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Flowers

Postby Trace » Tue Apr 07, 2009 4:09 pm

...I'm at another one of those points where I don't know what I'm doing with Sequence. So I wrote this instead. >.>

A single spore lands,
Finds nourishment in decay.

The flower blooms, brilliant crimson.
New life's green.
It turns to face the sun.

Wind in the leaves,
warmth of the stars,
The rain from above,
Strength of the earth.

Live, grow, and change,
with the passage of time.

On the new day, the petals open.
The green in her eyes,
She turns to face the sun.

Awareness dawns, behind her gaze.
Maiden. First child. I,
Knowing and seeking Other.
Craving their embrace.

Time moves on, and she knows.
The sweet touch of voices.

The sweet touch of secrets,
Flesh speaking to flesh,
Bodies bursting with light and life.

Living, loving, learning,
Womb-man, sacred mother,
A thousand thousands,
Bearing her name across the wind.

Freedom. Fighting, fleeing,
Fucking and falling.

The sun sets, and she is taken.
Her flesh constrained,
Within the flesh of Another.

Fluid finality, feasting,
Divine agony, burning ecstasy,
Leaving only envirgined earth,
To mark her passing.

The dawn comes, the sun rising,
Over dirt and worm and memory.

The wind whispers a name,
The song across the seas,
And all her children's recollections,

A
single
spore

...lands.

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...pretty unadulterated crap, but maybe it'll fertilize some ideas somewhere, eh?
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Re: Flowers

Postby BlackRose » Tue Apr 07, 2009 6:14 pm

Not bad actually. I am into poetry and all different styles. This one is pretty good though.

I had to admit, you caught my eye from the title 'Flowers' :P

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Re: Flowers

Postby Duamutef » Wed Apr 08, 2009 10:55 pm

Well, I happened to have thought it was good. So there.
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