This game has tons of potential and hope to see it grow in the future. Here are my suggestions:
1-Give more attention to the vore scenes. As of right now, they are too short and anticlimactic. Maybe adding a post-digestiong part with weight gain.
2-Allow the player to feed themselves to the preds they have recruited in they have enough affinity.
3-Add sound effects to the vore scenes.
4-Add special events with the friendly preds, like sex, unbirth and that sort of thing.
I want to add on to this since I agree ^
5- The saving in this game seems unnecessarily out of the way, it's a vore game, I'm sure many of us would like to save before we walk into a scene or before we turn in a quest, there isn't really a benefit aesthetically or mechanically to making the player return to the chapel to spend the time going through text page text page text page, save, text page text page, no thanks, text page bye. It's tedious and only serves to turn players away from the game. (Note, this could easily be mitigated by making vore scenes in the chapel, make the character care about who they are saving with by making her either a pred, or a prey, or giving the nun a personality of some sort that we don't mind going back to her and being reminded about that scene and/or character)
6- The inescapable mobs in the forest, I went to test it after I failed to escape 8 times in a row and died. I went there three more times, failed 6-8 times each visit before dying without a single escape, so I have to assume it's either extremely low chance of escape or none at all, either way the mechanic is merely frustrating to deal with when you are trying to accomplish something aside from combat, and again, unnecessarily so. If they are inescapable, make it clear to the player [can't escape this fight] so they aren't spamming escape just to be denied over and over and over. Also the bind mechanic from the spiders seems to be indefinite? I had a player stuck for the entire fight, 6 or 7 rounds before I killed the spiders and they never lost that debuff, again, an unnecessarily unfair and frustrating mechanic for your players to get tired of, especially when they can bind everyone in your party.
7- Healing at the inn is rather expensive it seems, 150 for a 3 person party to heal? with the really small health pools this seems like a steep price when quests only give you enough money to heal 2-3 times, out of combat. Having inescapable combat and a forced/expensive healing system can be extremely tedious. It feels like if you are trying to do a quest, you are better off quitting and reloading a save over and over and over rather than wasting your money and time fighting monsters or trying to escape them. It's not a great feeling having to come back from the chapel over and over again to try and get a quest or specific enemy to pop up during exploration.
8. potions heal for about as much as 1 hit from some enemies, sometimes less, they seem rather useless at the moment.
Games are certainly supposed to be challenging in some way or often times they aren't satisfying and can't really be called more than a visual novel (Which is also fine). That being said, the desire of your gamers isn't usually to be vehemently challenged as it is to experience the story you've created and in the case of vore games, this becomes even more about the story or vore scenes you've implemented. I just want to mention this to keep in mind because challenging your player with mechanics that are merely frustrating and don't add any flavor to the game is only going to push them away.
I want to be clear, these aren't criticism to say that the game is bad, I'm just trying to be constructive since there is a lot of potential in this game and I'd love to see where it goes, I plan to keep an eye out for each update =) I won't be offended in the least if you say "I don't agree with you at all, I'll keep doing it my way" Absolutely, it's your game, none of us can tell you how you have to make it. I'm just trying to give some unbiased feedback from a player who has played most of the games that have been posted on Eka's portal.
