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Heather's New Look

Postby iamthedave » Sat Mar 20, 2021 12:02 am

I'm returning to fetish writing after a couple of decades' break. If anyone was around back in the ancient days of yahoo groups I wrote a trio of stories called 'Hitomi' that I know have done the rounds on the /d/ hentai boards. My five minutes of fame I guess.

Anyway, I'm working on a new story titled Heather's New Look, which is about a normal woman transforming into a very NOT normal woman/demon thing after a particular event, and I've got most of the story put together but I can't settle on an ethnicity for the titular character. So I figured I'd ask here, see if anyone has any thoughts on what might be cool, and see if it helps my mind settle on a particular image for Heather.

Once I've got that I'll likely be done in the next couple of days. All the major action's written up now, I'm just needing to clean up the preamble.

Speaking of preamble, when you're reading porn stories do you prefer to get straight into the action or something a bit meatier with characters and a plot? I've noticed a lot of stories around Eka's are really just specific vore scenes without much explanation. Thoughts appreciated.
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Re: Heather's New Look

Postby thequietmanno1 » Sat Mar 20, 2021 3:33 am

for ethnicity, i'd say either Middle eastern, African american, or Chinese as options
and i very much prefer it when there's character and a plot to follow- makes you care about who's involved and such and you want to see them getting a happy ending
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Re: Heather's New Look

Postby iamthedave » Sat Mar 20, 2021 7:23 am

Ok. Well hopefully you'll enjoy this when it's finished up :)

Chinese could work. Ok, Chinese takes the lead, I'll see if anyone else chimes in.
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Re: Heather's New Look

Postby poldenski » Sat Mar 20, 2021 7:41 am

since the person is going to end up as a part demon or something you can have it as the character can transform between multiple different ones based on there targets desire
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Re: Heather's New Look

Postby Scion » Sat Mar 20, 2021 1:57 pm

the hitomi stories are an old favorite of mine, was really hoping to see what the villain would've done ;p
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Re: Heather's New Look

Postby thequietmanno1 » Sat Mar 20, 2021 2:17 pm

speaking of, any links to the hitomi stories or any others you've done like that?
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Re: Heather's New Look

Postby iamthedave » Sat Mar 20, 2021 3:52 pm

Scion wrote:the hitomi stories are an old favorite of mine, was really hoping to see what the villain would've done ;p


Awwww. It's nice to know that they're still remembered.

thequietmanno1 wrote:speaking of, any links to the hitomi stories or any others you've done like that?


I'll see if they're still on my computer somewhere. Once I get this written up I'll post them together if I find them.

I never really wrote a lot of porn. That trilogy was the high point. But if this one works out well - and it's been a lot of fun writing it - who knows, maybe I'll do more. I spent most of my life trying to be a novelist so never really made time for writing this sort of material. Just navigating back round to it for a few reasons.

poldenski wrote:since the person is going to end up as a part demon or something you can have it as the character can transform between multiple different ones based on there targets desire


That's actually an idea I'd been playing with. I think I've landed on her starting African American. So yeah. Thanks all for contributions. Will hopefully have the full thing done in a day or two.

Should I just post it in this thread or make a new one? Not sure about forum etiquette on this sort of thing.
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Re: Heather's New Look

Postby thequietmanno1 » Sat Mar 20, 2021 5:17 pm

might as well post it here to help keep track of everything in one place
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Re: Heather's New Look

Postby iamthedave » Tue Mar 23, 2021 10:00 pm

Here you all go. Dialogue's a bit meh but if I get obsessed with redrafting it we'll all be waiting months.

Cock vore, oral vore, transformation, cock TF, and... miscellaneous weird.

Also for the Hitomi stories, Pretty much all vore at some point, mostly transformation and absorbtion, and a little cock vore later on. If cock vore's your sole thing though it's probably not your bag.

Hope you enjoy!

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Hitomi.rtf
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Hitomi-2.rtf
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