Posted by volcera 13 years ago Report

Thanks umm Alright I will re-read it and I will continue it. Ive been editing and messing with it for some time now, and if I wasnt always busy I would have more time to work on it. What I planed was make a couple of races and different ways for all of them. Thank you so much for your comment and watch I was so surprised when I seen I had messages and I glad to know its being read, With that said I must be more active on it I surly will do my best thank you.

Posted by 4_thy Dark Rose 13 years ago Report

hi there your interactive story "first adventure" is very good, only thing i think you should do is on the "new home" part with your character Nikki, is that it be nice if you actually continued that instead of just cutting it off, it might be interesting to see what she means when she says-"and now we go back to my place where you will meet the others who enjoy my little game" but that's just my opinion