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Unbirthed Like A Gutslut [1292words] By heromc -- Report

Disregard of life by degenerate friends...

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doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

awesome , although im surprised you described it as painful

heromc

Posted by heromc 3 years ago Report

Thanks! And I'm a sick twisted individual, death needs some weight to it, although I usually pair it with an orgasm :)

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

hehe you should see the stories im about to post . one is about an ill fated city and the other is about an ill fated school trip . cruelty abounds

heromc

Posted by heromc 3 years ago Report

PM me so I spot em, I'd love to take a look :)

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

you got it

Nightcrawler99

Posted by Nightcrawler99 3 years ago Report

Nice one! Though I mostly lean towards stories that don't involve death because its too permanent this was an interesting read.

Unwilling entrapment is where its at for me.^^
Got an idea for one from this story if interested.

heromc

Posted by heromc 3 years ago Report

Thanks!

I'm not too interested in non-fatal themes unfortunately, but I highly encourage you to try writing it yourself! You'd be surprised how quickly you can learn to write well after a few stories under your belt :)

sarkan

Posted by sarkan 3 years ago Report

Very hot! Love that she got gagged by her own tits lol

heromc

Posted by heromc 3 years ago Report

A poetic way to be silenced when they were the point of agitation :D

juicefox

Posted by juicefox 3 years ago Report

Wow! I don't even like unbirth or willing vore, but this is one of the hottest vore stories I've read in a LONG while. Would have been nice if Jane made it to the party, but the threats and teasing of all that is enough fuel for the imagination.

heromc

Posted by heromc 3 years ago Report

Holy cow I'll be riding the high your words just gave me all week! Thank you soo much I really do appreciate that! I'm not the biggest into unwilling vore, but I do have a few stories involving it in my gallery. Gamma Gamma Gone is a super weird idea, but it might scratch your itch :)

NightRoller

Posted by NightRoller 3 years ago Report

I highly respect when I see other writers also wax poetic towards the end to signal the loss of coherent thought and/or digestion! It's one of my favorite tactics.
I don't typically enjoy unbirth, but this was a decent read!

heromc

Posted by heromc 3 years ago Report

Thanks! I did have a fun time getting more abstract like that!

absolute

Posted by absolute 2 years ago Report

Does evryone have the ability to vore in this universe or is it just general. Cuz this one seems like with some world building. It could break the chains of fetish porn to become an interesting narritive with some neat antagonists

absolute

Posted by absolute 2 years ago Report

Cuz i look at vore not as a fetish material, but as a conflict creator. Especially when everyone in the work thinks rationally about it.

heromc

Posted by heromc 2 years ago Report

Well I never really revisit or stick to a single universe, but I imagine in this world its possible for everyone to vore, but not everyone has the capacity. It sorta explains why both of the girls kept doing this, they knew there was a chance she would fit, but it just hadn't happened yet.

If you're looking for some good conflict and drama, I'd recommend my blind date story, it's much less about the fetish as it is about the foodchain when everyone knowingly participates.

Thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoyed :)

absolute

Posted by absolute 2 years ago Report

Wow. Didn't expect a reply considering posts age. But yeah. Seems interesting. And about my veiws. While i dont have a universe. I do have characters that have been dropped into vore based universes with non-vore based powers and i just imagine how things end up going. If your curious about how a few turned out or what they could do. Just ask.

heromc

Posted by heromc 2 years ago Report

Shoot me a pm and I'll take a look when I can.

absolute

Posted by absolute 2 years ago Report

Ps. One of them is super grisly.