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Things got a little out of hand.And what is this new appearance that you have done?

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VoidInVoid

Posted by VoidInVoid 3 years ago Report

Lies and arrogance from the selfish, abusive eldest

ThreeStrikes

Posted by ThreeStrikes 3 years ago Report

I hope not; this needed to happen

VoidInVoid

Posted by VoidInVoid 3 years ago Report

Don't worry. You're just experiencing Illiyan's way of quote-unquote speaking. If you'll check the title, the tags, the description and the comment you replied to, you'll see Illiyan's responses to Lauren Greci/Greci - those blank quotes.

Graywolf18

Posted by Graywolf18 3 years ago Report

So this is how you get eyes on the inside. Thanks Void!

Sisterly bonding through galactic battle. Look out Del, your hug is next.

VoidInVoid

Posted by VoidInVoid 3 years ago Report

I'm sure all those universes they broke during the midst were uninhabited. Probably.

LeakyBoat

Posted by LeakyBoat 3 years ago Report

Have not read it yet but very excited

LeakyBoat

Posted by LeakyBoat 3 years ago Report

That was pretty cool.
Well I mean that's a given, this whole series is pretty cool, even if there was no vore I'd still definitely read it, but this chapter in particular was extra cool.

VoidInVoid

Posted by VoidInVoid 3 years ago Report

The secret to coolness is less sleep (don't actually lose sleep if you can help it). Lauren is too cool for school, and May is unfortunately way too cool for school.

I've thought about what I'd do if I made a voreless version of the story and whether or not people on Eka's would still read it, so it's nice to hear that at least one would. But, I made vore a bit too interwoven to remove it completely.

h0riz0n45

Posted by h0riz0n45 3 years ago Report

My mind has shattered upon the very concept

VoidInVoid

Posted by VoidInVoid 3 years ago Report

My mind is no fortress. It is an open pasture ravaged by internecine conflict - and chicken.

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

wait so what happened , did greci actually eat illyian . or was that just a metaphor of her defeating illyian

VoidInVoid

Posted by VoidInVoid 3 years ago Report

Maybe both.

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

you know , the more questions i ask you the more you circumvent the answers.

either way , may was right anout lauren , and the situation with the siblings is laurens fault

VoidInVoid

Posted by VoidInVoid 3 years ago Report

I still have secrets and spoilers to keep under wraps, but both is probably the real answer.

Lauren never was, is and will be a role model. She did and does terrible things, and her efforts to change are never to change her means (Bates isn't around, so no pun intended). And yes, Lauren is the root of many of the problems, but many of her Siblings used her actions as an excuse to go further than turnabout and/or recompense on their retaliations. Lauren's terribleness is front and center; the others' not so much. Lauren does want to bring all her Siblings together again, but she's still Lauren; and that's a speedbump.

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

smart way to describe the scenario. i would definetrly be interested in a side story about the others so we can see their crimes. to be honest id want to see lauren actually be punished. like you said, she is no saint

VoidInVoid

Posted by VoidInVoid 3 years ago Report

I'm always cooking up ways to humble or ruin Lauren's day. Unfortunately, while she might not be the Weather Goddess, she always knows how to bring the sun out for herself. Give me less than a year, now, and I've got something that might interest you.

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

good to know , im hoping its a trial for her entire crew because that would be hilarious and suiting.

it would be funny if your final story they were sentenced to death by digestion for their crimes and just respawn the next day and retire

brennen

Posted by brennen 11 months ago Report

If you're taking suggestions, one idea would be to have Lauren somehow "split" (Similar to the GS in the freezing realm) and trying to recombine.