ago Report
I'm wondering why Eric doesn't just tie a string around Allison and swallow her. Then, when it's time, he yanks her out of there.
Posted by Lavendercake877 2 years ago Report
acutally i was thinging the same thing but we musten't interrupt the artist^^
Posted by Nalzindar 2 years ago Report
I must say, Allison can be quite cynical, even towards her closest relatives without knowing it! It was a nice continuation with a good build up towards the end. Eric seems to have gotten very confident about eating tiny people already, though I can't help but wonder whether Abigal had some last minute regrets after being eaten (What in the world might they parents have said about this!)
Anyway, good stuff and I look forward to read more about this couple^^