Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
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1) Try to upload related material to the correct subform please. They are Soft vore, Hardvore, Unbirth, Analvore, Cockvore, Mawshot, Other/combination, Extra soft and Photo edit.
2) Acceptable files: Drawing, stories, video clips (Flash, Gif or other movie format), roleplaying logs, vore games.
3) Please do not upload material that are specified "Do not Distribute ".
4) Any photo with real life human requires full permission from the subject in question, and posted in Photo edit forum only. All individual must be 18+ only. We do not allow photograph of anyone who are not unquestionably 18+ of age anywhere on this domain. All uploaded files must comply with United States law.
5) Label your material. If it have sexual, scat, gore, or other possibly offensive content, please give warning!
6) Any non-sexual fantasy vore illustration involving questionable age of fantasy character, must be placed in the Underage (Fictional character) forum. To access the underage forum, please follow these instructions. No photograph are allowed, period. Drawing and fantasy character only. Material supporting child abuse is prohibited regardless of media format or other content. Sexual illustrations involving questionable age characters are not allowed anywhere.
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1) Try to upload related material to the correct subform please. They are Soft vore, Hardvore, Unbirth, Analvore, Cockvore, Mawshot, Other/combination, Extra soft and Photo edit.
2) Acceptable files: Drawing, stories, video clips (Flash, Gif or other movie format), roleplaying logs, vore games.
3) Please do not upload material that are specified "Do not Distribute ".
4) Any photo with real life human requires full permission from the subject in question, and posted in Photo edit forum only. All individual must be 18+ only. We do not allow photograph of anyone who are not unquestionably 18+ of age anywhere on this domain. All uploaded files must comply with United States law.
5) Label your material. If it have sexual, scat, gore, or other possibly offensive content, please give warning!
6) Any non-sexual fantasy vore illustration involving questionable age of fantasy character, must be placed in the Underage (Fictional character) forum. To access the underage forum, please follow these instructions. No photograph are allowed, period. Drawing and fantasy character only. Material supporting child abuse is prohibited regardless of media format or other content. Sexual illustrations involving questionable age characters are not allowed anywhere.
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
thanks very much, Shades. this is part of why i don't take commissions or requests, not because i don't like the community, but mainly because i don't think i'd be able to commit to it, and if i were to take a commission and slack off on it, that would give the wrong impression. i write what i do for myself, but i love sharing that, too
Check out my fanfic, 'Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better!' And bring up some ideas in the discussion thread!
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Elpie - Advanced Vorarephile
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
Check out my fanfic, 'Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better!' And bring up some ideas in the discussion thread!
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Elpie - Advanced Vorarephile
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
By the way, have you seen marlorweny's HDTF works? I think they might interest you.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/259062
https://aryion.com/g4/view/259062
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
i've finished rewriting a chapter, though it's not the one i promised: here's the link to the updated, reformatted Chapter I: Fine Dining. i'll try to remember to announce this in my gallery's blog function once that feature is back up. in a more general sense, i'm planning on making clear update posts for any big changes i make to Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better! from now on.
i know i said i was going to prioritize the reformat of Chapter M, and i really was making alot of headway with it, but personal issues which i don't care to talk about here came up and i lost alot of my drive for it. i'll be getting to it eventually, don't worry, but i was suddenly spurred to rewrite Fine Dining instead when a compelling idea for an Extra chapter occurred to me. me being me, i wanted to properly rewrite the main chapter it would be connected to first, so i did
today also marks another reformatting project. in addition to rewriting the entire story again with a larger font size and a few other new features, (which i already had in progress--it's not a whole new rewrite) i'm also going to be uploading and re-uploading in PDF format now. all of the rewritten chapters from The Essential have been updated with this new format, and Fine Dining jumps straight from what it was before to the new format.
i can't guarantee that the next chapter i update/upload will be either this Chapter I-Extra item or the full rewrite of Chapter M, or when that will be, but you can probably expect the whole-new Chapter I-Extra at some point in the relatively near future, and almost certainly before i've completely reformatted the rest of the chapters, at least.
i know i said i was going to prioritize the reformat of Chapter M, and i really was making alot of headway with it, but personal issues which i don't care to talk about here came up and i lost alot of my drive for it. i'll be getting to it eventually, don't worry, but i was suddenly spurred to rewrite Fine Dining instead when a compelling idea for an Extra chapter occurred to me. me being me, i wanted to properly rewrite the main chapter it would be connected to first, so i did
today also marks another reformatting project. in addition to rewriting the entire story again with a larger font size and a few other new features, (which i already had in progress--it's not a whole new rewrite) i'm also going to be uploading and re-uploading in PDF format now. all of the rewritten chapters from The Essential have been updated with this new format, and Fine Dining jumps straight from what it was before to the new format.
i can't guarantee that the next chapter i update/upload will be either this Chapter I-Extra item or the full rewrite of Chapter M, or when that will be, but you can probably expect the whole-new Chapter I-Extra at some point in the relatively near future, and almost certainly before i've completely reformatted the rest of the chapters, at least.
Check out my fanfic, 'Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better!' And bring up some ideas in the discussion thread!
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
it's been some five months and i've been gradually working on a whole new chapter which i won't spoil anything on, but i might have hit a bit of a slump. i'm thinking that maybe rewriting and reformatting another of the old chapters might help get the creative juices flowing again, but i can't decide which (not presently, at least--i'll let you all know if i make a decision in the meantime). so i thought i'd ask those following this thread, if any of you are still here, which one i should start working on:
- Chapter B: Mother & Daughter -- in which Mitsuki discovers unbirth, tests it out with Reina, shrinks down from full size while she's still inside Reina, and then has to be carried by her own daughter as if it were a pregnancy until she's given birth to, still stuck at a tiny size for the rest of the chapter
- Chapter C: Deep Throat -- in which the characters discover that their bodies have become much more flexible and, in a rare use of cock vore, Yusuke ends up ejaculating Reina into Mitsuki's intestines; this one might involve a title change since, in hindsight, "Deep Throat" isn't very good
- Chapter C-Extra: Unexpected -- i'm not averse to reformatting this one before the main chapter; in this interquel to the main chapter involves Reina waking up to find that Yusuke is inside her again but it turns out that she didn't swallow him this time, she unbirthed him while she was blackout drunk and carries him for nine months straight
- Chapter L: Bouncing -- the only dedicated non-vore chapter outside "The Essential" so far; Mitsuki starts slowly regressing out of adulthood and back into a teenager, then into a child, and all the way back to infancy before finally stopping and then starting to grow back normally as the now-adoptive daughter of Yusuke and Reina
- Chapter M: still a work-in-progress; i can try to refocus efforts here, but i think this one really and truly has been the most difficult of all the chapters i've come up with so far to actually write; involves same-size vore, digestion, and re-formation
- Chapter Q: Two Mothers -- the most recent chapter so far, in which Yusuke begins regressing into infancy and ends up having to be unbirthed, carried, and given birth to again by both Mitsuki and Reina
- Chapter U: Fourth Trimester -- the "original" unbirth chapter in all of this, in which the characters discover unbirth by accident but only Mitsuki can do it, regularly taking in both of her younger lovers until they become trapped inside her one day and she's forced into a full-term pregnancy before giving birth to them as infants and raising them as her children; this one might also involve a title change
- Chapter W: Like Only a Mother -- in which the characters, again, discover unbirth by accident but this time Reina is able to do it as well, becoming a regular part of their sex lives until an accident one day results in Mitsuki becoming trapped inside Reina and she's forced to carry her for an entire pregnancy, with it turning out that this made Mitsuki regress into infancy so she's reborn as her own daughter's daughter
Check out my fanfic, 'Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better!' And bring up some ideas in the discussion thread!
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Ten Years; and, "Ask Them (and Me) Anything!"
Wow…ten years. Ten years I’ve been writing these characters and sharing their stories here with all of you. I’d say that I can hardly believe I kept with it for this long, but I’m not—I procrastinate a lot (at least for writing stuff like this; luckily, I’m not trying to get published just yet and therefore have no real deadlines, and that procrastination luckily doesn’t affect my day job) and usually need to be inspired to actually write just about anything, but I hardly ever actually give up on stuff like this. I just keep going on hiatuses.
…okay, technically I’m a few months late for this since I actually started writing this (and showing it off; I don’t have a timestamp for when I started coming up with this fanfic, which was at least a couple years in advance of that) at the end of July 2010, but I think I didn’t quite realize that until it was too late and today is the ten-year anniversary of when I opened my gallery and made viewing much easier. In the time since, I’ve elaborated on the story, setting, and characters quite a bit and completely rewritten the chapters at least four times, all for the sake of improving it and making it more than just a paper-thin porn plot.
Unfortunately, I have no new chapter to share at this time. I’ve had two ideas in the works for a while, but writer’s block and real-world obligations got in the way of one of them and the other is very recent, but I hope to be done with one or both of them soon. If we’re lucky, it might be another Christmas present.
Anyway, I wanted to thank everyone who’s followed along with and provided constructive criticism for this. And I wanted to extend a particular offer as well: “Ask Them (and Me) Anything!” As long as it relates to Anyone You Can Do…I Can Do Better!, I’ll answer any questions about the characters and story. I’ll tell you right now that I “can’t” answer certain questions since I plan to answer them in future chapters instead, but anything else is fair game. And if you want to ask something of Mitsuki, Reina, or Yusuke, then you’ll get your answers from them instead of me. This is being posted to both the forum thread and my gallery blog to try and get a more accurate spread.
Additionally, I wanted to ask a slightly more serious question which could affect how I write and share what I’m doing here from now on: it occurs to me that each entry to the story is usually very long and I may not be describing the characters featured in them effectively enough. With that in mind, I wanted to ask what everyone thinks on the possibility of dividing each entry into multiple parts, which will include brief recaps of previous events in that story and re-descriptions of the characters. Any actual division of what I’ve currently uploaded will probably occur at the next revision and will be dependent on each chapter, but the ultimate point is to make each one easier to read and understand. I’m also concerned that my writing is a bit repetitive and want to try to fix that—I write outside of this and hope to be formally published someday and don’t want my prose to come across as dull, so I’d also appreciate if anyone notices that I use certain phrases and word choices a bit too much. (One of the problems I’ve noticed in the process of writing all this is that there’s only so many ways to write and describe sex scenes.)
Oh, and I’m also planning to re-do some of the chapter titles since, in hindsight, some of them are stupid and cringey. I’d be happy to hear suggestions on this, but what I’ll be defaulting to for lack of other ideas will be a “porn parody title” format, which will probably be cringey in their own way but at least they would be more thematically-fitting for a hentai story. XD The other big factor to renaming them is to abandon the overly-long titles that I have right now as far as gallery items are concerned which limits my options for titles. If and when I come to a decision on mostly removing Anyone You Can Do…I Can Do Better! from the gallery items, I’ll let you all know, but I’m currently floating that I’ll borrow a “shorthand” title from the original hentai, as “爆乳母娘”, so that it can still be found easily and mark them all as being part of the same overarching story.
Again, thanks to everyone who’s followed along with this for all these years. I know I don’t put out as much as some other people on Eka’s, but I like doing this and always appreciate it when people give me feedback.
…okay, technically I’m a few months late for this since I actually started writing this (and showing it off; I don’t have a timestamp for when I started coming up with this fanfic, which was at least a couple years in advance of that) at the end of July 2010, but I think I didn’t quite realize that until it was too late and today is the ten-year anniversary of when I opened my gallery and made viewing much easier. In the time since, I’ve elaborated on the story, setting, and characters quite a bit and completely rewritten the chapters at least four times, all for the sake of improving it and making it more than just a paper-thin porn plot.
Unfortunately, I have no new chapter to share at this time. I’ve had two ideas in the works for a while, but writer’s block and real-world obligations got in the way of one of them and the other is very recent, but I hope to be done with one or both of them soon. If we’re lucky, it might be another Christmas present.
Anyway, I wanted to thank everyone who’s followed along with and provided constructive criticism for this. And I wanted to extend a particular offer as well: “Ask Them (and Me) Anything!” As long as it relates to Anyone You Can Do…I Can Do Better!, I’ll answer any questions about the characters and story. I’ll tell you right now that I “can’t” answer certain questions since I plan to answer them in future chapters instead, but anything else is fair game. And if you want to ask something of Mitsuki, Reina, or Yusuke, then you’ll get your answers from them instead of me. This is being posted to both the forum thread and my gallery blog to try and get a more accurate spread.
Additionally, I wanted to ask a slightly more serious question which could affect how I write and share what I’m doing here from now on: it occurs to me that each entry to the story is usually very long and I may not be describing the characters featured in them effectively enough. With that in mind, I wanted to ask what everyone thinks on the possibility of dividing each entry into multiple parts, which will include brief recaps of previous events in that story and re-descriptions of the characters. Any actual division of what I’ve currently uploaded will probably occur at the next revision and will be dependent on each chapter, but the ultimate point is to make each one easier to read and understand. I’m also concerned that my writing is a bit repetitive and want to try to fix that—I write outside of this and hope to be formally published someday and don’t want my prose to come across as dull, so I’d also appreciate if anyone notices that I use certain phrases and word choices a bit too much. (One of the problems I’ve noticed in the process of writing all this is that there’s only so many ways to write and describe sex scenes.)
Oh, and I’m also planning to re-do some of the chapter titles since, in hindsight, some of them are stupid and cringey. I’d be happy to hear suggestions on this, but what I’ll be defaulting to for lack of other ideas will be a “porn parody title” format, which will probably be cringey in their own way but at least they would be more thematically-fitting for a hentai story. XD The other big factor to renaming them is to abandon the overly-long titles that I have right now as far as gallery items are concerned which limits my options for titles. If and when I come to a decision on mostly removing Anyone You Can Do…I Can Do Better! from the gallery items, I’ll let you all know, but I’m currently floating that I’ll borrow a “shorthand” title from the original hentai, as “爆乳母娘”, so that it can still be found easily and mark them all as being part of the same overarching story.
Again, thanks to everyone who’s followed along with this for all these years. I know I don’t put out as much as some other people on Eka’s, but I like doing this and always appreciate it when people give me feedback.
Check out my fanfic, 'Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better!' And bring up some ideas in the discussion thread!
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
So, unfortunately, I wasn’t able to get a new chapter ready to share for Christmas in time. I tried, I really did, but real-life obligations and a few bumps in the writer’s block road got in the way. I suspected this might happen, though, and decided to set this up in advance: instead of a new chapter in its entirety, I think I’ll share previews for three new ones! Here’s the first ~1,500 words of three completely new, never-before-seen chapters. That’s about fifteen hundred words each, not between them.
“Chapter G”
“Chapter O”
“Chapter T”
And no, the fact that they’re Chapters G, O, and T is not a reference to Game of Thrones—it’s entirely coincidental. I’ve been trying my damnedest to get an entire new chapter ready to post and it’s approaching completion. And this time, I won’t be waiting for a special occasion to try to post it.
“Chapter G”
Spoiler: show
“Chapter O”
Spoiler: show
“Chapter T”
Spoiler: show
And no, the fact that they’re Chapters G, O, and T is not a reference to Game of Thrones—it’s entirely coincidental. I’ve been trying my damnedest to get an entire new chapter ready to post and it’s approaching completion. And this time, I won’t be waiting for a special occasion to try to post it.
Check out my fanfic, 'Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better!' And bring up some ideas in the discussion thread!
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
Honestly, dunno if you might have covered it. But given how you're thinking on various hypothetical scenarios. I can't help but wonder if you'd consider if going Unbirth related, a possible "alternate" scene where Mitsuki (or Reina) unbirths Yusuke and their romantic Rival... And just, decides to play for keeps? Keeping both within her womb for the rest of her 'life', in a perpetual pregnancy. Before it's either "fake" being fat (while likely having a new life... While possibly feeling more babies 'grow' inside her?) Or, the belly just... deflates/regresses, until her lover and rival's soul are bound to her own body/womb. And they love it?
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Past that. If alternatively going Hammerspace, in revelation. Imagine if Reina or Mitsuki, didn't had a moral restraint against having a 'competition' on who can unbirth/devour the most 'competitors/possible' threats to their romantic rivalry. Only to be so stuffed, that they end up absorbing/intergrating all of those 'nameless kidnapped', possibly accidentally become Futa as a side effect. And then start competing over who get's the "right" to merge/absorb Yusuke... (Or well, if going Unbirth rivalry. Having a 'Tug of war' over who gets to have Yusuke in their womb for the night, fuck toy wise.)
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Past that. If alternatively going Hammerspace, in revelation. Imagine if Reina or Mitsuki, didn't had a moral restraint against having a 'competition' on who can unbirth/devour the most 'competitors/possible' threats to their romantic rivalry. Only to be so stuffed, that they end up absorbing/intergrating all of those 'nameless kidnapped', possibly accidentally become Futa as a side effect. And then start competing over who get's the "right" to merge/absorb Yusuke... (Or well, if going Unbirth rivalry. Having a 'Tug of war' over who gets to have Yusuke in their womb for the night, fuck toy wise.)
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
LemonBarb wrote:Honestly, dunno if you might have covered it. But given how you're thinking on various hypothetical scenarios. I can't help but wonder if you'd consider if going Unbirth related, a possible "alternate" scene where Mitsuki (or Reina) unbirths Yusuke and their romantic Rival... And just, decides to play for keeps? Keeping both within her womb for the rest of her 'life', in a perpetual pregnancy. Before it's either "fake" being fat (while likely having a new life... While possibly feeling more babies 'grow' inside her?) Or, the belly just... deflates/regresses, until her lover and rival's soul are bound to her own body/womb. And they love it?
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Past that. If alternatively going Hammerspace, in revelation. Imagine if Reina or Mitsuki, didn't had a moral restraint against having a 'competition' on who can unbirth/devour the most 'competitors/possible' threats to their romantic rivalry. Only to be so stuffed, that they end up absorbing/intergrating all of those 'nameless kidnapped', possibly accidentally become Futa as a side effect. And then start competing over who get's the "right" to merge/absorb Yusuke... (Or well, if going Unbirth rivalry. Having a 'Tug of war' over who gets to have Yusuke in their womb for the night, fuck toy wise.)
i've had ideas similar to pretty much all of these (not as much for mass-vore, though--not out of lack of interest in that anywhere, it just doesn't fit with most of what i'm establishing so far). i even really have put a few of these in already
i'll also just say otherwise that Mitsuki and Reina's rivalry is alot friendlier than you might be thinking after they decide to share
Check out my fanfic, 'Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better!' And bring up some ideas in the discussion thread!
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Elpie - Advanced Vorarephile
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
So...
What was it you’re asking for here, again?
What was it you’re asking for here, again?
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C107galaxytachyon - Somewhat familiar
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
LowProfile wrote:LemonBarb wrote:i'll also just say otherwise that Mitsuki and Reina's rivalry is alot friendlier than you might be thinking after they decide to share
Frankly, my impression was more in a lens of generally speaking, they both have a sort of friendly rivalry, or an attempt to "one up" each other. Though in this case, I was mildly thinking in looking at a glance, on all the various 'unbirth' what if's (Before the other types of vore, etc.) On a "what if either of them, decided to play for keeps?" In a sense of permanently keeping Yusuke and their rival, within them. Likely forever/eternity, sort of 'ownership'. To either permanent pregnancy, or dealing with the side effect of absorbing their love and rival, and having asset theft/expansions... Or suddenly stuck with their thoughts/voices being stuck inside them.
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
LowProfile wrote:LemonBarb wrote:Honestly, dunno if you might have covered it. But given how you're thinking on various hypothetical scenarios. I can't help but wonder if you'd consider if going Unbirth related, a possible "alternate" scene where Mitsuki (or Reina) unbirths Yusuke and their romantic Rival... And just, decides to play for keeps? Keeping both within her womb for the rest of her 'life', in a perpetual pregnancy. Before it's either "fake" being fat (while likely having a new life... While possibly feeling more babies 'grow' inside her?) Or, the belly just... deflates/regresses, until her lover and rival's soul are bound to her own body/womb. And they love it?
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Past that. If alternatively going Hammerspace, in revelation. Imagine if Reina or Mitsuki, didn't had a moral restraint against having a 'competition' on who can unbirth/devour the most 'competitors/possible' threats to their romantic rivalry. Only to be so stuffed, that they end up absorbing/intergrating all of those 'nameless kidnapped', possibly accidentally become Futa as a side effect. And then start competing over who get's the "right" to merge/absorb Yusuke... (Or well, if going Unbirth rivalry. Having a 'Tug of war' over who gets to have Yusuke in their womb for the night, fuck toy wise.)
i've had ideas similar to pretty much all of these (not as much for mass-vore, though--not out of lack of interest in that anywhere, it just doesn't fit with most of what i'm establishing so far). i even really have put a few of these in already
i'll also just say otherwise that Mitsuki and Reina's rivalry is alot friendlier than you might be thinking after they decide to share
Hello?
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
C107galaxytachyon wrote:LowProfile wrote:LemonBarb wrote:Honestly, dunno if you might have covered it. But given how you're thinking on various hypothetical scenarios. I can't help but wonder if you'd consider if going Unbirth related, a possible "alternate" scene where Mitsuki (or Reina) unbirths Yusuke and their romantic Rival... And just, decides to play for keeps? Keeping both within her womb for the rest of her 'life', in a perpetual pregnancy. Before it's either "fake" being fat (while likely having a new life... While possibly feeling more babies 'grow' inside her?) Or, the belly just... deflates/regresses, until her lover and rival's soul are bound to her own body/womb. And they love it?
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Past that. If alternatively going Hammerspace, in revelation. Imagine if Reina or Mitsuki, didn't had a moral restraint against having a 'competition' on who can unbirth/devour the most 'competitors/possible' threats to their romantic rivalry. Only to be so stuffed, that they end up absorbing/intergrating all of those 'nameless kidnapped', possibly accidentally become Futa as a side effect. And then start competing over who get's the "right" to merge/absorb Yusuke... (Or well, if going Unbirth rivalry. Having a 'Tug of war' over who gets to have Yusuke in their womb for the night, fuck toy wise.)
i've had ideas similar to pretty much all of these (not as much for mass-vore, though--not out of lack of interest in that anywhere, it just doesn't fit with most of what i'm establishing so far). i even really have put a few of these in already
i'll also just say otherwise that Mitsuki and Reina's rivalry is alot friendlier than you might be thinking after they decide to share
Hello?
don't worry, i'm still here
Check out my fanfic, 'Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better!' And bring up some ideas in the discussion thread!
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Elpie - Advanced Vorarephile
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
So...
Did we ever reach any sort of consensus regarding what scenarios are and/or aren’t cool in your book for your OCs to be depicted in?
Did we ever reach any sort of consensus regarding what scenarios are and/or aren’t cool in your book for your OCs to be depicted in?
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C107galaxytachyon - Somewhat familiar
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
calling them my OCs is being generous--as much as i've tried to make them my own, this is still "just" a fanfic. the scenarios i myself go with are all aligned to my own preferences and i'd hope those are clear enough in what i've written and shared so far. and, not to put a damper on what anyone might be hoping i'll be sharing in the future, the character dynamics are mostly the same--you're mostly not going to be seeing Yusuke as a pred, for example, entirely because my own preferences don't include male preds (what little i have done with him like that is really more a means to an end)--though i am working on ones with different situations from what i've used so far, with all three of the ones i teased before being examples.C107galaxytachyon wrote:So...
Did we ever reach any sort of consensus regarding what scenarios are and/or aren’t cool in your book for your OCs to be depicted in?
if you mean stuff that you yourself might want to write/draw/etc. featuring them, that's entirely up to you--like i said, this is "only" a fanfic and i have no right or reason to forbid you or anyone else from writing about Yusuke, Reina, and Mitsuki any more than someone using Pokemon or Naruto or Metroid characters can prevent someone else from using them.
Check out my fanfic, 'Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better!' And bring up some ideas in the discussion thread!
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Elpie - Advanced Vorarephile
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
You'd be surprised at how many creators here tend to go out of there way to publicly shame and/or chastise ANYONE who just so happen post unsolicited work(s) based on those of others': even the once.
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
LowProfile wrote:calling them my OCs is being generous--as much as i've tried to make them my own, this is still "just" a fanfic. the scenarios i myself go with are all aligned to my own preferences and i'd hope those are clear enough in what i've written and shared so far. and, not to put a damper on what anyone might be hoping i'll be sharing in the future, the character dynamics are mostly the same--you're mostly not going to be seeing Yusuke as a pred, for example, entirely because my own preferences don't include male preds (what little i have done with him like that is really more a means to an end)--though i am working on ones with different situations from what i've used so far, with all three of the ones i teased before being examples.C107galaxytachyon wrote:So...
Did we ever reach any sort of consensus regarding what scenarios are and/or aren’t cool in your book for your OCs to be depicted in?
if you mean stuff that you yourself might want to write/draw/etc. featuring them, that's entirely up to you--like i said, this is "only" a fanfic and i have no right or reason to forbid you or anyone else from writing about Yusuke, Reina, and Mitsuki any more than someone using Pokemon or Naruto or Metroid characters can prevent someone else from using them.
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
C107galaxytachyon wrote:LowProfile wrote:calling them my OCs is being generous--as much as i've tried to make them my own, this is still "just" a fanfic. the scenarios i myself go with are all aligned to my own preferences and i'd hope those are clear enough in what i've written and shared so far. and, not to put a damper on what anyone might be hoping i'll be sharing in the future, the character dynamics are mostly the same--you're mostly not going to be seeing Yusuke as a pred, for example, entirely because my own preferences don't include male preds (what little i have done with him like that is really more a means to an end)--though i am working on ones with different situations from what i've used so far, with all three of the ones i teased before being examples.C107galaxytachyon wrote:So...
Did we ever reach any sort of consensus regarding what scenarios are and/or aren’t cool in your book for your OCs to be depicted in?
if you mean stuff that you yourself might want to write/draw/etc. featuring them, that's entirely up to you--like i said, this is "only" a fanfic and i have no right or reason to forbid you or anyone else from writing about Yusuke, Reina, and Mitsuki any more than someone using Pokemon or Naruto or Metroid characters can prevent someone else from using them.
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i just didn't feel like typing up a reply to your previous post, is all i'd thought that my other one had been clear enough (don't misread this--i'm not using an accusatory or whatever here. i say that because, obviously, tone doesn't always get across properly in text)
Check out my fanfic, 'Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better!' And bring up some ideas in the discussion thread!
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Elpie - Advanced Vorarephile
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Re: Anyone You Can Do... I Can Do Better! (sexual; various)
i think it's been more than a year since i first mentioned it, not by name, but i finally have a whole new chapter to share! this is one of the ones that i teased at Christmas and it goes in a direction that i haven't used before with these characters. what happens? well, obviously, you'll need to actually read the thing to find out, but you'll probably have a good idea just from the title. this is a a long one, too--more than 170 pages! because of that, i'd also like to announce that now i'll be formally making multi-part versions of all the chapters of more than a certain size, which i have yet to decide on, and the existing chapters will be retained as all-in-one versions (and i'm intending to make an all-in-one version of The Essential as well. this'll also make it easier for readers to find their exact favorite parts of each story. the text will be mostly the same between the complete and multi-part versions, just slightly altered at the beginning and ending of each part to make them flow a little better and maybe reiterating character appearances; think of them as if they were serialized installments.
the other "big" announcement that i want to make is that, along with other general revisions, i'm planning to go through all of the reformatted chapters so far and figure out which words i feel i've been using a bit too much and change them up a bit--even considering that this is smut and that i know it's smut, my writer's brain won't be satisfied if i let it stay repetitive. i'll be doing this in the near future, along with adding some new thumbnails to the chapters themselves, but i wanted to get the new chapter out first. any new revisions to it will be minimal and, in this one case, i won't be waiting until i make a new upload to do so. the multi-part versions will come after this, and then i'll start working in earnest on a new rewrite of an existing chapter, which will get the same treatment before it's fully re-updated.
and now, without any further ado, i'm happy to announce the latest installment to Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better!: Chapter T: Twice Upon a Reina!
https://aryion.com/g4/view/703051
EDIT: as i type this, late on July 10, i've just finished setting up my table of word choice revisions. was alot more time consuming than i thought it would be
the other "big" announcement that i want to make is that, along with other general revisions, i'm planning to go through all of the reformatted chapters so far and figure out which words i feel i've been using a bit too much and change them up a bit--even considering that this is smut and that i know it's smut, my writer's brain won't be satisfied if i let it stay repetitive. i'll be doing this in the near future, along with adding some new thumbnails to the chapters themselves, but i wanted to get the new chapter out first. any new revisions to it will be minimal and, in this one case, i won't be waiting until i make a new upload to do so. the multi-part versions will come after this, and then i'll start working in earnest on a new rewrite of an existing chapter, which will get the same treatment before it's fully re-updated.
and now, without any further ado, i'm happy to announce the latest installment to Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better!: Chapter T: Twice Upon a Reina!
https://aryion.com/g4/view/703051
EDIT: as i type this, late on July 10, i've just finished setting up my table of word choice revisions. was alot more time consuming than i thought it would be
Check out my fanfic, 'Anyone You Can Do...I Can Do Better!' And bring up some ideas in the discussion thread!
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