Looking for some feedback on my work.
https://aryion.com/g4/gallery/ArchangelDreadnought
Posting comments on individual pieces is what I'd like people to do.
Your thoughts on my work.
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Your thoughts on my work.
by ArchangelDreadnought » Thu Jan 02, 2020 2:59 pm
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Re: Your thoughts on my work.
by Bright » Thu Jan 02, 2020 4:40 pm
I notice that you do bellies very bumpy.
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Re: Your thoughts on my work.
by ArchangelDreadnought » Thu Jan 02, 2020 5:04 pm
Bright wrote:I notice that you do bellies very bumpy.
Yup, that's what I like about vore/unbirth the most.
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Re: Your thoughts on my work.
by Jarmelhrax » Fri Jan 03, 2020 9:01 am
I like the folder icons!
Although IMO the bulges should resamble a prey instead of being randomly placed along the surface
Although IMO the bulges should resamble a prey instead of being randomly placed along the surface
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Re: Your thoughts on my work.
by Siuddithsi » Fri Jan 03, 2020 2:13 pm
I love them. The women are drawn well and I like the hairstyles. I agree that the bellies would look more "realistic" (if that's the appropriate word) if the bulges looked more like prey.
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Re: Your thoughts on my work.
by EnderDracolich » Fri Jan 03, 2020 10:34 pm
It's good! Honestly love the way your do bulges, especially when you do large/multiple prey.
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Re: Your thoughts on my work.
by Gendor » Sat Jan 04, 2020 5:56 am
I think it could be better if you didn't draw a line where the buldges began but maybe tried more about shadows and softer shapes.
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Re: Your thoughts on my work.
by Themastermushroom » Sat Jan 04, 2020 6:09 am
I love your artwork, my suggestion is to try different styles or adding something new, like a sequel of the tasty cavern of monsters, that series was a great one.
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Re: Your thoughts on my work.
by ArchangelDreadnought » Sat Jan 04, 2020 8:40 pm
Thanks for all the feed back.
As far as the bumps not really matching anything, that's kinda the point, so you can make up your own mind what's in there (most of my descriptions and titles are done on the fly afterward, and really don't have much to do with the drawing other than to fill the space so I can post it). Though, I might try that later (along with trying the shading thing). Not sure how to do a different style or what new thing I could add.
As far as the bumps not really matching anything, that's kinda the point, so you can make up your own mind what's in there (most of my descriptions and titles are done on the fly afterward, and really don't have much to do with the drawing other than to fill the space so I can post it). Though, I might try that later (along with trying the shading thing). Not sure how to do a different style or what new thing I could add.
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