Pokémon The Only Way Is Down (Leon/Pic)

[PumpkinSugarSpice]

Never really draw vore before but thought I would try and at least draw one piece so any critiques is much appreciated, just to point this out, can’t draw charizard, give me a few months XD

[Noxyoursox]

I like the composition of this piece, it's an unusual perspective! As far as critique, the saliva looks pretty scribbly and not really wet (if you look up tutorials on how to draw water and slime, you'll find lots of stuff that applies to saliva), and the charizard's chin looks a bit awkward (I couldn't tell it had one at first). Also Leon's hair seems to be defying gravity a bit, considering he's upside-down.

[MirceaKitsune]

Looking good, I like!