I need ideas for a feral F/horse birthing a MUTO scene

[JJP158]

I've been trying to come up with a birth scene with a bit more action/spice and thought you lot might have ideas.
Main theme/idea of the scene/story is birth denial along with the pleasure/pain/discomfort/struggle of the mare having the large MUTO in her belly along with trying to birth such a large un-equine shaped creature. I came up with a decent scene but feel like it needs something more... Yall got any interesting ideas I could throw in to make the birth more interesting, difficult, pleasurable, or painful for the poor horse?

Note: The "child" is the MUTO(think that one godzilla monster but way smaller). The scene below is lacking some context as I didn't want to post the whole story idea so bare with me on that. Also this Idea isn't hyperpreg, I don't want the horse's belly to get any bigger as this is supposed to be the end result.

The scene I currently have written(not 100% done, more of a outline of events):
A month passes and the child has had another growth spurt, the mare's belly hangs beneath her(almost to her knees) and sways as she walks with the larger and denser child.
The child's shoving to alert its mother that it wants food is now a lunge that causes her belly to lurch in the direction the child is pointing and causing her to stumble. Her belly twinges with contractions as the child's body and limbs are seen as lumps on her belly as it shifts in its too tight environment. The mare hasn't managed to find enough food for the child again today and it makes its displeasure known by pushing against her belly hard causing it to deform sideways in shape before lunging the other direction causing her belly to throw itself that direction and swing back and forth. The mare lays down on her side to try and sleep while trying to ignore the child in her belly but is awoken from being nearly asleep by the child pushing its head as hard as it can against the top side of her belly with its limbs pressing on the ground side of her belly causing a large bulge on the side of her belly before a strong contraction forces the child back into a more comfortable position and allowing the mare to fall asleep.
The mare tries again to birth the child standing up this time remaining in her own little area near the tree branch she uses to feed the child, she strains as the child passes her pelvis as her legs are slightly apart but when she looks back the head isn't sticking out of her but rather a pair of legs and a bit of the bottom of the child. Unable to push more of the child out of her like that, she shuffles over to the tree she used to feed the child and uses it to push the child back in. The mare doesnt know how she can turn the child around but then gets an idea she tells the child it's food time as she pushes the branch further into her, the child knowing those sounds mean food tries to push itself into her opening but realizes it cant find it where its facing and tries to find it. The mare watches her belly as the child moves and shifts around causing it to sway and bulge, the child manges to find her opening and pushes through to try and bite whatever food is on the branch today. The mare begins to move away from the branch causing it to slide out, the child still trying to get food follows the branch and pushes itself further into her opening as she pushes as hard as she can. With great effort she manages to get the head past her hips with the shoulders slowly being forced through as well, she sighs in relief as she watches her belly shrink as the child finally slips out of her.

(I'm actually going to commission a writer to write my idea, if you are one and really like this idea PM me for the full story idea)

[sabrina23]

Hey JJP158, loving the visceral vibe of this scene so far! The swaying belly and the MUTO’s erratic movements really sell the struggle. To spice it up even more, how about adding a moment where the mare’s body instinctively fights against the birth? Like, as the MUTO’s jagged limbs start to emerge, her muscles clamp down involuntarily from the sheer alien sensation, think a brutal contraction that locks the creature halfway out, its claws scraping against her insides, causing a mix of sharp pain and an overwhelming, almost intoxicating pressure. The mare could stagger and thrash, torn between pushing it out and her body’s desperate attempt to keep it in, maybe even dragging herself against the rough ground or tree bark to force progress.

[JJP158]

Hey JJP158, loving the visceral vibe of this scene so far! The swaying belly and the MUTO’s erratic movements really sell the struggle. To spice it up even more, how about adding a moment where the mare’s body instinctively fights against the birth?

Thank you, that's not a bad idea and I will probably write out the scene with something like that in it to see how I like it before deciding to implement. If I end up thinking it wouldn't "vibe" with this finial scene there is a scene just before this one that it might work in a more birth denial capacity.(will share result, as scuffed as it may be)

Quick question tho, when you said "as the MUTO’s jagged limbs start to emerge" were you talking about the backwards birth or the one where she succeeds with a bit of editing?

raises notepad
Any further ideas to further the visceral vibe or belly struggle?

[JJP158]

Alright, I added some stuff and edited the scene a bit to have more stuff in it.

I am also working on a different version of the scene(story really) that has a misunderstanding happen earlier in the story that results in the mare thinking she needs to keep the MUTO child inside of her for a specific length of time(14ish months) to keep it safe instead of birthing it at the time when it is actually ready to be born(6ish months). This results in her "protecting" the child from a "early birth" several times while the child keeps trying to escape the mare's belly as it grows to big for it.

Anyway, this is the slightly scuffed edited version I wrote:

A month passes and the child has had another growth spurt, the mare's belly hangs beneath her(almost to her knees) and sways as she walks with the larger and denser child, getting food for the child is now a full time job which she is not always successful at, much to the child's displeasure with it often keeping it's large head in her opening until it gets food(rather uncomfortable instead of pleasurable) as well as doing other things to make its displeasure known.(such as trying to push all its limbs outwards causing a strong contraction to occur that pushes all the limbs back) The child's shoving to alert its mother that it wants food is now a lunge that causes her belly to lurch and bulge in the direction the child is pointing and causing her to stumble. Her belly is gripped with ineffectual contractions as the child's body and limbs are seen as lumps on her belly as it shifts in its too tight environment(a contour of the child is seen). The mare hasn't managed to find enough food for the child again today and it makes its displeasure known by pushing against her belly hard causing it to deform sideways in shape before lunging the other direction causing her belly to throw itself that direction and swing back and forth. The mare lays down on her side to try and sleep while trying to ignore the child and the contraction of her belly but is awoken from being nearly asleep by the child pushing its head as hard as it can against the top side of her belly with its limbs pressing on the ground side of her belly causing a large bulge on the side of her belly before a lengthy strong contraction slowly forces the child back into a more comfortable position and allowing the mare to fall asleep. However, what the mare didn't notice was when the child was forced back its head slid towards her ribs instead of hips meaning the child is now backwards. The mare tries again to birth the child standing up, this time remaining in her own little area near the tree branch she uses to feed the child, she strains as the child starts to spread her pelvis but when she looks back the head isn't sticking out of her but rather a pair of legs and a bit of the bottom of the child. Unable to push more of the child out of her like that, she shuffles over to the tree she used to feed the child and uses it to push the child back in. The mare doesn't know how she can turn the child around but then gets an idea she tells the child it's food time as she pushes the branch further into her, the child knowing those sounds mean food tries to push itself into her opening but is facing the wrong way and only causes her belly to painfully deform as it tries to push itself the wrong direction. The mare's belly contracts hard causing the child to stop pushing. She removes herself from the tree branch and thinks of another idea, she moves so that the branch is pressing against her belly and bumps the branch into the side of her belly so that it bumps the child. The child not liking it pushes back and causes a bulge to appear as its head presses against the side it got poked from. The mare then puts the branch in front of the head and moves forward while pressing her belly into the branch to push the head of the child back towards her pelvis.The mare watches her belly as it contorts as the child moves and shifts around causing it to bulge as the child is forcefully turned around, the child manages to find her opening and pushes its head into it. The mare begins to move away from the branch a bit worn out but eager to push the child out she tries to birth again. The child's larger forearms come out first but the birth slows to a stop when the head/shoulders get to the mare's hips, the pressure between her hips and tunnel grow with each push and stronger contraction. The child slowly begins to force her hips apart and slide through but the child does not like being squeezed like that as it hurts its shoulders so its sub arm's small claws start pushing against the pressure and scratching. The combination of the pressure in her hips, pain, and unnatural scrabbling of the child's claws in her tunnel causes her body to tense and grip down on the child, keeping it in place even as her belly tries to push it out. Her belly's contractions stall after giving one final very strong contraction, with the pressure pushing the child out no longer there; the pressure from the mare's hips on the shoulders of the child causes it to quickly slide back inside of her as her hips pull themselves back together. The pain from the small claws and her hips pulling back together cause the now exhausted mare to fall backwards as her rear legs give out, what is left of the child's arms still outside of her are shoved back inside of her on contact with the ground. The mare wants only to rest and go to sleep but the child in her belly is writhing and shoving her belly around, with no contractions to rein in the child's actions her belly painfully bulges and contorts. She gets up to go to her home, as she stumbles home her belly sways as she cringes against the child's movement as her belly jerks and lurches side to side as well as front and back. Once she reaches her home she lays down on her side to finally rest when the child decides to use its newfound ground contact to push against her belly causing it to bulge and painfully stretch as the child pushes hard in every direction she can only watch as her tight belly allows her to see the contours of the child move about. Eventually the mare's exhaustion wins out over the child's actions and she sleeps. The next day she wakes to a sore belly and a still child, happy for the reprieve she gets up and gets some water and food for herself. The child wakes soon after and causes her belly to sway as it lunges to one side wanting food only to be met with a brutally strong contraction that squeezes her belly tight enough to shove the head of the child into her tunnel. The mare cringes but does really wants it out of her, she goes to the same place as the day before and begins pushing and manages to push the head through her hips before getting stuck on the shoulders again. She widens her hind legs a bit and manages to jam the shoulders into her hips again but is unable to push past that, she awkwardly walks over to a fallen tree before putting the front of her belly against the tree and pushing forwards. Her hips slide apart over the shoulders as she gasps as her rear legs collapse again, her belly lands on the ground in front of the fallen tree and the force pops the shoulders through her hips, she sighs in relief as she watches her belly shrink as the child finally slips out of her. When she recovers and looks at the child she is stunned to see that the child's shoulders come up to her belly and finds its hard to imagine that it fit inside of her

[JJP158]

Alright so I re-wrote the OG scene and added more scene's to it. Enjoy those!
But scene 8 just seems kinda bland and generally lacking something... any ideas?


Scene 5:
A month passes and the mare counts down the days to the end of the month when the child will be ready to see the world, no longer in the danger the Queen described. The child has had another growth spurt, the mare's belly hangs beneath her(almost to her knees) and sways as she walks with the larger and denser child much to her enjoyment, getting food for the child is now a full time job which she is not always successful at, much to the child's displeasure with it sometimes keeping it's large head in her opening until it gets food(rather uncomfortable instead of pleasurable) as well as doing other things to make its displeasure known.(such as trying to push all its limbs outwards causing a strong contraction to occur that pushes all the limbs back) The child's shoving to alert its mother that it wants food is now a lunge that causes her belly to lurch and bulge in the direction the child is pointing(side to side or front and back) and causing her to stumble. Her belly is gripped with strong contractions that are rendered ineffectual by the mare resisting them as the child's body and limbs are seen as lumps on her belly as it shifts in its too tight environment(a contour of the child is seen). The mare hasn't managed to find enough food for the child again today and it makes its displeasure known by pushing against her belly hard causing it to deform sideways before lunging the other direction causing her belly to throw itself that direction and swing back and forth. Despite the discomfort and pain of the child's actions the mare loves the feeling of fullness in her belly as well as watching her belly sway, move, or bulge from the child's actions. The mare lays down on her side to try rest while trying to watching her belly shift as the child moves and the contraction of her belly but is startled from when the child pushes its head as hard as it can against the top side of her belly with its limbs pressing on the ground side causing a large bulge before a lengthy much stronger contraction slowly forces the child back into a more comfortable position. The mare slowly drifts off the sleep as her belly's movements calm down.

Scene 6:
The end of the month comes and the mare knows the time has come to allow the child out but despite the struggles she enjoys her belly a little too much and thinks a little longer wont hurt the child. The mare's belly vehemently disagrees with this and tries to birth the long overdue child once again and the child does their best to push themselves out as well. The strong contractions combined with the child's pushing manages to overcome the mare's resisting of her labor and the child starts exiting her womb. The child's larger forearms come out first but the birth slows to a stop when the head/shoulders get to the mare's hips as she holds them tight to keep the child in, the pressure between her hips and tunnel grow with each push from the child and stronger contraction. The child slowly begins to force her hips apart and slide through despite her efforts but the child does not like being squeezed like that as it hurts its shoulders so its sub arm's small claws start pushing against the pressure and scratching. The combination of the pressure in her hips, pain, and unnatural scrabbling of the child's claws in her tunnel causes her body to tense and grip down on the child, keeping it in place even as her belly tries to push it out. Her belly's muscles, weakened by the mare resisting them and their efforts to push out the child, cause the contractions to stall after giving one final very strong contraction. Her belly suddenly goes from rock hard to limp/loose and with the pressure pushing the child out no longer there; the pressure from the mare's hips on the shoulders of the child causes it to quickly slide back inside of her as her hips pull themselves back together. The pain from the small claws being dragged back in and her hips pulling back together causes the now exhausted mare to fall backwards as her rear legs give out, what is left of the child's arms still outside of her are shoved back inside of her on contact with the ground. The mare is happy she can keep her belly a little longer but wants only to rest after all that effort but the child in her belly is writhing and shoving her belly around, with no contractions to rein in the child's actions her belly bulges and contorts as the child moves about. She stumbles home with her belly swaying and lurching as she moans in some pleasure from the child's movement as her belly jerks and lurches side to side as well as front and back.

Once she reaches her home she lays down on her side to finally rest and watch her belly when the child decides to use its ground contact to push against the ground and lunge against her hips causing her belly to push towards her hips and spring back forward. The mare clenches her hips just in time to not have the child push through them but each lunge from the child causes some pain and loosens her grip a little more each time. The mare, not wanting the child to escape or strain her hips more, decides on trying something new. She tries to roll over and after a few attempts she manages to roll onto her back allowing her belly to be free of the ground as well as removing the child's solid footing. The child, confused by the sudden rotation of gravity, tries to reorient themselves causing her belly to bulge and painfully stretch as the child pushes hard to try and flip over. The mare watches on a bit turned on as her tight belly allows her to see the contours of the child move about. Eventually the mare's exhaustion wins out over the child's actions and she sleeps.
(Best image I could find of the relative size of the mare's belly at this point: https://e621.net/posts/5297160  )

The next day she wakes to a very sore belly and a still child, the child wakes soon after and causes her belly to jump as it lunges, wanting food and causing her to tip over onto her side. As she lays there she hears noises right behind her, she kicks on instinct and it connects with something that yelps. She stumbles to a standing position before noticing another wolf knocked out on the ground, she is happy that solution to the child's food issue is before her but is unsure if she can fit the wolf in. She decides to try anyway and carries the wolf to the branch before setting it on the branch and turning around and pushing the head of the wolf into her. She pulls more of the wolf in but once she gets to only having the wolf's hips out of her she can't pull the wolf in anymore, she pulls harder only to get a sudden sharp painful contraction from her aching belly that pushes the wolf out to its belly. Determined to get the wolf into her to feed the child and keep her belly a while longer she uses the branch to push the wolf in. Her belly expands with a full belly twinge of pain and as the wolf slips into her womb, she watches as the child struggles to move in her now very tight belly thinking she might have overdone it. But unable to do anything about it now she lays back down, rolls over onto her back, and enjoys watching her belly shift as the child moves about to eat.

Scene 7: (The reason this scene is separated from scene 8 is because 8 is a WIP and I want to keep this part as more scenes with the mare enjoying her belly on her back were wanted.)

Over the next month the child is having another growth spurt, by the end of the 1st week her belly seems to have stopped expanding or stretching and only grows tighter. The child's contours on her belly have become more defined and its movements more taxing for the mare's belly as it has refused to stretch to accommodate the child's more forceful movements. The child's lurching to alert the mare it is hungry causes her belly to sway less and the mare tofeel the force more prevalently as her belly doesn't absorb the impact as well causing her to stumble more often. But it does allow the mare to better see the child and enjoy watching the child over the week as it turns around in a nearly too tight space with its entire body being seen shifting along its surface. It's quite the struggle to get on her back now but once she manages she gets to enjoy watching her whole belly change shape as the child struggles against her belly to turn and roll over. She hopes the child will stop growing so fast so she can birth it when her belly muscles recover however.

Scene 8:
By the end of the 2nd week her belly has stiffened and has nearly no give, the child nearly unable to move as it is held tight by her belly. She can see the limbs of the child shifting along the side of her belly as it tries to move but can only shift a little. The child's lurching to alert the mare it is hungry only causes her belly to twitch due to the lack of room to move in her belly. Her belly is stiff and barely sways as it has little give to do so. The mare has to sleep standing up now as her belly is too stiff to lay it against the ground. She got on her back once and found that her belly was almost too stiff for her to roll back up to standing. The mare tries to birth the child but her belly muscles seemingly haven't recovered enough in 2 weeks to attempt a birth as they only lightly clench her belly for some reason. She will attempt it next week.
At the end of week 3 her belly is drum tight andthe child cannot move at all, when it tries to push against her belly nothing happens but the mare feeling the child try and push. But worse of all the child is not done growing and the pressure in her belly grows with each day. The mare knows she has overdone it now and should have birthed the child weeks ago but when she tries to push the child out she discovers she can't push the child out or even clench her belly because her muscles are stretched too much.
At the end of the month the mare has tried to birth the child every day this 4th week but can't even manage to get her belly to clench. Then one early morning as she is drinking water she feels something gives in her, the pressure in her belly seems to increase before something quickly slides out of her womb and down her tunnel, forced out by the pressure in her belly. The child's head is pushed into her tunnel from the pressure, its head is sitting halfway through her hips as the shoulders are resting against them. The mare sighs in relief as the pressure in her belly is lessened but does really want it out of her now, she goes to the same place she tried to birth before and begins pushing but only manages some light clenching from her belly and minor movement. Several hours later she manages to push the head through her hips as the large head spreads them apart before getting stuck on the shoulders again. She widens her hind legs and manages to jam the shoulders into her hips again but is unable to push past that, she awkwardly walks over to a fallen tree before stepping over it and putting the front of her belly against the tree and pushing forwards. Her hips slide farther apart than they probably should over the shoulders, she gasps as her hind legs collapse, her belly lands on ground in front of the fallen tree and the force pops the shoulders through her hips, she sighs in relief as she watches her belly shrink as the child finally slips out of her. When she recovers and looks at the child she is stunned to see that the child's shoulders come up to a little above the bottom of her ribs and finds it hard to imagine that the child could even fit inside of her much less be able to come out of her.

[JJP158]

I edited Scene 8 and added a unbirth alt ending for fun.

Any ideas to make these scenes better?

Scene 7:

Over the next month the child is having another growth spurt, by the end of the 1st week her belly seems to have stopped expanding or stretching and only grows tighter. The child's contours on her belly have become more defined and its movements more taxing for the mare's belly as it has refused to stretch to accommodate the child's more forceful movements. The child's lurching to alert the mare it is hungry causes her belly to sway less and the mare to feel the force more prevalently as her belly doesn't absorb the impact as well causing her to stumble more often. But it does allow the mare to better see the child and enjoy watching the child over the week as it turns around in a nearly too tight space with its entire body being seen shifting along its surface. It's quite the struggle to get on her back now but once she manages she gets to enjoy watching her whole belly change shape as the child struggles against her belly to turn and roll over. She hopes the child will stop growing so fast so she can birth it when her belly muscles recover however.
Scene 8:
By the end of the 2nd week her belly has stiffened and has nearly no give, the child nearly unable to move as it is held tight by her belly. She can see the limbs of the child shifting along the side of her belly as it tries to move but can only shift a little. The child's lurching to alert the mare it is hungry only causes her belly to twitch due to the lack of room to move in her belly. Her belly is stiff and barely sways as it has little give to do so. The mare has to sleep standing up now as her belly is too stiff to lay it against the ground. She got on her back once and found that her belly was almost too stiff for her to roll back up to standing. The mare tries to birth the child but her belly muscles seemingly haven't recovered enough in 2 weeks to attempt a birth as they only lightly clench her belly for some reason. She will attempt it next week.
At the start of the 3th week she attempts to birth the child and her belly muscles still only lightly clench her belly. She begins to fear the child is stuck there before the child also begins trying to push its way out. Pushing with the child she manages to push the head out of her womb and to her hips, she manages to push the head through her hips as the large head spreads them apart before getting stuck on the shoulders again. She widens her hind legs and manages to jam the shoulders into her hips again, her hips begin to slide further apart over the shoulders as she struggles to push the large child out of her. She is about to push again when she hears some bushes nearby rustle and she looks over to see a mountain lion begin circling her seemingly curious for the moment. She begins to push harder knowing she is unable to move with such a large mass spreading her hips. With the largest part of the child now out of her the birth continues faster as her belly shrinks, the last bit the child slides out of her as the lion begins to approach. Far too tired to fight she can only shakily stumble to put herself between the child and the lion, the lion pounces at her and she closes her eyes awaiting the inevitable. Only to hear yowling as the large cat is attacked by the child, she opens her eyes to see the sharp claws that were poking her belly from within, tearing apart the lion to her shock. Once the lion is dead the child begins to eat it excitedly as she looks over the child she is stunned to see that the child's shoulders come up to a little above the bottom of her ribs and finds it hard to imagine that the child could even fit inside of her much less be able to come out of her. As the mare's exhaustion catches up with her and she lays down to rest only noting when she wakes up in the morning that the child is snuggled up to her.

Possible unbirth alt idea for Scene 8:
Once the lion is dead the child begins to eat it excitedly as she looks over the child she is stunned to see that the child's shoulders come up to a little above the bottom of her ribs and finds it hard to imagine that the child could even fit inside of her much less be able to come out of her. As the mare's exhaustion catches up with her and she lays down on her side to rest before passing out. She jolts awake still rather tired and confused as something is forcefully widening her hips and opening again. She turns to look only to see her belly bulge out as the child's shoulders pop through her hips and continue to slide in as the child pushes itself into her and begins pulling more of itself in with its front legs. In a panic tries to stand only for her not to be able to, with her hips still so spread apart, so she tries to push the child back out but that only pauses the child's entry. Her belly grows once more as the child pushes past the halfway point, she manages to stand up as her belly protests being too full again by sending a strong contraction which begins pushing the child out. The child disagrees with this and uses its strong legs to push against her hips and pull the rest of itself in. The mare pants as her belly continues to powerfully contract to no effect. Sometime later the mare is on her back at her home again, her contractions have slowed to a twinge every so often with the exception of when the child pushes rather hard or tries to turn around to which her belly responds with a strong contraction to push the child back in place.At the end of 3rd week her belly is drum tight and the child keeps sliding out of her because of the pressure in her belly but keeps pushing itself back in. But worse of all the child is not done growing and the pressure in her belly grows with each day with a little more of the child sliding out before it pushes itself back in. She tries to push the child out but she discovers she can't push the child out or even clench her belly because her muscles are stretched too much. She has been stuck on her back for nearly a day because of forgetting how hard it was to get up from that position. She suddenly feels the child move and slide out of her but instead of trying to pull itself back in it pushes hard to get out, she is unable to help push due to her stretched muscles but she can feel her hips suddenly slide apart probably further then they should and the child is allowed through. The mare passes out from the strain of all this and only notes when she wakes up in the morning that the child is snuggled up to her.