Cupcakes

[newenglandee]

Yeah well i just wish people would take it easy on the writer it may be a bad story but its better then nothing. So what if he made a bad story everyone has there likes and dislikes:)

I think it's WORSE than nothing, that's the point. I think it just makes him look bad, makes the fandom look bad, that it's senseless gore for senseless gore and it doesn't bring anything GOOD to the table. Hence why I ask "who was asking for this"? It's not the sort of story somebody should read.

Also, yes, it's my opinion. But if someone says "My opinion is as such that I think the world is flat", aren't you going to say "Well, you're just plain wrong" to them? Opinions can still be WRONG, and that's what I'm trying to say, that the opinion anyone might have that this story isn't anything less than cruel and unusual...they're dead wrong. And the author was VERY wrong to write it!

[Star_Sage]

I'm sorry, I find this hilarious. This story has been on the web for....well, months now I think. I found it a while back when CR on Thatguywiththeglasses.com did his LP of Story of the Blanks, and he mentioned it was Cupcakes all over again(Note, SotB isn't quite this dark, and more uses Zombie Ponies to great effect). I got curious, googled it, and found this, as well as all the vids and stories made based off it. And there's a bunch, seriously, go type this into youtube and see what you get, a lot of the fake movie trailers for this are awesome, and have some great music to build the creepy factor. Heck, if you want, there's worse stories out there. Sweet Apple Massacre comes to mind, that's Big Macintosh doing far worse to the CMC, while they each watch, or there's that one about the Rainbow Factory, where we learn rainbows are made of ponies, mind the ending of that one is just creepy in ways that get under my skin.

BTW, from an author's perspective, while the guy does a good job of describing things, he's got a few things wrong too. The cutting, like he's doing, would be painful at first, but it would also be numb after only a few seconds, like when you could you finger, it stops hurting after a while, and won't hurt again for an hour or so, as adrenaline and blood loss numb the appendage. After I posted my topic asking for comms, this was actually one of my first assignments from an anonymous source, and one I won't post, to make Cupcakes better, basically, instead of blades, I used science! Electro Shock, Acids, and a bit of fire. Those will leave impressions for a while.

Anyway, while I understand the backlash, this has been on the net for a while, and anyone who hasn't seen it and is offended, well, this is what some people like, and I try not to judge. Besides, as an author, stories rarely get to me without a psycho element to them, like the Blogs of the Mane 6 getting mind raped by Discord, especially the epilogue one, which takes place after Discord won. Now that, my friends, is how you make creepy. Well, that and all the other stuff under the fan work tab on the nightmare fuel page on TVtropes.

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/N ... hipIsMagic

[newenglandee]

I'm sorry, I find this hilarious. This story has been on the web for....well, months now I think. I found it a while back when CR on Thatguywiththeglasses.com did his LP of Story of the Blanks, and he mentioned it was Cupcakes all over again(Note, SotB isn't quite this dark, and more uses Zombie Ponies to great effect). I got curious, googled it, and found this, as well as all the vids and stories made based off it. And there's a bunch, seriously, go type this into youtube and see what you get, a lot of the fake movie trailers for this are awesome, and have some great music to build the creepy factor. Heck, if you want, there's worse stories out there. Sweet Apple Massacre comes to mind, that's Big Macintosh doing far worse to the CMC, while they each watch, or there's that one about the Rainbow Factory, where we learn rainbows are made of ponies, mind the ending of that one is just creepy in ways that get under my skin.

BTW, from an author's perspective, while the guy does a good job of describing things, he's got a few things wrong too. The cutting, like he's doing, would be painful at first, but it would also be numb after only a few seconds, like when you could you finger, it stops hurting after a while, and won't hurt again for an hour or so, as adrenaline and blood loss numb the appendage. After I posted my topic asking for comms, this was actually one of my first assignments from an anonymous source, and one I won't post, to make Cupcakes better, basically, instead of blades, I used science! Electro Shock, Acids, and a bit of fire. Those will leave impressions for a while.

Anyway, while I understand the backlash, this has been on the net for a while, and anyone who hasn't seen it and is offended, well, this is what some people like, and I try not to judge. Besides, as an author, stories rarely get to me without a psycho element to them, like the Blogs of the Mane 6 getting mind raped by Discord, especially the epilogue one, which takes place after Discord won. Now that, my friends, is how you make creepy. Well, that and all the other stuff under the fan work tab on the nightmare fuel page on TVtropes.

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/N ... hipIsMagic

I can understand your point of view, but if we DON'T judge, how will we ever weed out the bad stories from the good? The story's not even that well written. In addition to the bad science, it's got numerous spelling and grammatical errors on top of everything. If it was a small part of a larger story, if there had been build-up, consequences, I might have been more merciful, but as it stands...it's just gore porn. It's a low, low thing. And it's NOT worth reading and I think the author did something terrible in writing it. I might have been too harsh in wishing him dead, but I think that writing stuff like that is genuinely BAD for you in more than just a societal sense. I think that this sort of work stains your spirit, that it makes you desensitized to stuff that you should be horrified at, that it makes us think that "because it's a fantasy, it's okay", but it's NOT all okay. And this story certainly isn't. And I stand by that opinion, which is shared by others and backed by literary, moral and societal norm-related facts.

[Eka]

And I stand by that opinion, which is shared by others and backed by literary, moral and societal norm-related facts.

My opinion is that YOUR COMMENTS are not okay. And I stand by that opinion, which is shared by others and backed by literary, moral and societal norm-related facts.

How do you like that?

[Star_Sage]

Off topic, but those looking for a lighter side to everything, check out this page on TVTropes

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/W ... cConfirmed

The last one is my favorite, especially since it's confirmed.

[newenglandee]

I am sorry for getting so angry I wished death on someone, but I am NOT sorry for standing by my opinion on the story itself, even if I owe the author an apology in case I ever see him. Along with a giant "WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING", Eka. I was against that sort of thing two years ago, I'm STILL against it now!

[Eka]

I am sorry for getting so angry I wished death on someone, but I am NOT sorry for standing by my opinion on the story itself, even if I owe the author an apology in case I ever see him. Along with a giant "WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING", Eka. I was against that sort of thing two years ago, I'm STILL against it now!

And this place still don't have a place for you and your condemnation. This place is not made for people to condemn things they don't like. If you find something you don't like, I expect you to leave them alone.

[TeaBucket]

And if I hear ONE! Just ONE person try to tell me that it's not that bad, that it's NOT literary garbage, that it's NOT a spit in the face of everything the show's about, that it's NOT morally repugnant and horrifying that anyone would write it, I WILL FIGHT YOU ON THE SIDE OF THE STREET!!!

I liked this story as it was an interesting take on Pinkie's more than questionable psyche. Let's face it, even if it's horrifically disgusting, it was written well enough to make you feel this emotion. And isn't that what a story should do, portray an emotion?

I'll happily fight you in the street.

edit oh hey I didn't see the rest of the pages. My mistake...

[SuperSpaceZone]

And if I hear ONE! Just ONE person try to tell me that it's not that bad, that it's NOT literary garbage, that it's NOT a spit in the face of everything the show's about, that it's NOT morally repugnant and horrifying that anyone would write it, I WILL FIGHT YOU ON THE SIDE OF THE STREET!!!

I liked this story as it was an interesting take on Pinkie's more than questionable psyche. Let's face it, even if it's horrifically disgusting, it was written well enough to make you feel this emotion. And isn't that what a story should do, portray an emotion?

I'll happily fight you in the street.

edit oh hey I didn't see the rest of the pages. My mistake...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=keh2paoGIrM

[Felfire]

As a brony myself... I hate using that word... a mix of /b/ and pony... egh... but anyway, as one myself it should be normal to find this sort of story disturbing. But through the nature of everything I've seen throughout the internet, and sadly real life, this is classed as mild, if even that. I laughed most of the time through it, especially when Rainbow get her wing cut off, oh god I fell to pieces! But anyway, I could understand a normal, if you could call people in this site normal, people who happen to like ponies getting offended or disturbed by this, but what they have to remember is that it's only a story. It's not even canon to the series, and therefore makes it pointless raging over it. Also, this is classed at the BOTTOM of disturbing MLP fanfics, Sweet Apple Massacre and Trixie's Funhouse are much more disturbing... but still funny... Ciao! :3

[Star_Sage]

Trixie's Funhouse? Got a link and a Desc?

[ublover1]

I'm sorry, I find this hilarious. This story has been on the web for....well, months now I think. I found it a while back when CR on Thatguywiththeglasses.com did his LP of Story of the Blanks, and he mentioned it was Cupcakes all over again(Note, SotB isn't quite this dark, and more uses Zombie Ponies to great effect). I got curious, googled it, and found this, as well as all the vids and stories made based off it. And there's a bunch, seriously, go type this into youtube and see what you get, a lot of the fake movie trailers for this are awesome, and have some great music to build the creepy factor. Heck, if you want, there's worse stories out there. Sweet Apple Massacre comes to mind, that's Big Macintosh doing far worse to the CMC, while they each watch, or there's that one about the Rainbow Factory, where we learn rainbows are made of ponies, mind the ending of that one is just creepy in ways that get under my skin.

BTW, from an author's perspective, while the guy does a good job of describing things, he's got a few things wrong too. The cutting, like he's doing, would be painful at first, but it would also be numb after only a few seconds, like when you could you finger, it stops hurting after a while, and won't hurt again for an hour or so, as adrenaline and blood loss numb the appendage. After I posted my topic asking for comms, this was actually one of my first assignments from an anonymous source, and one I won't post, to make Cupcakes better, basically, instead of blades, I used science! Electro Shock, Acids, and a bit of fire. Those will leave impressions for a while.

Anyway, while I understand the backlash, this has been on the net for a while, and anyone who hasn't seen it and is offended, well, this is what some people like, and I try not to judge. Besides, as an author, stories rarely get to me without a psycho element to them, like the Blogs of the Mane 6 getting mind raped by Discord, especially the epilogue one, which takes place after Discord won. Now that, my friends, is how you make creepy. Well, that and all the other stuff under the fan work tab on the nightmare fuel page on TVtropes.


Yeah i seen that story with the big macntosh and the cutie mark gals lol its was pretty diguestimg buf i enjoyed readimg it it was a pretty good story as well i dont see why people read the storys if they dont like hardvore amd sees it says hardvore lol:)


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[ublover1]

Alright i dont know why my last post posted weird but my comment was at the bottom of it:(

[Somebodyandothers]

I have a sudden "do want" for drawing this whole thing...

I don't see any problems with the story. Sure, it's not arousing, but it's pretty good

[nipnaki]

Not sure if troll thread was intended, but troll thread was the result. Possibilities include bronies getting butthurt over being reminded of this story again, people getting mad (again) that MLP exists, and people who like HV being (entirely reasonably) unamused by pony gore. 8.5/10 for results though.

[C-B-A]

I really don't like MLP so I found the story some what amusing, but the twisted aspect aside I agree that freedom of expression is a must, It's just a story, it's not hurting anyone IRL so I support the author for writing such a story and don't see what getting mad at it will solve.

[TheWickedKing]

I haven't read the story yet (MLP isn't my thing, bro), but this thread has provided with a LOT of entertainment. I'm also okay with "fake" violence, such as the ones in video games, movies, and literature; because, it's just that. Fake. Show me a decapitation in a movie, and I"ll scream "FUCK YEAH!" Show me a mangled corpse after a devastating car accident, and I'll freak right the fuck out.

Also:

[Ka-Atis]

I haven't read the story yet (MLP isn't my thing, bro), but this thread has provided with a LOT of entertainment. I'm also okay with "fake" violence, such as the ones in video games, movies, and literature; because, it's just that. Fake. Show me a decapitation in a movie, and I"ll scream "FUCK YEAH!" Show me a mangled corpse after a devastating car accident, and I'll freak right the fuck out.

Also:

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You beat me to it.

I haven't read the story yet either but dang now curiosity will kill the cat. I laughed out loud several times when looking through this thread, I so hope newenglandee is a troll because anything else would just be sad.

Anyhow - I admit that I'm pretty "evil" when it comes to content of my fantasies, and I can also imagine that some goody two-shoes out there may feel disturbed about it because - yeah, I do indulge in this sort of "evil" - the idea of somebody else's pain, horror and death. But yeah - *idea*, not any actual events. The same things in real life would just make me horrified or sad.

[Ka-Atis]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!

[ublover1]

I agree with u ka-atis i like seeing that stuff in video games and movies as well but just like u id probley freak out seeing someone without a head in real life lol:)