my first wowmv comic

[Schneeflocke]

Hello everybody
well its my first time here. i just saw that "pffft8" made an awsome wow comic with an nigthelf and stuff.
so i decided to try it on my own.
hope you like it :3
and if there are any questions, ratings or ideas for some more stuff i would be proud
Thank you.

[Schneeflocke]

Part 2

[Schneeflocke]

Part 3

[Fidel2323]

great work^^
i love it

EDIT:
lol, at first i thought its the work from pfffft, but its YOU!!!
hehe, welcome to the portal^^
EDIT2: maybe i shoul read the text above the pic and not only look at the pics

[deleteduser301]

pretty awesome

[Mordecai]

Decent. I think you should either decide upon making shots for the interior after consumption, if we're doing first-person, or adding in other prey and keeping it exterior only.

[Schneeflocke]

yeah i know
but as i said its my first try. but i will do my very best to keep it from one perspetiv.
thx for your opinion *cuddle*

[komaru]

loved it, great job ^_^

[haloronin]

Well I'm not trying to be mean or anything about this short image strip..

but i think i've been offended, though i can appreciate the used of the WOW image manipulations, i just really. dont like this comic and think it; was poorly done in the lack of back ground, and any real basis of a story other then night elf wants you in her ass (AFTER eating at Taco Bell. i assume)

I just cant fnd any real enjoyment for my self in this strip.

However, on a good note, your timing on taking still photos or camera captureing for the poser liek program you were using, is well done, i think perhaps you shoud invest more time fleshing out the textures, for the modle.

additionaly.. the use of photo manipulation on adding the Gas cloud, i think blended in well too.

[buttman]

I thought it was awesome. There didn't need to be any background imagry for this story. And the story was a short clip....if someone wanted a full storyline then I'd recommend they go get a book.

Very well done. A+. Thank you for contributing your work

[Ilysta]

I know I'm not an artist, but you should really think about adding in a background, or making the character bigger. There's so much white stuff it's almost hard to look at. Also, for the love of god, PLEASE capitalize, spellcheck and punctuate your captions. It might not seem like a big deal, but it really, really is.

[Schneeflocke]

@ komaru: thank you
@ haloronin: if u dont have to say something good, better say nothing. so NFC!!!
@ buttman: yeah it was my first time ... but i should really think about a background. i will try do my best in the next comic
@ Ilysta: I know i am sry . My english isnt the best. But next time i will check it before posting. Promised

[Mordecai]

@ haloronin: if u dont have to say something good, better say nothing. so NFC!!!

If you see it, rate it!

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[Schneeflocke]

@ haloronin: if u dont have to say something good, better say nothing. so NFC!!!

If you see it, rate it!

._o

That was based on me cuty

[haloronin]

@ haloronin: if u dont have to say something good, better say nothing. so NFC!!!

critisizim makes a better artist

And i did have something nice to say, I appreciated teh angle of teh photos that were taken. please make sure to read the whole post before you assume it was entirely neitave.

[justaname333]

critisizim makes a better artist

Agreed, the community overall needs to grow more lenient on pointing out flaws and errors so they may be improved or corrected, instead of showering praise on anything partially related to the fetish.
For instance, the way you spelled criticism there.

[Schneeflocke]

critisizim makes a better artist

Agreed, the community overall needs to grow more lenient on pointing out flaws and errors so they may be improved or corrected, instead of showering praise on anything partially related to the fetish.
For instance, the way you spelled criticism there.

i agree².
but a good criticism is hard. i know that. and your criticism sounds like a attack for me. but anyway.
i dont say anything bad to your opinion.
i am happy about every rateing i get
so i dont understand why u are defening

[Pffftt8]

nice work Schneeflocke. i like the whole POV idea and your gas graphics. did you create those yourself? btw the goodnight kiss at the end was hot!

also, a cool trick you can use in the model viewer program is uncheck the "lock animation" on the bottom bar and be able to have the night elf have 2 animations where her top half is doing one pose, while her bottom half is doing another.

[Schneeflocke]

nice work Schneeflocke. i like the whole POV idea and your gas graphics. did you create those yourself? btw the goodnight kiss at the end was hot!

also, a cool trick you can use in the model viewer program is uncheck the "lock animation" on the bottom bar and be able to have the night elf have 2 animations where her top half is doing one pose, while her bottom half is doing another.

aaaw thank u
that means a lot for me to hear that form you *cuddle*
and thanks for the tip with the 2 animation thing. i will try it next time

[buttman]

Schneeflocke, if you would like help with your english captions, feel free to contact me before you post. As long as you type up each caption in the email, I can send you back the corrected english for you to copy and paste. I'm sure you could spell check it yourself, I just thought it would be polite to offer. I have been meaning to contribute some material to av myself for quite some time, but only recently have I been learning photoshop, and to date I have only made 1 collage, unrelated to anal vore. So if you need help, just pm me