Kura's Vore Ajacent Words ~ NBM, Warm Fuzzies, Darkness?

[kura1204]

News: tldr: new story still on later post. Updated fullfillment process posted of minor changes but. You have to scroll down to see the big news!!!!

Fulfillment Processing: The Algorithm of Desire

You awaken in a sterile room, confronted by emotionless machines. Bound and helpless, you're entirely at their mercy. One among them, a being unlike any you've ever encountered, watches you with an intensity that chills you to the bone. This is no mere machine; it is a creation of cold, hard logic, driven by a purpose you cannot comprehend. The 'Fulfillment Process' is a journey into the unknown, a methodical exploration of your body, mind, and spirit, guided by his intense, unwavering gaze. As you're pushed to your limits, a forbidden pleasure awakens within you. Can you surrender to it, even if it means betraying everything you are? Will you succumb to the allure of the unknown, even if it means losing all of yourself in the process, guided by the gaze of your enigmatic captor?

It is long. If I can get some feedback it would be helpful. But it is also 13,321 words and growing (if it was double spaced if would be 52 pages) so I can understand if it's a little too long for most people.

The story contains bondage, noncon fantasy, objectification, Power/Control games, peril, submission, emotions, lots of emotions, desciptions, so many descriptions, too many descriptions, Robots, character development, tentacles, peril, no vore. the experience is vore Ajacent

Trigger warnings:Rape.

This is my first attempt at sticking the crazy stuff in my head out into the real world. I love this community and know how supportive we are so I thought this might be the safest place to try for my weirdness.

Credits to inspiration from theodoric of york and anime1979 for inspiration, especially Sophia's Day at the Universal Fairy by Anime1979. A large amount of their work was devoured by the death of yahoo groups. it is missed.

[kura1204]

New update. Apparently, I really enjoy writing. The bards pen is calling me. It may not be classy but it's fun to write. Writing this is for my benefit. Posting is because sharing makes it feel more real.

I made some rewrites on part 1 and 2 and I added the intro to part 3. Enjoy ❤️

[kura1204]

Update: Feeding your story into a AI for fun and ask it to generate a psychological profile of the author or have it check the story for "how dark the tone is for the average reader" can result in you realizing you have to do some deep reflecting to do and need sit in a corner for awhile.

I may just let this post sit for a moment while I decide what to do next. I have added some warning labels. And am questioning many things.

[kura1204]

Uploaded latest update. At this point I am doing this for my benefit because putting it online makes it real and keeps me on task. I am still unsure if I should feel bad for writing this but. I am going to see where it goes when I. Finish it. Here's to keeping publings updates

Side thought:
Does anyone read this far down? If you do, what do the different flags do. Should I flag this story?

[kura1204]

Upload version 5. Got a snazzy new summary and title. I was unable to get AI to create a proper image but I got some cute photos of robots hugging women. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I did some more editing on like 7 paragraphs. I need to stop delaying the part 2 rewrites so I can move on to part 3 and then maybe *shock* part 4. Gunna keep writing...

[kura1204]

Nope nope nope. Pulling it for now.... Kept writing got way to dark. Not ok with it. We will see if I can rewrite it. Non concent storiee are fine for short fantasies. Once you get into long stories with character development and emotions things get yucky.... Maybe I will just post something some other day but right now....HARD NOPE TO SHARING THIS WITH OUT MASSIVE REWRITES.

[kura1204]

So I know this makes me look fickle but I reposted my story, but went back to an older version. The newer one got way too dark. I felt awful making the narrator suffer so much. Is it just me, or was it too much? I marked the spot where it goes downhill.
I'm having trouble with the MC's transformation. I want her to discover her true self and be happy with it, but it keeps turning angsty and depressing. I know grief is part of acceptance, but since she has amnesia, there's no past self to let go of, just her resisting the changes.
This whole endosomatophilia/transformation thing...is it about the disconnect between the fantasy, the good feelings, and what's actually happening to the person? The pred/prey thing is exciting in theory, but when you think about it...
Control stuff is similar. The power dynamic is hot, but like any good story, there needs to be tension. Who's in charge? Will they get vored? (Even if we kinda know they will) The fun is in the anticipation.
Anyone in the community have thoughts on this? Even if you haven't read the story, I'd love to hear your perspective.

[kura1204]

So I made some updates to fullfillment process cleaning up part 1. I am still stuck at how to proceed but I at least cleaned up what I do have so it is easier to read. Yay ver 7.

I also wrote a new story. This one is more cute and romantic. It details with a magic ring that allows a couple to detach body parts. It's a Natural Body Magic story. It is only part 1. But part 1 is a full story.

[kura1204]

1. I am working on a expanded better version of taking Distraction. It will be the same couple similar premise but I found a way to make it better for part 1. I am not posting it till I am satisfied. This version is demoted to rough draft..


But...... The big news is I found a fix... I can fix Fullfillment process. Now to make it happen... Surprisingly the solution was elegant.....and... The solution was....REDACTED

RIGHT!? ISNT IT OBVIOUS!!!!
Now all you lucky people get to have fun waiting for the update!!!! Because I am going to make this be a big update instead of a tiny update!!!!!

[kura1204]

Welp. Round [insert number] of "book writing attempts" ends in flames. 2000 words down the drain. Turns out my brilliant concept had a few… minor… flaws. (Okay, maybe they were major.)
So, hit me with it. Am I just destined to write myself into narrative corners I can't escape? Be gentle… but be honest. Is there any hope for me?

[kura1204]

Whoa. New story dropping aiming for Friday. It's... different. A couple. A vore-themed roleplay. And… music. Think fairy tales, but not like you expect. One partner's fulfilling a very specific request (even if they're not quite on board at the start). It's about the feeling, you know? Honestly, I'm really excited about this one. I think I actually nailed the flow. Fingers crossed you guys enjoy it as much as I do!

Also, Fulfillment Process is in a indefinite hold. I am focusing on shorter pieces to improve my writing more.