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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby Turbotowns » Mon May 24, 2021 8:57 pm

Yeah, the style of the pieces is identical. Point still stands though. I'm sure they could have used kisekae if they wanted.
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby Brpdchainsaw » Tue May 25, 2021 7:28 am

Turbotowns wrote:I'm sure they could have used kisekae if they wanted.

To be honest, I just typed "Character Creator In Browser" into google and the Monster Girl one was one of the first to pop up.
I might try looking into this Kisekae for future projects though.
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby slimjam » Thu May 27, 2021 9:02 pm

I have another suggestion;
The Adulterous Ogress Heiress

An Ogress Heiress requests the services of a well endowed employee.
You could fuck her normally, cum inflate her, or be safely unbirthed by her.
Afterwards you get a call from the desk girl saying a male Ogre is comming up to the room and that he seems very mad about something.
The Ogress asks you to help her do something about her enraged husband.

You can hide her from her husband (in your belly) but he won't buy it when he finally gets into the room. After that you can either convince him to leave his wife to get gurgled or join her while she masturbates inside you and then digest them both.

Alternatively you can offer to eat her husband for her so she can inherit his fortune. She seduces him, you get the drop on him and eat him. She then asks if you'll be her new husband and you live out your days in the lap of luxury and sire a clan of (Lady Dimitrescu-esc) giant ghouls that rapidly depopulate the human population of the city (Ogress ending)
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby Brpdchainsaw » Fri May 28, 2021 8:14 am

slimjam wrote:I have another suggestion;
The Adulterous Orgess Heiress

An Ogress Heiress requests the services of a well endowed employee.
You could fuck her normally, cum inflate her, or be safely unbirthed by her.
Afterwards you get a call from the desk girl saying a male Ogre is comming up to the room and that he seems very mad about something.
The Ogress asks you to help her do something about her enraged husband.

You can hide her from her husband (in your belly) but he won't buy it when he finally gets into the room. After that you can either convince him to leave his wife to get gurgled or join her while she masturbates inside you and then digest them both.

Alternatively you can offer to eat her husband for her so she can inherit his fortune. She seduces him, you get the drop on him and eat him. She then asks if you'll be her new husband and you live out your days in the lap of luxury and sire a clan of (Lady Dimitrescu-esc) giant ghouls that rapidly depopulate the human population of the city (Ogress ending)


While it may take some work, I think you’re really onto something here!
I won’t be able to make all of your ideas fit, her unbirthing the player for example just wouldn’t work given the world I’ve created, maybe they could try to get it to work and have fun failing (the player only fits in halfway for instance).
I like the idea of her being very easy to seduce at first, but needing some work to reach her ending, and I like the idea of her husband making an appearance, it’ll be different than what I usually write.

Either way, I’m definitely adding your Ogress to the NPC list!
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby Soroxas77 » Fri May 28, 2021 1:13 pm

It seems weird that apparently ghouls are not undead in your setting.
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby slimjam » Fri May 28, 2021 10:16 pm

Brpdchainsaw wrote:
slimjam wrote:I have another suggestion;
The Adulterous Ogress Heiress

An Ogress Heiress requests the services of a well endowed employee.
You could fuck her normally, cum inflate her, or be safely unbirthed by her.
Afterwards you get a call from the desk girl saying a male Ogre is comming up to the room and that he seems very mad about something.
The Ogress asks you to help her do something about her enraged husband.

You can hide her from her husband (in your belly) but he won't buy it when he finally gets into the room. After that you can either convince him to leave his wife to get gurgled or join her while she masturbates inside you and then digest them both.

Alternatively you can offer to eat her husband for her so she can inherit his fortune. She seduces him, you get the drop on him and eat him. She then asks if you'll be her new husband and you live out your days in the lap of luxury and sire a clan of (Lady Dimitrescu-esc) giant ghouls that rapidly depopulate the human population of the city (Ogress ending)


While it may take some work, I think you’re really onto something here!
I won’t be able to make all of your ideas fit, her unbirthing the player for example just wouldn’t work given the world I’ve created, maybe they could try to get it to work and have fun failing (the player only fits in halfway for instance).
I like the idea of her being very easy to seduce at first, but needing some work to reach her ending, and I like the idea of her husband making an appearance, it’ll be different than what I usually write.

Either way, I’m definitely adding your Ogress to the NPC list!



Awesome! Im glad you liked the idea!

Question: How big are ogres in your universe? I was picturing her and her husband at about 10-15ft tall when I thought up this idea, so I'm not sure if that makes them too big to be ogres or if they'd be technically giants instead.

I was also thinking of the husband as a bit effeminate and not that well-endowed (which the reason the Ogress is looking for someone like yourself the have fun with).Obviously its your story, do what you like, I was just refining some of my initial thoughts after pondering them in the backround all day
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby Brpdchainsaw » Sat May 29, 2021 4:57 am

Soroxas77 wrote:It seems weird that apparently ghouls are not undead in your setting.

Well my original inspiration for the Ghouls was this picture https://aryion.com/g4/view/554878, of course going back to it to get the link I can now see the "undead pred" tag.
That said, according to Wikipedia, the original mythological Ghouls weren't undead, they only hung around graveyards to eat the corpses, so I guess my Ghouls can stay alive.

slimjam wrote:Awesome! Im glad you liked the idea!

Question: How big are ogres in your universe? I was picturing her and her husband at about 10-15ft tall when I thought up this idea, so I'm not sure if that makes them too big to be ogres or if they'd be technically giants instead.

I was also thinking of the husband as a bit effeminate and not that well-endowed (which the reason the Ogress is looking for someone like yourself the have fun with).Obviously its your story, do what you like, I was just refining some of my initial thoughts after pondering them in the backround all day

Ogres in my universe are about 7-8 feet tall, I'm guessing you probably watched the porn film in the prologue and assumed she was larger.
What I might do is make your character a Giantess instead of an Ogress, that way I could make her the height you expected.
My basic plan for the character so far is this, the Ogres/Giants live up north and are embroiled in a war against the Snow-Elves, they've been trying to breed as many soldiers as they can get but the one who comes to the hotel is getting bored of only having procreational sex and wants a little fun instead, her husband would be some kind of war-chief which is why the player ends up ruling their army after you eat him.
I also thought that she could be covered in rune tattoos that have effects on her body, such as making her more fertile and stretchy (so I can add the unbirthing scene), one of the magics affecting the Ogress/Giantess could make it so her babies are born almost fully developed (nearly adult size, basically how it works in GooInABox's Amalgamation RPG), that way the player could really build up a massive army of daughters in the ending without it needing to take years.
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby slimjam » Sat May 29, 2021 6:01 am

Brpdchainsaw wrote:
Soroxas77 wrote:It seems weird that apparently ghouls are not undead in your setting.

Well my original inspiration for the Ghouls was this picture https://aryion.com/g4/view/554878, of course going back to it to get the link I can now see the "undead pred" tag.
That said, according to Wikipedia, the original mythological Ghouls weren't undead, they only hung around graveyards to eat the corpses, so I guess my Ghouls can stay alive.

slimjam wrote:Awesome! Im glad you liked the idea!

Question: How big are ogres in your universe? I was picturing her and her husband at about 10-15ft tall when I thought up this idea, so I'm not sure if that makes them too big to be ogres or if they'd be technically giants instead.

I was also thinking of the husband as a bit effeminate and not that well-endowed (which the reason the Ogress is looking for someone like yourself the have fun with).Obviously its your story, do what you like, I was just refining some of my initial thoughts after pondering them in the backround all day

Ogres in my universe are about 7-8 feet tall, I'm guessing you probably watched the porn film in the prologue and assumed she was larger.
What I might do is make your character a Giantess instead of an Ogress, that way I could make her the height you expected.
My basic plan for the character so far is this, the Ogres/Giants live up north and are embroiled in a war against the Snow-Elves, they've been trying to breed as many soldiers as they can get but the one who comes to the hotel is getting bored of only having recreational sex and wants a little fun instead, her husband would be some kind of war-chief which is why the player ends up ruling their army after you eat him.
I also thought that she could be covered in rune tattoos that have effects on her body, such as making her more fertile and stretchy (so I can add the unbirthing scene), one of the magics affecting the Ogress/Giantess could make it so her babies are born almost fully developed (nearly adult size, basically how it works in GooInABox's Amalgamation RPG), that way the player could really build up a massive army of daughters in the ending without it needing to take years.



That sounds even better than my initial idea. I can't wait to see the finished product! :-D
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby Brpdchainsaw » Sat May 29, 2021 6:47 am

slimjam wrote:That sounds even better than my initial idea. I can't wait to see the finished product! :-D

And I can’t wait to write it, unfortunately I’ve got two other characters to do before I get to yours, but it will hopefully be worth the wait.
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby slimjam » Sat May 29, 2021 11:44 pm

So I have an idea for another encounter.
I understand if you're only doing 1 suggestion per person, but I figured I'd put it forward and you can pick your favorite to put in.

So anyway this next one could be called many things;
The Nauseous Naga/ The Bloated Boa/ The Soylent Serpent/ The VP Viper

The player receives a call to go to the floor of rooms that have all been rented out to employees of Soylent Incorporated for a team building retreat/seminar. The Soylent corporation is an international company specializing in food production. From vegetables to meat to fish, if someone eats it Soylent makes it. The company has been in the news recently over rumors that they may be working on cloning technology for the purposes of making docile clones of civil species specifically as food for monster species.

The VP/Human Resources Director of Soylent, who is leading the retreat, has requested assistance from a monster on staff.

The player arrives to the executive suite to find a green, very large, very lumpy, very moving snakeskin bag on the bed. Groans, moans, belches and muffled screams fill the room. On comming around to the side it is revealed to be the Naga/Liama VP with 2 very full stomachs.

Closer inspection of the room reveals a camcorder on a tripod that the Naga is recording herself with as proof of termination for the unfortunate employees. On the other size of the bed (bound, gagged and partially still paralyzed by the naga's venom) are 5 very chubby, perfectly identical, snow white, mouse girls (the last of the first batch of prototype clone meals with much more free will and desire to live than is appropriate).

Basically there were some scientists, staff, and test subjects that objected to the cloning project's main purpose as a food source for preds. This retrEATwas arranged prevent any more info leaks to the press and avoid having to pay severance packages by making the problem employees go away quietly.

The problem is that they are not at all going quietly and the Naga complains (in between belches) of intense stomach pain. It's no wonder as it looks like she has about 15 people of various shapes, sizes, and activity levels in her serpent stomach, split between fighting her stomach, fighting each other, and fucking. The 3-4 in her human stomach are currently much less active but that seems to be changing quickly. It seems she bit off more than she could chew, as it were.

The serpent begs for any help you can give her in terms of digestive relief as she still has to eat and be done digesting the five mouse girls (plus everone she's already eaten) by checkout tomorrow as she has a flight to catch

At this point you can:
Massage her to help her stomachs settle and go on with your day
Offer to eat the mouse girls for her and possibly have sex with her afterwards
Offer her a drink (of your semen) to drown the survivors (multiple drinks may be necessary)

Naga ending:
After having multiple drinks of your semen the VP goes right to sleep like she just drank gallons of warm milk. You decide to eat her and manage to do so due to her extreme sluggishness.
You then struggle to stuff yourself with the 5 mouse girls (if you so choose), not wanting to leave any witnesses.
A few days later you get a call from the president of Soylent offing you the VP's job (since you ate her), turns out that camcorder was broadchasing.
Skip forward a year and about 1500 live meals and you're sitting in your new corner office at Soylent HQ after gaining a significant amount of weight. You lament on how small your chair feels (in reality your butt got huuuge, as did the rest of you) but you suppose that's what happens when your official job is just to eat people (nosey reporters, disgruntled employees, company mergers, new product testing and so on). You're basically a BBW at this point.

If you choose to spare the mouse girls, they thank you with an orgy and you carry on with your day after digesting the Naga. You would not get a new job out of it as Soylent finds itself embroiled in scandal, now.


Also, for reference, I'm picturing a Naga/Liama(idk the difference) as a creature with the upper torso and skin of a human and a snake lower body and scales starting at the waist. Total length from top of head to tip of tail would be about 15-20ft

Last question: ever though about having some kind of weight gain system that you can check to see how fat you are and where. The more things you eat (the bunnies) and the bigger they are the (the minotaur), the more weight you gain. Maybe something done during the interludes like when you talk to the mayor or your warden.
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby Brpdchainsaw » Sun May 30, 2021 4:06 am

Okay, I've got a lot to get through here.

slimjam wrote:So I have an idea for another encounter.
I understand if you're only doing 1 suggestion per person, but I figured I'd put it forward and you can pick your favorite to put in.

There's no limit to the amount of suggestions you can make, if there's any overflow or ideas I don't think I can use (like your earlier suggestion for the Perturbed Grad Student), then I might put them all together in the bonus content, they probably won't be as detailed as the main game NPC's, but they'll still be there.

slimjam wrote:So anyway this next one could be called many things;
The Nauseous Naga/ The Bloated Boa/ The Soylent Serpent/ The VP Viper

The player receives a call to go to the floor of rooms that have all been rented out to employees of Soylent Incorporated for a team building retreat/seminar. The Soylent corporation is an international company specializing in food production. From vegetables to meat to fish, if someone eats it Soylent makes it. The company has been in the news recently over rumors that they may be working on cloning technology for the purposes of making docile clones of civil species specifically as food for monster species.

The VP/Human Resources Director of Soylent, who is leading the retreat, has requested assistance from a monster on staff.

I really like the idea for Soylent Inc but I don't think I can have a whole floor taken up by them, I've been trying to keep the guests spread out over the hotel. There could be just one representative from Soylent though, visiting the city to find monster volunteers.

slimjam wrote:The player arrives to the executive suite to find a green, very large, very lumpy, very moving snakeskin bag on the bed. Groans, moans, belches and muffled screams fill the room. On comming around to the side it is revealed to be the Naga/Liama VP with 2 very full stomachs.

Closer inspection of the room reveals a camcorder on a tripod that the Naga is recording herself with as proof of termination for the unfortunate employees. On the other size of the bed (bound, gagged and partially still paralyzed by the naga's venom) are 5 very chubby, perfectly identical, snow white, mouse girls (the last of the first batch of prototype clone meals with much more free will and desire to live than is appropriate).

Basically there were some scientists, staff, and test subjects that objected to the cloning project's main purpose as a food source for preds. This retrEATwas arranged prevent any more info leaks to the press and avoid having to pay severance packages by making the problem employees go away quietly.

The problem is that they are not at all going quietly and the Naga complains (in between belches) of intense stomach pain. It's no wonder as it looks like she has about 15 people of various shapes, sizes, and activity levels in her serpent stomach, split between fighting her stomach, fighting each other, and fucking. The 3-4 in her human stomach are currently much less active but that seems to be changing quickly. It seems she bit off more than she could chew, as it were.

The serpent begs for any help you can give her in terms of digestive relief as she still has to eat and be done digesting the five mouse girls (plus everone she's already eaten) by checkout tomorrow as she has a flight to catch

Unfortunately, I've already got plans for a very well fed snake/serpent girl in Chapter 6 (The Chubby Wyrm), I don't think I could fit both of them in the Hotel at once. I do like the idea of these mouse girls however, I'm not usually into miniature prey but I think I could have some fun with these mice.

slimjam wrote:At this point you can:
Massage her to help her stomachs settle and go on with your day
Offer to eat the mouse girls for her and possibly have sex with her afterwards
Offer her a drink (of your semen) to drown the survivors (multiple drinks may be necessary)

Naga ending:
After having multiple drinks of your semen the VP goes right to sleep like she just drank gallons of warm milk. You decide to eat her and manage to do so due to her extreme sluggishness.
You then struggle to stuff yourself with the 5 mouse girls (if you so choose), not wanting to leave any witnesses.
A few days later you get a call from the president of Soylent offing you the VP's job (since you ate her), turns out that camcorder was broadchasing.
Skip forward a year and about 1500 live meals and you're sitting in your new corner office at Soylent HQ after gaining a significant amount of weight. You lament on how small your chair feels (in reality your butt got huuuge, as did the rest of you) but you suppose that's what happens when your official job is just to eat people (nosey reporters, disgruntled employees, company mergers, new product testing and so on). You're basically a BBW at this point.

If you choose to spare the mouse girls, they thank you with an orgy and you carry on with your day after digesting the Naga. You would not get a new job out of it as Soylent finds itself embroiled in scandal, now.

This is a really cool idea overall for an ending, but the Character Endings in HQ always result in the player starting a life with the character they met, can't really do that if she's been turned into assfat...


slimjam wrote:Also, for reference, I'm picturing a Naga/Liama(idk the difference) as a creature with the upper torso and skin of a human and a snake lower body and scales starting at the waist. Total length from top of head to tip of tail would be about 15-20ft

You've got the size and design spot on! Nagas and Lamias are the Male and Female of the same species, Naga=Male Lamia=Female.

slimjam wrote:Last question: ever though about having some kind of weight gain system that you can check to see how fat you are and where. The more things you eat (the bunnies) and the bigger they are the (the minotaur), the more weight you gain. Maybe something done during the interludes like when you talk to the mayor or your warden.

As far as I'm aware, there's no way to really keep track of stuff like that in the type of adventures I write, Quest lets you write either "Text Adventures" or "Gamebooks", my works are all Gamebooks which are a bit easier to make but you can't do as much with them. I was working on an actual Text Adventure a while ago where it would track your weight and your character (a slimegirl named Blueberry) would grow bigger or smaller depending on what you did, unfortunately that project turned out to be much more complicated than I expected and I ended up getting distracted from it when I started HQ3. I might return to it at a later date though.

Anyway, even if I can't get your original idea to work, I think I might be able to take some parts of it to make something else.
My variation on your idea is that a Sales Rep from Soylent Inc is staying at the hotel while she tries to sell her companies new product, Munchy Mice!
Munchy Mice are edible mouse girls that are small enough (5-8 inches tall) for anyone to enjoy, the Rep herself eats a few to demonstrate, and she wants the player to try some.
The player can agree to eat some Munchy Mice, due to the amount of experimental chemicals in the snack, the player will start to feel some side-effects.
-1 The Player starts feeling even hungrier than usual and will try to devour the Sales Rep as well as the rest of the Munchy Mice
-2 The Player starts to feel ridiculously horny, the Sales Rep feels responsible and offers to help using her body (and some of the Mice)
-3 Some other third side effect that's just meant to be silly, the Player starts hearing the Rep's speech in reverse or something.

If the Player decides to have sex with the Rep and the Munchy Mice without eating the Rep after, they'll lay back on the bed and spot a hidden camera in the ceiling, they could follow this upstairs and find a journalist or something trying to uncover the secrets of Soylent Inc, the player is offered a chance to do the right thing and help expose the companies secrets or they can eat the Journalist (maybe they could be a lamia as a reference to your original idea). After eating the journalist, the player is invited to join Soylent Inc like you suggested as a "Problem Solver", the Sales Rep is promoted to your assistant and you both spend your days eating all you want (She's still eating the Munchy Mice).

If you don't mind my changes then I can add this to the game in Chapter 6, if you're not a fan then I'm sure I can tweak them further until we're both happy.

And finally, you have some really good ideas. You might want to try writing some adventures of your own, I bet you'd be really good at it!
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby slimjam » Sun May 30, 2021 12:49 pm

Brpdchainsaw wrote:As far as I'm aware, there's no way to really keep track of stuff like that in the type of adventures I write, Quest lets you write either "Text Adventures" or "Gamebooks", my works are all Gamebooks which are a bit easier to make but you can't do as much with them. I was working on an actual Text Adventure a while ago where it would track your weight and your character (a slimegirl named Blueberry) would grow bigger or smaller depending on what you did, unfortunately that project turned out to be much more complicated than I expected and I ended up getting distracted from it when I started HQ3. I might return to it at a later date though.

Anyway, even if I can't get your original idea to work, I think I might be able to take some parts of it to make something else.
My variation on your idea is that a Sales Rep from Soylent Inc is staying at the hotel while she tries to sell her companies new product, Munchy Mice!
Munchy Mice are edible mouse girls that are small enough (5-8 inches tall) for anyone to enjoy, the Rep herself eats a few to demonstrate, and she wants the player to try some.
The player can agree to eat some Munchy Mice, due to the amount of experimental chemicals in the snack, the player will start to feel some side-effects.
-1 The Player starts feeling even hungrier than usual and will try to devour the Sales Rep as well as the rest of the Munchy Mice
-2 The Player starts to feel ridiculously horny, the Sales Rep feels responsible and offers to help using her body (and some of the Mice)
-3 Some other third side effect that's just meant to be silly, the Player starts hearing the Rep's speech in reverse or something.

If the Player decides to have sex with the Rep and the Munchy Mice without eating the Rep after, they'll lay back on the bed and spot a hidden camera in the ceiling, they could follow this upstairs and find a journalist or something trying to uncover the secrets of Soylent Inc, the player is offered a chance to do the right thing and help expose the companies secrets or they can eat the Journalist (maybe they could be a lamia as a reference to your original idea). After eating the journalist, the player is invited to join Soylent Inc like you suggested as a "Problem Solver", the Sales Rep is promoted to your assistant and you both spend your days eating all you want (She's still eating the Munchy Mice).

If you don't mind my changes then I can add this to the game in Chapter 6, if you're not a fan then I'm sure I can tweak them further until we're both happy.

And finally, you have some really good ideas. You might want to try writing some adventures of your own, I bet you'd be really good at it!


I'm cool with this, but there are a few tweaks I would suggest:

I'm not sure how interesting a generic human sales rep (or a cat or a lamia) could be (you've already got a few humans [and a cat and serpent] on the roster). Why don't we take the whole clones thing a step further? Instead of a human let's make the sales rep a full sized mouse girl selling miniature clones of herself (she volunteered her genetic material for an early trial run) [ She still loves the snacks as she has always wanted to be a pred but her nature as a prey species has made her internally conflicted. With munchy mice all her dreams have come true.] I also feel this would make her a better secretary in her ending. Why does a newcomer get the fancy title (HR director, Public Relations director, Risk Mitigation director, Professional People Eater, ect), executive office, big salary, 3-6 live meals a day and a secretary to fuck, if the sales rep themself is a predator species that has been with the company for a while and could have plugged the leak themself?

For option 1:
If miniature prey isn't your thing why don't we lean into the whole wacky super science thing with "dehydrated munchy mice, just add water!". Basically they are normal miniature mouse clones (that walk and talk and are completely normal other than being 8inches tall and possibly want to be eaten) (as we have been discussing) until they are swallowed at which point they grow to the size of the original mouse girl in the player's belly. This will make the player very large and practically immobile in option 1 when they loose control and eat the sales rep and her sample case of 30-50 munchy mice.

For option 2/the Soylent ending:
I'm cool with the journalist being a Naga or Lamia or alternatively a team of Civil Species Rights activists looking to take down the corporation (think hippies or PETA in the same vein as the religious rapper). If you opt to go for the espionage team, the player could lie and say that a squad of G-men is searching the hotel for them but that the player is willing to smuggle their 4-5 person team plus all of their recording equipment out in the player' belly. Instead they just get smuggled back to the sales rep's room to be digested.

For option 3:
If we're going silly why not have the player suffer an uncontrollable cum geyser. Basically the player cums unstoppably for 15-30 minutes. The sales rep, thinking quickly, if not hard, will try to prevent a mess and will try to catch it all in the only place she can think of, her mouth (she's a bit dim but not as bad as the harpy). She will be fairly successful in her effort but will basically be the size of Violet Beauregard in Willy Wonka afterwards. (I know alot of your cum inflation scenes typically involve the recipient leaking from the other end but maybe she's got a really good butplug [or maybe it's a poor quality one and after enough pressure has been built up behind it, it gets fired out of the sales rep like a cannonball, passes through the open window, and hits the building across the street])

I suppose the enounter will need a different name like The Miniature Mouse/Mice, The Soylent Subject/Saleswoman, or Digestion of a Saleswoman

Thank you for the complement! I've thought about writing some of my own stuff but my creativity comes in fits and starts and usually peters out not long after I have a really good idea and things all start to blur together. Im happy to contribute in small ways to other people's stuff since one or 2 good ideas are usually all I've got. Maybe that will change in the future! I've got 2 other people's projects I'm trying to contribute to, so we'll see.
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby slimjam » Sun May 30, 2021 1:14 pm

Also could you post the link to your blueberry game? It sounds very interesting.
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby Brpdchainsaw » Mon May 31, 2021 1:53 am

slimjam wrote:I'm cool with this, but there are a few tweaks I would suggest:

I'm not sure how interesting a generic human sales rep (or a cat or a lamia) could be (you've already got a few humans [and a cat and serpent] on the roster). Why don't we take the whole clones thing a step further? Instead of a human let's make the sales rep a full sized mouse girl selling miniature clones of herself (she volunteered her genetic material for an early trial run) [ She still loves the snacks as she has always wanted to be a pred but her nature as a prey species has made her internally conflicted. With munchy mice all her dreams have come true.] I also feel this would make her a better secretary in her ending. Why does a newcomer get the fancy title (HR director, Public Relations director, Risk Mitigation director, Professional People Eater, ect), executive office, big salary, 3-6 live meals a day and a secretary to fuck, if the sales rep themself is a predator species that has been with the company for a while and could have plugged the leak themself?

Yes yes yes YES! I LOVE the idea of the Rep being a Mouse herself, I might make her an early prototype of the Munchy Mice that grew too big and too intelligent (as in she can speak, not that she's actually smart), Soylent Inc didn't know what to do with her so they stuck her in a sales job and hopes that she'd get eaten so they'd be rid of her.

slimjam wrote:For option 1:
If miniature prey isn't your thing why don't we lean into the whole wacky super science thing with "dehydrated munchy mice, just add water!". Basically they are normal miniature mouse clones (that walk and talk and are completely normal other than being 8inches tall and possibly want to be eaten) (as we have been discussing) until they are swallowed at which point they grow to the size of the original mouse girl in the player's belly. This will make the player very large and practically immobile in option 1 when they loose control and eat the sales rep and her sample case of 30-50 munchy mice.

Like I said, I'm not normally into Miniture prey, but I've been thinking a lot about the Munchy Mice and I've come up with a few idea's for them already, mostly that the Rep keeps eating them as she's talking to you, I can't really have them grow bigger if she's doing that. I also thought that the Munchy Mice would have way more calories in them than you'd expect, so anyone who eats them will get grow pretty fat really quickly. There will of course be an option after eating the Rep to pig out on the remaining Munchy Mice.

slimjam wrote:For option 2/the Soylent ending:
I'm cool with the journalist being a Naga or Lamia or alternatively a team of Civil Species Rights activists looking to take down the corporation (think hippies or PETA in the same vein as the religious rapper). If you opt to go for the espionage team, the player could lie and say that a squad of G-men is searching the hotel for them but that the player is willing to smuggle their 4-5 person team plus all of their recording equipment out in the player' belly. Instead they just get smuggled back to the sales rep's room to be digested.

I definitely like the plan to have a knock-off PETA trying to sabotage the Rep, this is going in for sure!

slimjam wrote:For option 3:
If we're going silly why not have the player suffer an uncontrollable cum geyser. Basically the player cums unstoppably for 15-30 minutes. The sales rep, thinking quickly, if not hard, will try to prevent a mess and will try to catch it all in the only place she can think of, her mouth (she's a bit dim but not as bad as the harpy). She will be fairly successful in her effort but will basically be the size of Violet Beauregard in Willy Wonka afterwards. (I know alot of your cum inflation scenes typically involve the recipient leaking from the other end but maybe she's got a really good butplug [or maybe it's a poor quality one and after enough pressure has been built up behind it, it gets fired out of the sales rep like a cannonball, passes through the open window, and hits the building across the street])

I like the idea of the player just cumming like crazy and the Rep trying to stop it. One slight problem is your ballistic buttplug suggestion, I've already got a scene like that planned elsewhere and I don't want to use the same joke twice, still a really good idea though.

slimjam wrote:I suppose the enounter will need a different name like The Miniature Mouse/Mice, The Soylent Subject/Saleswoman, or Digestion of a Saleswoman

Thank you for the complement! I've thought about writing some of my own stuff but my creativity comes in fits and starts and usually peters out not long after I have a really good idea and things all start to blur together. Im happy to contribute in small ways to other people's stuff since one or 2 good ideas are usually all I've got. Maybe that will change in the future! I've got 2 other people's projects I'm trying to contribute to, so we'll see.

Well don't give away all your ideas, maybe keep notes so you can use them when you've got enough, that's what I do!

slimjam wrote:Also could you post the link to your blueberry game? It sounds very interesting.

There isn't much to do yet, but I think it's all working properly, have fun!
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby slimjam » Mon May 31, 2021 9:15 pm

So I'm going to try for a hat trick with one more suggestion:

The Barking Bodybuilder, The Howling Hulk, The Ripped Retriever, The Slobbering Strongwoman, the Wagging Wrestler, The Depressed Dog/Doggo

The assistance of a monster is requested by a famous bodybuilder/wrestler that has been out of the news for about a year following a surprising loss and career ending injury.

On arrival the player is greeted by a 6-7ft Golden Retriever girl (or any dog girl really [I just like golden retrievers]) clad in nothing but a hot pink bikini. She is incredibly muscular; abs, pecs, the works. She has just enough fat to have A-B cups but otherwise she doesn't have a scrap of fat on her, her gigantic ass and thighs are 100% muscle.
Optionally she might have 6-8 sets of nipples and breasts (starting on her pecs and one on each ab) requiring her to wear 3-4 bikini tops

Her request is simple and point blank, she wants you to eat her (though she asks in a rather sad and morose way [puppy dog eyes]).

1) eat) the player eats her without hesitation

2) sex) the player has options to seduce her, one that succeeds (perhaps an option involving peanut butter and the player's genitals), one that has the player rebuffed, one where the player dies: "whip it out" (the death is accomplished by the player getting their head crushed [or neck snapped or just suffocated if thats too gory] by the dog girl's thighs). She can the be eaten after sex

3) work) ask why
The dog girl explains that her dreams and passion are both dead as she too, will be regardless of if the player eats her or not.
Her dreams (of retiring from wrestling/bodybuilding to start a family) died when she learned she was infertile after years of intense physical training and her boyfriend left her after learning of this (he also wanted children and left her when she couldn't provide them) shortly before her last fight/competition.

Her passion for wrestling/bodybuilding died with her last loss. Being devastated by the 1-2 punch of bad news, she made a rash bet with her last opponent (a massive sumo wrestler husky/wolf girl [possibly with a Russian accent <Rocky IV reference>]) that the winner gets to eat the loser. Being sporting, the husky/wolf gave the dog girl a year to get her affairs in order. The Dog girl decided to use that time to further the cause of wrestling/body building (being unable to compete due to her injury), only to learn the dark truth that most up and coming athletes are using performance enhancing drugs (including the husky/wolf). The league doesn't care as it makes for better entertainment and it seems like everything she loved about her sport is a sham.

She explains that none of that matters now as her time is up and the husky is coming today to eat her. She felt cheated by the fact the husky won unfairly and wanted to deny the husky the satisfaction of eating her. She knew she couldn't win a fight with her injury so figured one stomach was as good as any other. The player can get her out of the deal by eating the husky (technically it won't be breaking the deal if the husky never shows). To get this done, the player shows up to the husky's room and gets her very drunk with a complementary keg/booze cart. Missteps here can get the player sat on (and suffocated) or eaten by the husky girl (if eaten the dog girl joins the player soon after [possibly along with other employees <desk girl>] they then have pre-digestion sex in the husky girl). The player eats the husky after she passes out and calls down the dog girl for a massage/fun (possibly involving peanut butter).

With her freedom returned and hope restored thanks to you the dog girl vows to clean up her sport and return honor to wrestling/body building by any means necessary but she can't do it alone...

Skip forward 2 years and the player is now 7-8ft tall and super ripped (about 2x what the dog girl was). The player has made quite a name for herself under the tutalidge of the dog girl. The player's natural strength was only enhanced by her training and an extremely high protein diet (many of the performance enhancing drug users began disappearing under mysterious circumstances). At first the training was grueling, with the dog girl winning every sparring/training exercise. However, as the player grew in size, strength and skill, the dog girl soon found herself getting pinned (and stuffed with cock) more frequently until it became a nightly occurrence. That is why she is now huge and due any day with a litter of 12 ghoul-pups. She is overjoyed, not only be a mom, but to have also revitalized her beloved sport.

And they lived happily ever after.
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby MadEnough » Mon May 31, 2021 10:03 pm

How about "the old flame?" Another ghoul from the maid's past/hometown who came to visit and potentially have some fun with them. Calls the desk girl asking for you by name, says they know you. Possibly had a previous run-in with authorities over their own vore habits. They could either be hoping for some "quality alone time," or have a plan to raid the next room over for some prey. The prey can be something simple like 3 generic college girls getting drunk. First choice might be whether you remember them fondly, bitterly, or don't remember them, which can open up different outcomes.

Possible options/outcomes
Catch-up sex--stay and have sex with the other ghoul. Choice of who is pitching, or position affected by your memory. After sex, choices that result in a friendly goodbye, a stay-together ending, voring the ghoul, or getting vored.

Vore raid--head next door. Choice of voring the girls immediately or having fun first. Either way, there is 1 extra girl so no even split. If you eat the extra girl, and don't remember the other ghoul fondly, they eat you for being greedy. If they eat the extra and you don't remember them fondly, you can eat them for being greedy, or have dominant sex after which you can eat them. If remember fondly, options for willing sex or willing vore as pred or prey.
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby Brpdchainsaw » Tue Jun 01, 2021 7:39 am

slimjam wrote:So I'm going to try for a hat trick with one more suggestion:

The Barking Bodybuilder, The Howling Hulk, The Ripped Retriever, The Slobbering Strongwoman, the Wagging Wrestler, The Depressed Dog/Doggo

The assistance of a monster is requested by a famous bodybuilder/wrestler that has been out of the news for about a year following a surprising loss and career ending injury.

On arrival the player is greeted by a 6-7ft Golden Retriever girl (or any dog girl really [I just like golden retrievers]) clad in nothing but a hot pink bikini. She is incredibly muscular; abs, pecs, the works. She has just enough fat to have A-B cups but otherwise she doesn't have a scrap of fat on her, her gigantic ass and thighs are 100% muscle.
Optionally she might have 6-8 sets of nipples and breasts (starting on her pecs and one on each ab) requiring her to wear 3-4 bikini tops

Her request is simple and point blank, she wants you to eat her (though she asks in a rather sad and morose way [puppy dog eyes]).

1) eat) the player eats her without hesitation

2) sex) the player has options to seduce her, one that succeeds (perhaps an option involving peanut butter and the player's genitals), one that has the player rebuffed, one where the player dies: "whip it out" (the death is accomplished by the player getting their head crushed [or neck snapped or just suffocated if thats too gory] by the dog girl's thighs). She can the be eaten after sex

3) work) ask why
The dog girl explains that her dreams and passion are both dead as she too, will be regardless of if the player eats her or not.
Her dreams (of retiring from wrestling/bodybuilding to start a family) died when she learned she was infertile after years of intense physical training and her boyfriend left her after learning of this (he also wanted children and left her when she couldn't provide them) shortly before her last fight/competition.

Her passion for wrestling/bodybuilding died with her last loss. Being devastated by the 1-2 punch of bad news, she made a rash bet with her last opponent (a massive sumo wrestler husky/wolf girl [possibly with a Russian accent <Rocky IV reference>]) that the winner gets to eat the loser. Being sporting, the husky/wolf gave the dog girl a year to get her affairs in order. The Dog girl decided to use that time to further the cause of wrestling/body building (being unable to compete due to her injury), only to learn the dark truth that most up and coming athletes are using performance enhancing drugs (including the husky/wolf). The league doesn't care as it makes for better entertainment and it seems like everything she loved about her sport is a sham.

She explains that none of that matters now as her time is up and the husky is coming today to eat her. She felt cheated by the fact the husky won unfairly and wanted to deny the husky the satisfaction of eating her. She knew she couldn't win a fight with her injury so figured one stomach was as good as any other. The player can get her out of the deal by eating the husky (technically it won't be breaking the deal if the husky never shows). To get this done, the player shows up to the husky's room and gets her very drunk with a complementary keg/booze cart. Missteps here can get the player sat on (and suffocated) or eaten by the husky girl (if eaten the dog girl joins the player soon after [possibly along with other employees <desk girl>] they then have pre-digestion sex in the husky girl). The player eats the husky after she passes out and calls down the dog girl for a massage/fun (possibly involving peanut butter).

With her freedom returned and hope restored thanks to you the dog girl vows to clean up her sport and return honor to wrestling/body building by any means necessary but she can't do it alone...

Skip forward 2 years and the player is now 7-8ft tall and super ripped (about 2x what the dog girl was). The player has made quite a name for herself under the tutalidge of the dog girl. The player's natural strength was only enhanced by her training and an extremely high protein diet (many of the performance enhancing drug users began disappearing under mysterious circumstances). At first the training was grueling, with the dog girl winning every sparring/training exercise. However, as the player grew in size, strength and skill, the dog girl soon found herself getting pinned (and stuffed with cock) more frequently until it became a nightly occurrence. That is why she is now huge and due any day with a litter of 12 ghoul-pups. She is overjoyed, not only be a mom, but to have also revitalized her beloved sport.

And they lived happily ever after.


Might keep this idea on the back burner for now just in case I get some other suggestions, but if I still have empty slots by the time I've reached chapter 7 then I'll definitely add this one in.
I could probably make the Dog People a subspecies of Kobold (Hyena People introduced in HQ2), this would mean that she'd be a futa (all female Kobolds are).
I might have to change the species of the opponent, there's only a select few species in Hungry Quest that can actually swallow prey the same size as them (Ghouls, Naga/Lamias & Sirens, but a big enough monster like a Minotaur would probably be able to swallow a Goblin just fine), I could probably make the opponent a hybrid or something to allow for this plot point (half-siren perhaps).

MadEnough wrote:How about "the old flame?" Another ghoul from the maid's past/hometown who came to visit and potentially have some fun with them. Calls the desk girl asking for you by name, says they know you. Possibly had a previous run-in with authorities over their own vore habits. They could either be hoping for some "quality alone time," or have a plan to raid the next room over for some prey. The prey can be something simple like 3 generic college girls getting drunk. First choice might be whether you remember them fondly, bitterly, or don't remember them, which can open up different outcomes.

Possible options/outcomes
Catch-up sex--stay and have sex with the other ghoul. Choice of who is pitching, or position affected by your memory. After sex, choices that result in a friendly goodbye, a stay-together ending, voring the ghoul, or getting vored.

Vore raid--head next door. Choice of voring the girls immediately or having fun first. Either way, there is 1 extra girl so no even split. If you eat the extra girl, and don't remember the other ghoul fondly, they eat you for being greedy. If they eat the extra and you don't remember them fondly, you can eat them for being greedy, or have dominant sex after which you can eat them. If remember fondly, options for willing sex or willing vore as pred or prey.

Great ideas here, unfortunately I've already got something that's 90% the same as this planned already.
Another Ghoul will book into the hotel and is hoping to eat some employees before fleeing the city (she doesn't have a pred licence), she tries to eat you as soon as you enter the room but gives up when she notices you're a Ghoul too (Ghouls can't digest other Ghouls), you'll have the option to swallow eachother just for a bit of fun, or you can take her out hunting for thugs in the back alleys behind the hotel.
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby slimjam » Tue Jun 01, 2021 5:59 pm

Brpdchainsaw wrote:
slimjam wrote:So I'm going to try for a hat trick with one more suggestion:

The Barking Bodybuilder, The Howling Hulk, The Ripped Retriever, The Slobbering Strongwoman, the Wagging Wrestler, The Depressed Dog/Doggo

The assistance of a monster is requested by a famous bodybuilder/wrestler that has been out of the news for about a year following a surprising loss and career ending injury.

On arrival the player is greeted by a 6-7ft Golden Retriever girl (or any dog girl really [I just like golden retrievers]) clad in nothing but a hot pink bikini. She is incredibly muscular; abs, pecs, the works. She has just enough fat to have A-B cups but otherwise she doesn't have a scrap of fat on her, her gigantic ass and thighs are 100% muscle.
Optionally she might have 6-8 sets of nipples and breasts (starting on her pecs and one on each ab) requiring her to wear 3-4 bikini tops

Her request is simple and point blank, she wants you to eat her (though she asks in a rather sad and morose way [puppy dog eyes]).

1) eat) the player eats her without hesitation

2) sex) the player has options to seduce her, one that succeeds (perhaps an option involving peanut butter and the player's genitals), one that has the player rebuffed, one where the player dies: "whip it out" (the death is accomplished by the player getting their head crushed [or neck snapped or just suffocated if thats too gory] by the dog girl's thighs). She can the be eaten after sex

3) work) ask why
The dog girl explains that her dreams and passion are both dead as she too, will be regardless of if the player eats her or not.
Her dreams (of retiring from wrestling/bodybuilding to start a family) died when she learned she was infertile after years of intense physical training and her boyfriend left her after learning of this (he also wanted children and left her when she couldn't provide them) shortly before her last fight/competition.

Her passion for wrestling/bodybuilding died with her last loss. Being devastated by the 1-2 punch of bad news, she made a rash bet with her last opponent (a massive sumo wrestler husky/wolf girl [possibly with a Russian accent <Rocky IV reference>]) that the winner gets to eat the loser. Being sporting, the husky/wolf gave the dog girl a year to get her affairs in order. The Dog girl decided to use that time to further the cause of wrestling/body building (being unable to compete due to her injury), only to learn the dark truth that most up and coming athletes are using performance enhancing drugs (including the husky/wolf). The league doesn't care as it makes for better entertainment and it seems like everything she loved about her sport is a sham.

She explains that none of that matters now as her time is up and the husky is coming today to eat her. She felt cheated by the fact the husky won unfairly and wanted to deny the husky the satisfaction of eating her. She knew she couldn't win a fight with her injury so figured one stomach was as good as any other. The player can get her out of the deal by eating the husky (technically it won't be breaking the deal if the husky never shows). To get this done, the player shows up to the husky's room and gets her very drunk with a complementary keg/booze cart. Missteps here can get the player sat on (and suffocated) or eaten by the husky girl (if eaten the dog girl joins the player soon after [possibly along with other employees <desk girl>] they then have pre-digestion sex in the husky girl). The player eats the husky after she passes out and calls down the dog girl for a massage/fun (possibly involving peanut butter).

With her freedom returned and hope restored thanks to you the dog girl vows to clean up her sport and return honor to wrestling/body building by any means necessary but she can't do it alone...

Skip forward 2 years and the player is now 7-8ft tall and super ripped (about 2x what the dog girl was). The player has made quite a name for herself under the tutalidge of the dog girl. The player's natural strength was only enhanced by her training and an extremely high protein diet (many of the performance enhancing drug users began disappearing under mysterious circumstances). At first the training was grueling, with the dog girl winning every sparring/training exercise. However, as the player grew in size, strength and skill, the dog girl soon found herself getting pinned (and stuffed with cock) more frequently until it became a nightly occurrence. That is why she is now huge and due any day with a litter of 12 ghoul-pups. She is overjoyed, not only be a mom, but to have also revitalized her beloved sport.

And they lived happily ever after.


Might keep this idea on the back burner for now just in case I get some other suggestions, but if I still have empty slots by the time I've reached chapter 7 then I'll definitely add this one in.
I could probably make the Dog People a subspecies of Kobold (Hyena People introduced in HQ2), this would mean that she'd be a futa (all female Kobolds are).
I might have to change the species of the opponent, there's only a select few species in Hungry Quest that can actually swallow prey the same size as them (Ghouls, Naga/Lamias & Sirens, but a big enough monster like a Minotaur would probably be able to swallow a Goblin just fine), I could probably make the opponent a hybrid or something to allow for this plot point (half-siren perhaps).

MadEnough wrote:How about "the old flame?" Another ghoul from the maid's past/hometown who came to visit and potentially have some fun with them. Calls the desk girl asking for you by name, says they know you. Possibly had a previous run-in with authorities over their own vore habits. They could either be hoping for some "quality alone time," or have a plan to raid the next room over for some prey. The prey can be something simple like 3 generic college girls getting drunk. First choice might be whether you remember them fondly, bitterly, or don't remember them, which can open up different outcomes.

Possible options/outcomes
Catch-up sex--stay and have sex with the other ghoul. Choice of who is pitching, or position affected by your memory. After sex, choices that result in a friendly goodbye, a stay-together ending, voring the ghoul, or getting vored.

Vore raid--head next door. Choice of voring the girls immediately or having fun first. Either way, there is 1 extra girl so no even split. If you eat the extra girl, and don't remember the other ghoul fondly, they eat you for being greedy. If they eat the extra and you don't remember them fondly, you can eat them for being greedy, or have dominant sex after which you can eat them. If remember fondly, options for willing sex or willing vore as pred or prey.

Great ideas here, unfortunately I've already got something that's 90% the same as this planned already.
Another Ghoul will book into the hotel and is hoping to eat some employees before fleeing the city (she doesn't have a pred licence), she tries to eat you as soon as you enter the room but gives up when she notices you're a Ghoul too (Ghouls can't digest other Ghouls), you'll have the option to swallow eachother just for a bit of fun, or you can take her out hunting for thugs in the back alleys behind the hotel.


Sound good to me!
Just a few tweaks I might suggest:

I'm not too familiar with the Hyena people (I should go back and play the 2nd game some more) but I would imagine they are dog-like enough. My only concern is that if the bodybuilder is going to be a hermaphrodite, what's to stop her from starting a family by knocking up a human woman (and not being nearly as devastated when facing her opponent and potentially not make a stupid bet about being eaten [presumably if the hyena won this bet, her opponent would have forked over a ton of cash or something])? She would have to be both impotent and infertile.

In terms of her sumo opponent:
What are sirens like in your world? Singing mermaids? If so I'm assuming they would be hybrid enough to survive on land? Perhaps a fat lamia would be better (not sure how close this gets to the chubby wyrm)? Alternatively this could be a case of buff lamia (in place of the hyena) vs fat lamia (for her opponent). What about the possibility of a half-ghoul husky/hyena (not ghoul enough to be digested) as her opponent?

Finally, if the player ends up with another herm character, I think it would be cool if part of their ending involved both the player and their partner end up pregnant by each other at the same time. This would probably work best for the ghoul ending because even if the Hyena girl isn't impotent, being pregnant personally, would be disruptive to the player's rising athletic career.
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby Brpdchainsaw » Wed Jun 02, 2021 2:01 am

slimjam wrote:Sound good to me!
Just a few tweaks I might suggest:

I'm not too familiar with the Hyena people (I should go back and play the 2nd game some more) but I would imagine they are dog-like enough. My only concern is that if the bodybuilder is going to be a hermaphrodite, what's to stop her from starting a family by knocking up a human woman (and not being nearly as devastated when facing her opponent and potentially not make a stupid bet about being eaten [presumably if the hyena won this bet, her opponent would have forked over a ton of cash or something])? She would have to be both impotent and infertile.

The Bodybuilder/Wrestler could be half infertile, she could probably get pregnant herself but would be unable to impregnate someone else. She didn't want to get pregnant though because it would disrupt her career, that way we can have her being upset that she never started a family and still have her carrying puppies by the ending.
As for why she challenged the Sumo, I was thinking that the Husky was found eating amateur wrestlers and that the Dog Girl challenged her in a fit of rage (explaining why she made the bad decision to let the Sumo eat her if she lost), basically she started the fight for honour rather than glory.

slimjam wrote:In terms of her sumo opponent:
What are sirens like in your world? Singing mermaids? If so I'm assuming they would be hybrid enough to survive on land? Perhaps a fat lamia would be better (not sure how close this gets to the chubby wyrm)? Alternatively this could be a case of buff lamia (in place of the hyena) vs fat lamia (for her opponent). What about the possibility of a half-ghoul husky/hyena (not ghoul enough to be digested) as her opponent?

Sirens are kind of like mermaids, but they have scaly legs instead of fish tails and they of course, swallow prey whole. If the Sumo Husky was half Siren then she'd probably have patches of scales throughout her fur along with the ability to eat people. She couldn't be half Ghoul though, all Ghouls are technically Half-Ghouls so she'd have the full range of Ghoul abilities, meaning you and her wouldn't be able to digest eachother.

slimjam wrote:Finally, if the player ends up with another herm character, I think it would be cool if part of their ending involved both the player and their partner end up pregnant by each other at the same time. This would probably work best for the ghoul ending because even if the Hyena girl isn't impotent, being pregnant personally, would be disruptive to the player's rising athletic career.

I think I prefer the original idea of just the Wrestler being knocked up while she coaches you, I was planning on the final scene of the ending being her cheering from the side-lines while you win a televised match or something like that.
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Re: [QUEST] Hungry Quest 3: Room Service. Version 0.2.1 24/0

Postby slimjam » Wed Jun 02, 2021 8:59 pm

Brpdchainsaw wrote:
slimjam wrote:Sound good to me!
Just a few tweaks I might suggest:

I'm not too familiar with the Hyena people (I should go back and play the 2nd game some more) but I would imagine they are dog-like enough. My only concern is that if the bodybuilder is going to be a hermaphrodite, what's to stop her from starting a family by knocking up a human woman (and not being nearly as devastated when facing her opponent and potentially not make a stupid bet about being eaten [presumably if the hyena won this bet, her opponent would have forked over a ton of cash or something])? She would have to be both impotent and infertile.

The Bodybuilder/Wrestler could be half infertile, she could probably get pregnant herself but would be unable to impregnate someone else. She didn't want to get pregnant though because it would disrupt her career, that way we can have her being upset that she never started a family and still have her carrying puppies by the ending.
As for why she challenged the Sumo, I was thinking that the Husky was found eating amateur wrestlers and that the Dog Girl challenged her in a fit of rage (explaining why she made the bad decision to let the Sumo eat her if she lost), basically she started the fight for honour rather than glory.

slimjam wrote:In terms of her sumo opponent:
What are sirens like in your world? Singing mermaids? If so I'm assuming they would be hybrid enough to survive on land? Perhaps a fat lamia would be better (not sure how close this gets to the chubby wyrm)? Alternatively this could be a case of buff lamia (in place of the hyena) vs fat lamia (for her opponent). What about the possibility of a half-ghoul husky/hyena (not ghoul enough to be digested) as her opponent?

Sirens are kind of like mermaids, but they have scaly legs instead of fish tails and they of course, swallow prey whole. If the Sumo Husky was half Siren then she'd probably have patches of scales throughout her fur along with the ability to eat people. She couldn't be half Ghoul though, all Ghouls are technically Half-Ghouls so she'd have the full range of Ghoul abilities, meaning you and her wouldn't be able to digest eachother.

slimjam wrote:Finally, if the player ends up with another herm character, I think it would be cool if part of their ending involved both the player and their partner end up pregnant by each other at the same time. This would probably work best for the ghoul ending because even if the Hyena girl isn't impotent, being pregnant personally, would be disruptive to the player's rising athletic career.

I think I prefer the original idea of just the Wrestler being knocked up while she coaches you, I was planning on the final scene of the ending being her cheering from the side-lines while you win a televised match or something like that.


Honestly, now that I think about it, a half dog half siren sounds..... Unappealing. Why not a pure breed siren sumo? But really, whatever you like best.

My intent with the infertility plot point was that it made her chances of a family extremely unlikely (instead of impossible) and it only happened because of the player's relentless application of her ghoulish, extra potent, super sperm. The whole pregnancy aspect was ment to be an under dog (pun intended) story as it were. Once again, your show, you make the call.

Everything else sounds good.


If you do plan to do anything peanut butter related with the Hyena girl, may I suggest the classic Reeses commercial gag: "hey you got your chocolate in my peanut butter! Well you got peanut butter all over my chocolate!" (Substitute chocolate with dick/balls lol)

Also I think I've been misunderstanding something this whole time. Were you making a separate race (the Dog people [as an offshoot of Hyenas]) which would include the wrestler as a golden retriever (as a herm) or would you be making the wrestler a Hyena (also herm)? Im totally fine either way. I just got confused somewhere along the way and I just want to be on the same page, sorry.
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