A little Star Wars story i wrote.

[Grimlock]

I thought since i have read so many great stories here i would try and post one of my own.
Since i was never that good at writing there´s probably some grammatical errors, i hope you can overlook them (now if i can only figure out how to make a page with the stories i may write in the future).
So tell me what you think, what was good what was bad and how could it be improved?:

Order 66 had arrived all Jedi was now an enemy of the republic or The Empire as it now was called.
Ahsoka Tano wasn´t a Jedi anymore, well strictly speaking she was still a force user and as such still a threat to Palpatine.
Although Palpatine wouldn´t hunt her personally, she knew perfectly well that her former master Anarkin now called Darth Vader would be more than willing to take up the hunt for her.
From a distance she had seen how he and a squad of clone troopers, had entered the Jedi temple and the backlash in the force resulting from that visit hadn´t left Ahsoka in doubt as to what had happened in that temple.
She knew then that a man capable of killing children on the orders of The Emperor wouldn´t hesitate to kill his former apprentice if the opportunity arose.
Ahsoka had to hide and do so in a place no one would likely find her anytime soon.
Trouble was that for the moment she was stuck on Coruscant unable to leave. It had only meant to be a short visit, a message from the jedi temple asking her to return to Coruscant to discuss something important.
Well whatever was so important she would never know and thanks to Order 66, none but the most daring smugglers would dare to transport a Jedi of planet.
The Emperor´s orders had been very clear any crew caught transporting a Jedi, would be imprisoned for life and their ship destroyed.
Only the smugglers already risking such penalties would be willing to run the risk of transporting a jedi of planet, but smugglers usually took quite a lot of money for their services and Ahsoka knew she didn´t have nearly enough to pay for such services.
She supposed she could go bounty hunter as Asajj Ventriss had, but when she had done it there had been no huge bounty on all the jedi´s and she could fairly easy hide.
Now times where different and Ahsoka didn´t doubt that most bounty hunters would probably more likely turn her in for the bounty rather than take her in.
She might be able to find work with the Hutts as they answered to no one, but the Hutts usually made whatever the smugglers took look like candy in comparison.

No until she could get the money Ahsoka would have to hide in the lowest parts of Coruscant, it wouldn´t be easy but she had no choice.

It had been almost 2 years since Ahsoka had arrived to Coruscant and been forced to hide in the lowest parts it hadn´t been easy, but she had managed.

Getting food had been the hardest part, she could have used her force powers to persuade anyone she meet, but every time she used her powers it risked drawing some unwanted attention. Ahsoka had been forced to live of any street vermin she could catch.
It hadn´t been pleasant she had been sick the first few times but as time went by she got used to it.
Around a year ago she had meet another Jedi, at the beginning they were suspicious of each other time where not kind for the jedi and in the lower levels trust wasn´t exactly a common commodity.
Yet they had soon started to trust one another and upon learning of Ahsokas predicament, the other Jedi had thought her a nifty trick with the force, that exact trick had actually been the reason the Jedi was down here.
Using that trick hadn´t exactly made him popular with the jedi council and if it hadn´t been for order 66, the jedi would most certainly had been tried before the jedi council.

One day her friend she never learned the jedi´s name was gone, sign of struggle and marks from blaster fire, told Ahsoka that her friend wouldn´t be returning.

That had been a year ago since then Ahsoka had been using the trick to slowly save up the money she needed to get herself off Coruscant, not often for the trick relied on low level force use and every time she used it, it risked her being found out and worst case scenario Vader would be investigating the rumor.

Well it had been some time since she had last used that trick and she felt secure that she could get away with it once more.

She let rumors slip about a criminal hiding in the lower levels of Coruscant, she even gave a possible location and a small bounty to boot. She didn´t make the bounty to huge as that would often attract more experienced bounty hunters and those could be trouble.

The trap was now set and all she had to do was wait, for a young gunho bounty hunter to step in.

Sure enough after some time her trap sprung a person entered, a young female human by the looks of it and from the way she moved she didn´t seem to have very much experience.
Ahsoka waited for the right moment before she struck a quick blaster fire set for stun and the young bounty hunter was knocked unconscious.

More than enough time for Ahsoka to pull the young bounty hunter down into her home, hidden beneath a trap door it made it so that wasn´t easy to find if you didn´t know where to look. At the same time it meant that she wouldn´t be disturbed which meant she could take her time with what she had to do now.

With by now an experience had she quickly stripped the bounty hunter laying her naked on the floor, at the same time she bound both her feet and hands making sure the bounty hunter couldn´t escape.

The stun was slowly wearing off and the bounty hunter came to, she struggled against her bonds, but Ahsoka knew what she was doing and now it was time to do what her friend had thought her.
Calling upon the force she changed her stomach so that it could take more than it was ever designed to by natures hand, at the same time she shut down her hearing the screaming would have made her deaf long time ago if she hadn´t.
And now it was time, but where to start her friend had always liked to start with the breasts of the females he caught, but Ahsoka had a different taste she like to start with the belly first.
Quickly pulling off her own clothes (Ahsoka always like to be naked when she did this, it somehow made it more comfortable) she bent down and first kissed the bounty hunters belly and then she liked it.
She didn´t doubt that the Bounty Hunter was trying to say something probably ask what she was doing, she would soon find out.
Ahsoka pulled back shorty to gaze upon the stomach for a moment and then she open her mouth and bid down on the flesh of the stomach, tearing out a chunk out meat.
Now the bounty hunter started to squirm try to get away, probably screaming in pain.
Ahsoka didn´t care with the force blocking her hearing she couldn´t hear a thing and could focus on her meal.
She continued digging in biting and tearing in the flesh, she though herself lucky females and human to it was always her favorite.
In the back of her mind she wished she had known about this trick years back, if it wasn´t because rumors had it that she had died in childbirth Ahsoka really would have liked to eat Padme to, but things hadn´t turned out that way.
Never mind her current meal was more than deliciously enough that Ahsoka didn´t mind the fact that she would never taste the meat of Padme.
As she tore and ate her victims flesh she also slurped some of the blood down, although it wasn´t her favorite taste ever, it wasn´t bad it had a sort of metallic tang to it.
The Bounty hunter had stopped moving and just stared emptily into the ceiling, a combination of pain and blood loss amongst other had sent her into shock.
Although one of the last things the bounty hunter had seen was the mounted heads of Ahsokas previous victims, all stuck in their final death scream.

Having eaten most of the stomach Ahsoka attacked the breasts it was like eating a mixture between porridge and pudding, soft and sponge at the same time.
Ahsoka bit into them enjoying the feeling of them sliding down her throat.
After eating her legs and arms Ahsoka reach into the bounty hunter and ate her heart.
After chewing down the last bite, she went up to the head of the now dead, but still warm bounty hunter and gave her a kiss on her lips, leaving an imprint of Ahsokas now bloody lips.
After that she leaned down and chewed off the bounty hunters head severing it from her body.

Leaning back Ahsoka´s now naked body covered in the blood of her meal, she looked at the now severed head of the bounty hunter and smiled “Thanks for being such a good meal, you tasted absolutely marvelous. I am sure your flesh will add to my hips and your stuff will go a long way into getting me the money to get of Coruscant.” Ahsoka released a bubbly belch the returned some of the taste of the bounty hunter to her mouth.

Ahsoka leaned back on the floor, whenever she had eaten, she found that her body generated enough heat, that she didn´t need a blanket or anything like that to keep her warm.

Ahsoka would sleep now, her stomach huge and filled with the meat of the bounty hunter, would take some time to digest it all. So Ahsoka would stay where she was if anyone missed the bounty hunter her disappearance would easily be shrugged of just another loss in the lower circles of Coruscant.
Unplugging her ears she Ahsoka drifted off to the sound of her gurgling stomach, when she had digested enough of the meat so she could fit in her clothes again, she would discard the bones the local street vermin and various other things would quickly get rid of them.
After that she would go to a Tanner she knew well, The Tanner would (in exchange for half the money the bounty hunters stuff brought in) stuff the bounty hunters head, locking it into a final death scream as all the others. Ahsoka would then mount the head amongst her other trophies.

Ahsoka slept and her stomach gurgled away.