Goldendevil21 wrote:First off, just like the music at the title screen. And the temple in the back already sets the theme of an adventure. Even the little donation sticker at the bottom right is surprisingly cute.
The story could use some work. Just find the plot of a giant stepping on the MC and transported to this fantasy world. Then with the power to never die, is being kept there because Ricela does not want you to leave. Not because she is in love with you. Just the boring, ‘keeping you safe.’
Do like the sound for when you open doors, though.
Feels weird that the MC, despite what the opening dialogue said about being in this world for a while, does not know about magic in this world. This feels forced.
And one thing that greatly needs improvement is dialogue. The way characters talk is incredibly janky. Not like real people and instead talking for the audience to know what is going on. Though understand as English is not your normal language.
This is negative but understand this is just a demo of a new game started up completely for free. Understand that the game will be very ruff around the edges but love the thought of a vore game and all the possibilities. Will we join a team of women who constantly eat the protagonist to refill on mana and health? What other types of magic exist in this world? Do they involve vore? What is that ruin in the title screen? Am being harsh as that is just how I encourage the game/story to get better.
Thanks for the feedback.
In the first version of the game I wanted to show the direction of my game how the system works. It tells a story using illustrations. giving the feeling of reading a story and allow players to participate in various events
So I didn't go into the depths of the story. And the lack of proficiency in the language makes it look a bit strange.
and title screen is game engine starter tool, not my work..
secretish wrote:The demo is very short, but really promising. I really like the art and general atmosphere so far, and am looking forward to the rest of the game. Will most of the size difference scenes like this have transformation, or will the protagonist be human but small typically?
In the next chapter, it will be a small human.
but may change in the future. Imagine that in the magical world you can be anything and play with girls...