(FIRST STORY!) Voresburgh: The Break Up

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(FIRST STORY!) Voresburgh: The Break Up

Postby DanTheWriterGuy » Sun Aug 28, 2022 5:55 pm

This is my first time posting a Vore story, so I’m a little nervous haha. I have this one requested to be added to a gallery but figured I’d post it here for feedback as well! If y’all enjoy, I have LOTS more to come!

Tags: M/F, Same Size, Unwilling, Oral Vore, Male Pred, Female Prey, Graphic Digestion, Bones

Voresburgh: The Break Up


Dan’s alarm blaring woke him from a deep slumber, as it did most days. And as with most day, he had been awoken from a fabulous dream in which he had stuffed himself to bursting with a couple very busty females, and an especially cute guy. He murmured a bit as he rolled over, searching his bed for his fiancé, only to find the space next to him empty. He sat up, his dog tags jingling against his bare, firm chest and scanned the room.

“Kathryn?” He asked, searching for his lover. He rolled himself out of bed and gazed briefly at his naked body in the wall mirror as the sheets fell from him. His muscle definition was not where he liked hit, but still leagues ahead of most men his age. What always stood out was his massive cock, stood at full mast due to the pleasant dream he had been having. His baseball sized balls hung heavy and low below him, the cum inside giving the slightest audibly gurgle and slosh as he moved. He threw on a pair of grey sweat pants and his crocs, but remains shirtless, as he trodded down the hall to his kitchen.

When he reached the kitchen, he found Kathryn standing in her bathrobe, a full cup of tea in her hand, staring out the back door. She had shoulder length hair that curled every which way, stood at barely 5 feet tall, and had a nice pair of 34DD breasts on her chest that heaved slightly with each breath she took. A small blue/green turtle hung from a thin necklace and nestled itself between the mounds on her chest, a birthday gift from Dan at one point.

“You up early”, Dan mumbled as he shuffled over to make himself a cup of coffee, “everything okay?”

Kathryn continued to gaze out of the sliding glass door, her thumb aimlessly fiddling with her engagement as she held her tea in her small hands.

“Honestly, Dan? I have no idea”, the woman sighed softly. Her eyes had the hard, but caring look they usually did, but the brightness in them seemed off. “I’ve been thinking about a lot recently…”

Dan stopped pouring his coffee and turned to face Kathryn, his heart almost stopping in his chest. He had feeling he knew what was coming but dreaded being right. “What do you mean, my love?” He asked carefully. He stepped towards her and she gently backed away, looking down at her tea.

Kathryn hesitated a minute, still toying aimlessly with the ring he had given her the year prior. “I just…I’ve been feeling different recently…” her eyes shifted from her tea, to her painted toes, and slowly climbed Dan’s muscular, 5’8” frame.

Dan stood in front her and stuffed his hands in his pockets, “What do you mean, Kate,” he asked softly, already starting to process what he believed what he was about to be told. Kathryn sighed again before continuing. “I’m going to be straight about this. I love you. I swear I do. But the last few months I’ve been thinking…that I’m not IN LOVE with you…anymore…”

Dan nearly stopped breathing. Five years. Five years he had been dreading these words. But then, there was a nagging thought in the back of his head. Relief. A sense of knowing this was coming and accepting it. The signs had all been there. The relationship had bee feeling empty for a while. And so had his stomach. An almost inaudible growl emanated from his stomach as he stared at his fiancé.

“How…how long have you been thinking about this?..” Dan asked quietly. “A few months now,” Kathryn responded, “things just…don’t feel the same.” Dan’s mind raced as an old daydream he repressed for years started to resurface. “Months? And you never in all that time thought you mention it to me or talk to me about it?” His stern response received a rather pissed off look from the woman. “THAT is exactly why I didn’t tell you.”
“What? So we could communicate properly? Like a NORMAL couple??”
Kathryn scoffed, “Communication? Normal?? You’re the one who never communicates, and NOTHING about you is normal. You’re little ‘extra curricular’ activities were a little fun to start but now…it honestly weirds me out the more I think about”

Dan’s face turned solemn upon hearing this revelation. “So…all that about accepting me and my…dietary choices…was bullshit, yeah?”
Kathryn set her tea down on the table and stormed up to him. “Not at first, but now? Yeah. It’s pretty damn weird.” She stepped right up to him and poked his chiseled, bare chest. “And nevermind the fact that you disappear for hours, DAYS, at a time without even TELLING me where you’re going. How am I supposed to know if you’re okay? If you’re safe?? You tell me NOTHING.”
“I should HAVE to,” Dan argued, staring down at the woman, “we’ve been together 5 years Kate, you can’t just trust me??”

She sniffed and backed up a step and looked him in the eyes. After a moment of silence he asked, “Is there any talking about this? Or is your mind made up?” Kathryn stared at his blue eyes for a moment before responding. “I’m done, Daniel. This isn’t gonna keep working.” Dan sighed, defeated. He had been expecting this, but hoped it wouldn’t happen. But now…the old daydream resurfaced again, of brown hair being slurped up like pasta and the weight filling his stomach…filling him…his stomach growled louder this time. Kathryn glanced down at his toned middle, then quickly back up at him as her mind processed where his was going. “Fine.” He said matter of factly.

“Wait —“ She barely got the word out of her mouth before he was on her, his jaw distending like a snake and enveloping her head in his dark, wet maw. She struggled in his grip, her muffled protests barely making it through his thick neck as she was shoved unceremoniously into his throat and down his gullet. He reached her shoulders in no time, pushing the robe off her body revealing her bare chest and purple panties. The robe fell to the floor as his stretched mouth worked its way to her voluptuous chest. He popped both breasts into his mouth like jawbreakers, his cheeks ballooning out like a chipmunk.

As he ran his tongue over the mounds of flesh in his mouth, the protests within him changed to a brief moan, eliciting a slight smirk from the fit predator. He moved his hands from her arms to hips, gently squeezing the light chub she had there and lifted her into the air, her ass and legs dangling from his mouth. He shoved her now former lover deeper into salivating maw, swallowing hard as she was shoved through his esophagus on a one way trip to the depths of his toned belly.

When his lips reached her ass, her head entered his stomach and started to bulge out his normally tight belly, the rest of her body bulging out his throat and chest. Her screams of protest became more easily audible through his stomach but he barely heard her as the bliss of feeling her in him washed over him. He gave her small, yet shapely, ass a slap as he grabbed her legs and continued to stuff her inside him. Her legs kicked wildly until his tongue brushed her pussy as it entered his mouth next. He spent a few minutes using his tongue to pleasure her in all the ways he knew she liked until her legs stop kicking and gently shook from orgasm, a loud moan being heard from his rapidly expanding midsection.

With this done, he placed his hands on her ankles and shoved her legs in up to her calves. At this point his placed one hand on the seal of his back and the other on his bulging belly, letting just his hard gulps and gravity pull the woman deeper into him. He placed the hand from his back on the bottoms of her feet and gently pushed until her paint toes disappeared between his lips. He stood like this a moment, his belly nearly filled, the rest of his former fiancé’s body bulging out his throat and chest. He loved this part. Feeling the weight filling him so throughly, this absolute dominance over a human being. And he had wanted this. He finally allowed himself to admit that he had wanted to do this since the day he met her. But he had repressed the feeling due to the love he felt for her. Now that she was through with him, he let the hunger over take the love. He knew he would regret it in a few months, possibly in a few days. But for now, he was in ecstasy. After a moment, he gave two final titanic swallows and let out gasp he felt his former lover finally settle into the depths of his now massive, fat belly. His stomach was so tight around her she could barely move, and the movements she did make jostled and sloshed his belly in such a satisfying way. He waddled his stuffed form over to the couch, kicking the discarded robe to the side and plopped himself down, his belly sloshing loudly as it shifted and settled itself on his lap. He placed a hand on the huge, round mound of flesh, the outline of his fiancé just barely visible and rubbed his belly lovingly, so satisfied at the full feeling. He heard a tremendous gurgle start building up and felt pressure work it’s way up his throat until a titanic belch that shook the windows of his home escaped his lips. The burp ejected a pair of saliva soaked purple panties, a turtle necklace, and the ring. The items laid to rest on his fat belly, except the ring, which bounced off him and landed on the floor. He regarded the panties and necklace, then removed them from his belly, balled them up together, and open his mouth. He placed them in the back of his mouth, and fished his phone out of his pocket. He used the front facing camera to start recording a video, mouth still wide open, and swallowed the ball of items back down to their owner in his stomach. After watching his throat close on the ball and reopen to show nothing left, he smiled at the camera.

“All gone.” He said, in a rather seductive tone. He used the camera to follow the path of the items back down his throat and into his belly, showing off the massive mound and giving it a firm slap, a muffled cry coming from the feminine form obviously inside him. “Guess I’m single now,” he stated, before releasing another massive belch, “feel free to hit me up if you’re an interested party.” With a wink and a few pats on his stomach, he shut off the camera. He would post it to his VoreTube channel later, but for now, he leaned his head back and sighed, relishing the feeling of a whole human being stuffing his belly so completely. His stomach groaned and growled as it eagerly began to go to work on the woman inside him. The muffled screams and yells coming from his gut didn’t bother him at all, he’d heard them all before. What did catch his attention was the glint from the ring, still on the floor. He heaved himself forward and leaned over to pluck it up, a few satisfied cracks and snaps silencing the screams within him as his leaned over his belly. He held the ring in his hand a moment before resting it on his belly and starting at it, sitting atop the mound of flesh that now emitted groans and gurgles as it’s only sound.

He felt his cock pressing hard against his sweat pants, and with a grin and pushed them to his ankles, freeing the 14” member, his huge balls jostling against the edge of the couch. He started to move his hand up and down the shaft, moaning and moving faster as the feeling of being so very full made him so very aroused. As he was approaching his climax, another gurgle started from the base of his belly and worked its up his throat. A second titanic belch escaped his mouth, this time accompanied by a pristine, white, albeit saliva coated, skull. The bone rested atop his belly, right next to the ring. Dan’s eyes became wild with arousal and the speed of his masturbating increased as he looked into the empty sockets of the skull of his former fiancé who was very occupied being digested inside his big, fat, bloated belly. With a final groan, he shot thick ropes of warm up into the air, landing back on his stomach and coating the underside of his belly and the skull atop him.

After the last rope spurted from his cock, he let the softening member fall from his hands. He got his camera back out and once again opened the front facing camera. He picked up the cum and saliva soaked skull and presented it like a trophy to the camera before placing it back in his mouth, and as before, leaving his mouth gaping open as he swallowed the skull back down. He gave his belly another slap as it shifted and sloshed like water now that the firm inside him was unrecognizable as human. After stopping the recording, he sent the first one to a close friend, along with the message, “it finally happened. Come by when your free”. He set his phone down, and leaned back, another belch rocking the apartment as he drifted into a very satisfied nap.
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Re: (FIRST STORY!) Voresburgh: The Break Up

Postby TheHungrySpeedrunner » Sun Aug 28, 2022 11:37 pm

This is really good! Of course I’m biased since I love male vore and graphic digestion, but all the details were there. I love long elaborate swallowing sequences and I know many others do too, so I certainly suggest you continue with that. I even liked the skull being belched up that was a nice touch, at least for me.

Also, not a critique or advice, but as someone who likes fast digestion, I’m wondering how fast he digested her. It didn’t seem to take too long but then again each man takes wildly different times to reach climax lol!

Ps: one final question: is “the break up” a pun on the fact that she got broken up in his stomach? If so I like your title naming already!
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