Striker wrote:Finished. Some of the issues were stated above. Some things not bugs just weird. Like the late kings door is locked but it does an open animation then tells you it is locked. You as the user have to much control of character between scenes. Meaning it is allowing the user to trigger scenes again by walking on panels and or triggering panels that would reset the scenes. You also can too easily trigger scenes out of order. I walked into princess room ran to fireplace and BOOM I am gone lol. She is kissing me on lips while I am chilling in the bathroom cause I ran past her etc. Scenes need to be not repeatable unless that is your intention and characters need to be locked in position you wish for the scenes to make sense. Scenes that would come later need to not be able to trigger unless the previous scene needed to make sense has already done so. You can either make it more staged or fine tune your code/triggers. Either will work but keep in mind that whichever method you use now should thematically be used for the future. So if one is too much work for you to pump out content look for easier solutions.
On the good note. Was actually laid out really well I could see the vision you wanted to portray on screen due to you attention to detail and layout choices. Being able to taunt people with dialogue was an interesting choice that I enjoyed as it made it feel like I could make her personality more in line with my fetish. Overall enjoyable minus the glitches and look forward to some more.
The only other suggestions I have are:
SFX need to be louder/music lower. The music is overpowering it drastically.
When characters are moving to location (Old man walking away to leave you with princess) was to slow and a bit annoying. You can make characters leave faster or you can simply design the layout to where the distance characters will cover be much shorter.
Great job and good luck!
Thank you for your suggestions and critique, I will take it all into consideration. And yes, I intended the choices to make it a bit more lifelike and test out how choices function ^.^ I'm going to make the future one more choice oriented and make it so that some options lead to later actions, like one idea I've had; you eat a willing person, and later on at some point you run into say their sister/brother who thinks you ate them in cold blood or something.
sampson wrote:so the fireplace scene is the last scene of the game ? because if not then I'm stuck and if someone can point out what to do
Yes, fireplace is end.
LAST TIME I STATE THIS; PLEASE READ!: FIREPLACE IS THE END OF GAME.
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also one other problem I'm facing is learning to make my own sprites since I don't want to use another persons not because I don't want to give credit or nothing, but because I feel like it's cheating or lazy.
