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First time writing . Took a break and wrote new story

Postby unreal216 » Sat Feb 19, 2022 3:19 am

F/m oral vore,f/f vore new. death,physical violence, light humor

Rescue in splinterfell forest

It's late in the morning, I awoke to the bright sunlight scattering through the branches and leaves of the tree I'm sleeping in, I grimace covering my face to shield my eyes from the rays of the sun. "I knew I shouldn't have slept in the trees, at least if I were in a cave I would have been able to sleep longer without the blasted sun waking me up."

I sit up rubbing my eyes to get the gunk out of them, and opening them slightly to adjust to the light. I look-out around me, I've forgotten just how high up I am, about fifty-five feet off the ground. Getting my bearings and fully awakened, I start climbing down from the tree.

Upon reaching the ground the realization of just how messy sleeping in a tree is. I have twigs and sap stuck in my hair, and on my body, "great just more crap I got to deal with today. Thanks a lot you lousy tree!". With my annoyance toward the tree successfully vented, I decide to go to the river and wash myself along with what I'm wearing.

As I'm moving through the forest trail towards the river, a gentle breeze blows through the trees. The whooshing of the leaves against the wind, birds chirping all around, It almost reminds me of home.
Continuing in the direction of the river, I start comparing the trees here to trees in Titan Wood Forest.
"The trees here are like saplings in comparison to the titan wood trees back home." I miss visiting the titan wood tribes, the tree houses they have are a sight to behold, though sometimes I wonder why I ran away and left my family, why the humans started attacking our people? Ever since Prince Harold took over for his dying father King Saladin, things have become a nightmare for us. It's been six months since I left home. Why did everything have to turn out this way?

I continue moving enjoying the sounds of nature, when I hear the familiar sound of rushing water. A line of bushes mark the river's edge. "Finally here at last."
I think. Arriving at Bark hide river. I remove my cowhide bra and enter the water, "Whoooo this water's cold, not warm like back home. This place sucks. Well no use complaining, just grit and bear it." I start to wash my red hair, working to get all the dirt and twigs out. The slight curl returns as it hangs well past my shoulders. Such a pain to maintain. Once I'm done washing my hair I begin washing my chest and arms paying close attention to my breasts, they are on the larger side, dirt routinely gets trapped between them as well as under them, useless things I could do without them. It's very annoying how demanding the human half of me is. "I hate whoever my father was for getting with my mother. It is ridiculous having to wash all the time. Why couldn't I have been normal? I'm the only girl that has human skin in all of the village's back home. Everyone else is normal but me! None of the other girls have these bags on their chests, why did I have to be different? They don't have to worry about taking baths as often as I do." I complain, scrubbing the dirt from my chest and neck.
I turn my attention to my sides taking care to wash the scales that run up my waist. They are the only redeeming factor to my human half, they sparkle like gems when the sun hits them just right. At least I don't have to worry about dry skin there or abrasions, like I get elsewhere.
Moving further down my body, I begin washing my tail, the scales dulled by the dirt covering them, I adore this part of me, the deep red on the sides and the blue diamond pattern with red inlays on top, each scrub revealing the beauty beneath. I run my hands along my body feeling the soft yet strong texture of the scales under my fingers. I love this part of myself and I treasure it most.


While washing myself, I begin cleaning my garment wondering what else to do. "hmm I guess I could go and see what the locals are doing today, maybe visit Fanara and people-watch. Just gotta be careful not to be seen, don't want another incident like what happened on the ship ride over here. That was stressful."

hour's pass the sun high when I finally get out of the water. Deciding to start small I head toward the road north of the river to see if anyone's using it as it's a major trade route between Fanara and Witherford someone's bound to be using it.

It's not far from here, just a short slither away. After a while of traveling I pause, something seems off. The area is way too quiet. I turn my gaze to the trees, normally there are birds singing, instead, I only hear crows cawing in the distance.There is a light haze as well. Minutes pass before I decide to move on.

Approaching the road, the smell of smoke hangs in the air. Curious, I quicken my pace, while trying to stay concealed in the bushes and undergrowth of the forest. Just ahead I see a carriage that appears to be overturned. Smoke rising from it. Moving closer, I see several bodies lying on the ground, five all together. I notice one lying against the carriage, with the crest of Fanara on their armor..
I move from the bushes out onto the road, to see if anyone is alive.The ground is covered in blood , the cold dead eyes of the men wide open, The carriage is empty and spattered with blood."What the hell happened here?"I whispered.

Suddenly out of the corner of my eye I see movement to my left. Turning to look I see a man on horseback staring at me, eyes wide with his hands clenched tightly on the reigns. On his chest, the crest of Fanara, like the others. Frozen in place I just stare back at him, eyes darting to his small bow and dagger, heart pounding, scared out of my mind, "shit I was so distracted looking at all this mess I didn't even hear him approach, why did I think coming out on the road was a good idea? I should have stayed in the bushes, me being here, with all this, looks bad. Really bad."

The silence is maddening, both of us just staring at each other, then he finally speaks, "what the hell did you do!?"his voice cracking.
"I didn't do anything, I just happened upon this mess, it was like this when I got here." I reply
" Bull shit! I don't believe you! What the hell are you anyway, some kind of monster, lurking about attacking people in the woods?" He says drawing his bow.
"I already told you I didn't do this!, and I'm no monster, just calm down and let's just talk this out, no need for this to get violent!"
I begin to advance towards him slightly. "This is bad, if he decides to run and tell everyone back at the castle what he thinks I did, I'm in huge trouble! I can't let him leave alive."

Caught between a rock and a hard place my options are limited, "he is too far away for me to rush him, not to mention the fact he's on horseback.This is going to be difficult, I've got to get closer to him to have any chance of grabbing him."

I continue making small movements in his general direction to try and close the distance. "Don't come any closer, or I'll kill you where you stand!" I stop momentarily noticing he has an arrow ready to fire.
"Darn I'm not close enough yet, just ten yards away even if I charged him from this distance he'd still get the shot off, maybe I can use that to my advantage." I continue advancing towards him. "Hey now there is no need to be hasty, I just want to talk that's all."
"We can talk just fine from where you are, don't think I won't shoot you if you don't stop."He replies

Feeling like this is the only chance I have, I charge him trying to close the distance, startling him as he fires his arrow like I thought he would. Reacting as quickly as I can, I slide to a stop and wrap myself with my tail shielding my torso from his attack. His arrow strikes my scales, deflecting off of them harmlessly, catching him further off guard. I lunge out from my defensive stance,
"Oh shit!" he screams, starting to turn his horse to run.
Covering the last few feet just as he is starting to get going,I launch myself at him, but his horse is fast. I reach out trying to grab him before he gets away. The only thing I manage to grab is his quiver on his back, but he is one step ahead of me. Before I know it the strap snaps away from him leaving me falling to the ground arms swinging as I go.

I crash onto earth, knocking the wind out of me groaning, writhing on the ground, and nothing to show for it but a quiver of arrows, "dammit I almost had him, the fucker must have cut it off when i grabbed it. Things just got way worse. I've got to get out of here fast, before he gets back to town and reports what he thinks happened. might as well grab anything worth having before I make myself scarce., It can't hurt to take what's left behind, they won't need it anymore, the gold and silver will come in handy. I wonder what's in the carriage? I never got a chance to get a good look at it."

After gathering anything of value from the area, I turn my attention back to the carriage. Peering inside the walls and seats are lined in plush red silk, the windows look to be plated in gold as well. "huh this is a really swanky carriage. I wonder who it belonged to?" Continuing my search of the interior something glittering catches my eye . " what's this under here?” “oh it's a tiara, a very pretty one at that. Picking it up it's triangular in shape,crusted in rubies and sapphires. a depiction of a dragon showering a knight in flames at its center. I wonder what this is doing in he...re. '' Looking around the carriage frantically I see a marking on the interior wall next to the door. "oh fuck!, This is a royal carriage! No wonder they sent someone looking for it. Now everyone will think I attacked the king's family, oh fuck fuck fuck I think im going to be sick! This is absolutely horrible! Oh lord, why did it have to be a royal carriage? They will hunt me down, and there's no way I can talk my way out of this ahhhhhhh!!"

After a few minutes of absolute panic, I begin to regain my composure. "Ok, let's think about this logically, I don't see anyone that looks to be a royal, just guards, so the person they were escorting might be hiding nearby. I should look around for clues to where they went. I just hope they're alive or I'm so screwed!"

Leaving the carriage, I begin looking for tracks around the site in the mud, each passing minute critical to finding them. I contemplate just giving up and taking my chances running, and hoping it just blows over when I see three sets of footprints leading away from the carriage. One set is smaller than the other two and by its gate and how the mud is deformed would suggest the smaller of the tracks were running to the south, followed by the other two at a slower pace."Hmm someone left here in a hurry, and was followed, hopefully it's whoever was in the carriage, I better hurry.”

With a trail to follow, I rush off in the direction that they lead. Not long after, I notice a scrap of light blue material snagged on a thorny bush. Upon closer inspection it looks to be made partly of cotton and silk "yea they definitely went this way gotta hurry I just hope I find them, whoever they are.” A few minutes pass, as I lose the other two sets of tracks on the trail, only the smaller set remains though it looks like they might have slowed down a little from how they're gate has changed, not long after, I see a white jeweled slipper stuck in the mud, its owner must have abandoned it in their hurry to escape. Picking it up I notice that it's slightly warm, meaning that they were here not long ago. "They gotta be close. They are female based on the evidence. Better hurry up and find her before whoever is following her does."

I continue following the trail. About five minutes later I see in the distance what looks to be a young woman in a blue sundress with brown hair running between the trees,
A few seconds later, I see two more people dressed in black and brown with hoods covering their heads. giving chase towards her, each of them look to be armed. Taking off, I follow them deeper into the forest. As far as I can tell the people chasing her are either bandits or slavers.

Continuing my pursuit, I watch as the girl suddenly trips on some tree roots and falls to the ground. She tries to get up and continue running but is grabbed by one of her pursuers, she begins to thrash around screaming, "Let me go don't touch me let me go you piece of shit someone help!"

Approaching the area I stay close to the bushes watching the scene unfold. The one holding her is a tall man with an average build,the other close behind, is shorter,and female judging by her ample feminine features; a strand of her long red hair hangs in front of half her face.
The male holding the girl speaks up, "oh stop fighting you’re not going anywhere." The girl continues to thrash, knocking his hood off his head, revealing his face. He has short black hair, brown eyes with a large scar across his right cheek, his colleague remains silent, slowly looking over the girl trapped in his arms.

I sit there contemplating on how to proceed, the girl being held continues her efforts to free herself from his grasp, kicking and flailing as hard as she can. "You have no idea who you are messing with! I'm princess Satera, daughter of the King of Fanara! Both of you will be hanged for what you have done!" She yells.

"Ohh we know who you are sweetheart, though it's not smart to go around advertising that. Nevertheless we got plans for ya so behave and you won't be harmed." the female bandit says. looking at her with an evil grin.
"Yea so many plans." The male bandit says groping her breasts through her dress.
"Don't touch me you fucking pig" Satera says. nailing the male bandit square in the nose.

A loud crack can be heard as the shorter bandit slaps her across the face saying "you're in no position to be telling us what to do sweetheart, so just shut up. There is no one here to save ya, or hear you scream; and scream you will before we are done. Tie her up Bog, we wouldn't want her to run off now would we. She has already caused us enough trouble for today".
"Right away mam." he replies, blood still pouring from his nose as he squeezes the princesses breast, eliciting a sharp pained squeal from the princess, then pulling a length of rope from his satchel, he starts binding her hands and feet.

Still out of sight in the bushes, I think about how to proceed. There isn't much I can do while both of them are present. I decide it's best that I just stay concealed and wait for an opportunity. To try and rescue the princess at a later time when I have the advantage. "It's too risky to attack them head on, it might be better to wait until nightfall when they are not as alert, and I have the element of surprise on my side."

By this time, Bog has finished tying up the princess, hefting her over his shoulder, "ok Ren she's secure!" he says waiting on the other bandit to give an order. "So what's the plan now? Damn I think she broke my nose." Bog says, twisting his nose, setting it back into place with a loud crunch.
"Oh quit your bellyaching Bog,” Ren answers, “you should have held her better if you were gonna play with her, and I already told you, we are taking her back to camp, then bringing her to the boss, so they can send the king a ransom letter for her return."

"Oh yea I forgot about that, I was hoping to have some fun with her beforehand you know." Bog replies.

"Yes I know, the only head that works is the one between your legs. Sometimes I wonder how you survive. All you do is think of screwing and when you get to fuck next, it's pathetic how simple minded you are. One day that dick of yours is going to get you killed." Ren says, rubbing the bridge of her nose with a very annoyed look on her face.

"Well no need to be rude I just like fucking is all, and I'm not simple minded I just know what I like, and that's sex.” he replies.

"Yea yea enough about that. Let's get back to camp, and you can have your fun. Just don't come crying to me if she breaks something else haha." Ren says

"Take the bonds off and I'll break more than you're nose! satera yells."

"Har har har very funny, though I'll be the one breaking something tonight."Bog replies

With that Ren starts walking away with Bog not far behind carrying the princess, a look of indignation on her face as well as fear of what's to come.

Sticking to the shadows, I begin trailing them staying out of sight in the brush while close enough for them to be in eye-shot.

Two hours of traveling later, I see in the distance a tent next to a cave. Having never been to this side of the forest, I notice the trees here look sick, some are even dead, and the air smells like rotten eggs that were left out in the sun for a week. Looking eastward I can see some thorny bushes next to the camp and a small blackened area in the center for their campfires. Above it, a pot hangs from a metal rig.

Arriving, Bog drops the princess onto the ground hard with a thud, a look of pain plastered on her face as she writhes on the ground, "why are you doing this? " she asks with tears in her eyes.

"Turnabout is fair-play, you injured me, I return it with interest." Bog replies

"That's enough Bog! We don't need her injured, just get over it. You will get to take your frustration out on her in a more fun way later, so knock it off."
"Yes mam,"Bog replies.


Patiently I wait as several hours pass, and darkness rolls in. Ren and Bog sit next to the fire, scanning the area, when Ren stands," Ok Bog I'm turning in for the night just don't be too loud, because if I have to come out here I'm kicking your ass you got that?"
"Yes I understand, you always take the fun out of it all. one day you'll let me in your tent and I'll show you a great time just like the princess is about to get." Bog says with a wink toward Ren.
"Haaa yea no that will never happen. I don't want to be split in half. I've heard how you treat people with that thing, so keep dreaming bud." Ren says, waving off Bogs remarks.

With that Ren goes into the cave leaving Bog and the princess alone outside. Seeing my opportunity, I move to the bushes on the east side of the camp, away from the cave and next to the tent, not too far from the princess.
"Well I guess it's just you and me princess. time to make you a woman. I've never gotten to fuck a princess before. This should be fun." He says advancing towards her.
"Stay back, don't come near me!" she says, trying to scoot away from him.

Losing his shirt, Bog bears down on Satera, lust in his eyes. Princess Satera struggles to get away, but is stopped by her bonds as Bog grabs her by her legs pulling her towards him then starts to tear her clothes off,as she screams for him to stop .He rips the front of her dress open and her modest breasts pop out, Bog immediately starts roughly groping her breasts causing princess sateria to cry out in pain, sobbing while the assault continues.
It's hard to watch the princess in such a state being manhandled, the anguish and humiliation she is enduring,not to mention the mental trauma, just watching this makes my blood boil. Deciding I've let this travesty go on for far too long I start moving around behind them to put an end to this, and I know just how to do it.
Bog continues his abuse of the princess. Leaving the top half of her gown in shreds, and her breasts bruised from the rough treatment. Bog starts ripping the lower half of her dress to get to his real prize, her maidenhood, and just when he reveals her most private place, he is met by the bane of his existence. A chastity belt there to thwart the efforts of his conquest.
Princess Satera smirks for the first time," hah i cant believe you thought you where actually going to get to fuck me. Pathetic, you are just as dumb as you look. hahaha!"
Her laughter is cut short when Bog grabs her by the throat, squeezing it hard causing the princess to frantically struggle, panic in her eyes as her airway is cut off.
"So you think this is funny? Well let's see how funny it is when I'm through with you, there are other ways to get that belt off you see. Very painful ways." Bog continues his face twisting to a manic expression as he chokes Princess Satera. Princess Satera starts to lose consciousness as the bandit’s grip tightens. "I’ll teach you to mock me you bit-"
Before Bog can finish his sentence he feels something wrap around his chest and arms snapping tight before he can react, pulling his hands away from the princess and pinning them to his sides.
"What the fuck?" Bog says confused about what's happening.
"So you like to abuse young women, do you? Well I for one love putting dirtbags like you in your place." I say my mouth right next to bogs ear.
Who the hell are you? What is this? Let me go dammit!"
“Oh don't you worry about who I am,me and you are about to get very well acquainted in just a moment, but answer me just one question. Why did you kidnap the Princess of Fanara?" I slowly turn Bog around, still wrapped up in my tail awaiting his response.
"Ha, you really think I’ll tell you anything? You don't scare me- What the hell?" Bog's eyes go wide, finally seeing what has him trapped so tightly. Beads of sweat appear on his face.
Lifting Bog slightly off the ground with the lower part of my tail, I hold him in the air just a couple feet away from me staring at him. Turning my attention to the princess, she is still lying on the ground behind Bog unconscious from her ordeal. Unaware of my presence at the moment.
Returning my attention back to Bog he is trembling his mouth slightly ajar. “I thought you weren't afraid of me, tough guy then why are you shaking so hmmm? Surely I as a woman don't frighten you". I pull him closer now just inches from his face, “now won't you answer my question, or do I need to squeeze harder?“
Bog visibly panicking stammers " I..I can't say! D..do y..your worst there are w... worse t.. things that will h.. happen to me if I t..tell you anything.”
"Worse things ehh well then if you won't tell then I have no use for you then" I say, squeezing him tighter, his face turning shades of red and blue from the pressure, unable to breathe. After squeezing him for a while I loosen my grip allowing him to breath his face returning to normal gasping for breath. "Doesn't feel good does it? Not being able to breathe? Now you know how she felt while you were beating her up and choking her."
Bog just looks around seemingly regaining his composure then yelling "Ren hel-!"
I cut him off by shoving the end of my tail into his mouth just as he screams for his companion. Looking around I don't hear or see evidence that he got her attention at least for now. "Ohhhh dumb move Bog. It seems you're a bigger liability than I thought. Remember when you said there were worse things than what I could do to you? Well you're about to find out just how bad it gets. Hope you're ready.”

I start shifting my tail lower away from his shoulders, all the while keeping my tail firmly lodged in his mouth to prevent him yelling for help again, Bog then hears some popping sounds then realizes where they are coming from. A look of horror on his face as my jaw dislocates and my mouth opens abnormally wide, and keeps getting wider and wider, at this point Bog is struggling and wiggling as hard as he can to escape but to no avail, the last thing he sees is my mouth enveloping him, plunging him into darkness. I continue pushing him into my mouth until he reaches the back of my throat. I remove my tail from his mouth and begin swallowing him using the rest of my tail to keep him restrained, slowly feeding him into me.

As I'm dealing with Bog, I see Princess Satera begin to stir having recovered from her abuse. I hurry to finish with Bog before she notices and causes a scene,swallowing much faster trying to get him packed away, but his struggles hamper my progress. Only up to his shoulders, I decide that I need to hurry this along even faster. I start shoving him down my throat, the large bulge descending much faster. Now past his stomach only his hips and legs remain his form starting to make my stomach expand as he is pushed in further. Another few large swallows and just his feet remain the muffled cries of Bog barely audible through my stomach. Now with Bog as just a writhing mass of bumps rolling around one last swallow sends his feet down to join him I trace the bulge as it travels down my chest reveling in the sensation. It's been a while since I've had the pleasure of eating someone.
Still lost in predatory bliss I've missed for so long, my euphoria is cut short upon hearing a piercing shriek of Princess Satera screaming as she stares at me in horror. Moving quickly, I rush over and slam my hand over her mouth to silence her incessant shriek.
"Shut Up I'm not here to hurt you but that all could change if you don't calm down, if I wanted to hurt you then you would be where this guy is, so are you going to behave?, or do I have to eat you to? Your choice” I gesture to the writhing mass of Bog's useless struggles.
The princess just nods her head tears streaming from her eyes
"Good now I'm going to let go of your mouth so no screaming. got it?”
Another series of rapid nods ensues
"Ok then," I say, releasing her mouth. I look around making sure we are still alone,. "Ok let's get these bindings off you. We gotta get you out of here before the other one shows up." I say working to free her hands and feet.
"Why are you doing this? What are you doing here?" Satera asks, a perplexed look on her face.
"It's a long story, but we got to go, no time to explain." I replied, still removing her binds. Once her hand and feet are free I rise and reach to help the princess up. "Ok now let's get going… hey are you okay?" I say looking down at her but get no response, then I realize she is just staring at the large mass that is Bog, still slightly thrashing about. "Oh sorry I was in such a hurry I forgot he was still there, let me move him elsewhere."

"Huh what do you mean" Satera replies, visibly confused by what she just heard.
Waving off her comment I focus flexing my muscles the bulge in my stomach slowly starts moving down to the area where my tail starts, I flex harder finding it difficult to get Bog to go down he is fighting against my stomach, and has wedged himself in there.
Finding myself at a stalemate I use my hands and start pushing down while Flexing as hard as I can after a few seconds of shoving, his lower half pops into my tail the area where my hips would be bulges out with his partial transition,"arghhh,just go down you stubborn little shit there's no use resisting might as well go down with some dignity I'm going to get you in there one way or another." But Bog continues fighting, starting to try and climb back out of my tail. This shoving match continues for a couple more minutes when I realize why I'm having such a hard time. I lift myself higher off the ground, moving Bog to a more vertical position. I start pushing Bog down again; with the new orientation he slides down into my tail much easier, the bulge passes my hip area much faster than before and very little resistance from Bog even though he is still fighting to escape, with no leverage now and he slips further and further down my tail behind me."Whew, that took way longer than it should have, sorry that you had to watch that now let's go."

"Ok,but I never got your name."satera responds.
"Oh it's Dalina, now be quiet."

We begin to make our way out of the camp when I notice the princess is having a hard time walking." Hey, are you okay?”
"No, I don't think I can walk very well. That bastard must have hurt me worse than I thought." she says punching the bulge that Bog is making.

" You do realize you're not just punching him right." I say lifting her off the ground.
"Oh sorry, I forgot he was inside you. I've never seen anyone like you, where are you from? "
“I'll tell you later for now we got to get as far away as we can before she wakes up." I carry the princess out of the camp heading back to the north toward her carriage, Ren unaware of what transpired, at least until she wakes up. What a shock that wil be.



Getting near the end of the story now keep in mind I'm new to writing and my grammar skill leave much to be desired and any feedback is appreciated whether it's ment to help or hurt I just appreciate you took the time to read it

CURRENT END OF STORY will be continued later BY
KILLZONE1123 aka unreal216 ©️ 6/4/2022
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Postby R_U_Snacksize » Mon Feb 21, 2022 7:25 pm

I liked the part of the swallowing and getting Bog down to the tail area.
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Postby unreal216 » Mon Feb 21, 2022 7:41 pm

I'm glad you enjoyed it I wasn't sure if I did the swallowing and struggling with Bog correctly
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Postby NamelessLurker » Sat Mar 05, 2022 11:16 am

This did not quite take the direction I first thought it would. Very nice.
The only thing I think could be improved is some punctuation, but as long as one can follow the story it's not that important.
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Postby unreal216 » Sat Mar 05, 2022 6:03 pm

What direction did you think it was going if I may ask
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Postby SunnyCGI » Mon Mar 07, 2022 12:25 pm

Awesome^^
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Postby unreal216 » Mon Mar 07, 2022 3:04 pm

Thanks to everyone who took the time to read this
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Postby NamelessLurker » Wed Mar 09, 2022 2:34 pm

unreal216 wrote:What direction did you think it was going if I may ask

Not really sure. Maybe a bad end for the guard who caught her in a bad looking situation?
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Postby unreal216 » Wed Mar 09, 2022 5:27 pm

NamelessLurker wrote:
unreal216 wrote:What direction did you think it was going if I may ask

Not really sure. Maybe a bad end for the guard who caught her in a bad looking situation?

I see. I was wanting to give a trigger for the things that happened later, and a threat in the background that the reader would be wondering about as the story progressed so that was the reason why he got away and the sense of urgency to leave the area until she realized how important the carriage was to her survival. Not sure if that answers any questions you may have
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Postby SunnyCGI » Fri Mar 11, 2022 8:22 am

I really like your story, good job! Are you planning to write more?
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Re: First time writing anything please be gentle. or not

Postby unreal216 » Fri Mar 11, 2022 8:28 am

SunnyCGI wrote:I really like your story, good job! Are you planning to write more?

Yes I am, this was a proof of concept and is part of a larger story. I'm working out an ending for this part of it then the main story will begin. I have other stories on the back burner as well, I'm glad you liked it.
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Re: First time writing anything new part added almost done

Postby unreal216 » Thu Jun 09, 2022 3:41 am

It's late in the morning, I awoke to the bright sunlight scattering through the branches and leaves of the tree I'm sleeping in, I grimace covering my face to shield my eyes from the rays of the sun. "I knew I shouldn't have slept in the trees, at least if I were in a cave I would have been able to sleep longer without the blasted sun waking me up."

I sit up rubbing my eyes to get the gunk out of them, and opening them slightly to adjust to the light. I look-out around me, I've forgotten just how high up I am, about fifty-five feet off the ground. Getting my bearings and fully awakened, I start climbing down from the tree.

Upon reaching the ground the realization of just how messy sleeping in a tree is. I have twigs and sap stuck in my hair, and on my body, "great just more crap I got to deal with today. Thanks a lot you lousy tree!". With my annoyance toward the tree successfully vented, I decide to go to the river and wash myself along with what I'm wearing.

As I'm moving through the forest trail towards the river, a gentle breeze blows through the trees. The whooshing of the leaves against the wind, birds chirping all around, It almost reminds me of home.
Continuing in the direction of the river, I start comparing the trees here to trees in Titan Wood Forest.
"The trees here are like saplings in comparison to the titan wood trees back home." I miss visiting the titan wood tribes, the tree houses they have are a sight to behold, though sometimes I wonder why I ran away and left my family, why the humans started attacking our people? Ever since Prince Harold took over for his dying father King Saladin, things have become a nightmare for us. It's been six months since I left home. Why did everything have to turn out this way?

I continue moving, enjoying the sounds of nature, when I hear the familiar sound of rushing water. A line of bushes mark the river's edge. "Finally here at last."
I think. Arriving at Bark hide river. I remove my cowhide bra and enter the water, "Whoooo this water's cold, not warm like back home. This place sucks. Well no use complaining, just grit and bear it." I start to wash my red hair, working to get all the dirt and twigs out. The slight curl returns as it hangs well past my shoulders. Such a pain to maintain. Once I'm done washing my hair I begin washing my chest and arms paying close attention to my breasts, they are on the larger side, dirt routinely gets trapped between them as well as under them, useless things I could do without them. It's very annoying how demanding the human half of me is.
"I hate whoever my father was for getting with my mother. It is ridiculous having to wash all the time. Why couldn't I have been normal? I'm the only girl that has human skin in all of the village's back home. Everyone else is normal but me! None of the other girls have these bags on their chests, why did I have to be different? They don't have to worry about taking baths as often as I do." I complain, scrubbing the dirt from my chest and neck.

I turn my attention to my sides taking care to wash the scales that run up my waist. They are the only redeeming factor to my human half, they sparkle like gems when the sun hits them just right. At least I don't have to worry about dry skin there or abrasions, like I get elsewhere.
Moving further down my body, I begin washing my tail, the scales dulled by the dirt covering them. I adore this part of me, the deep red on the sides and the blue diamond pattern with red inlays on top, each scrub revealing the beauty beneath. I run my hands along my body feeling the soft yet strong texture of the scales under my fingers. I love this part of myself and I treasure it most.


While washing myself, I begin cleaning my garment wondering what else to do. "hmm I guess I could go and see what the locals are doing today, maybe visit Fanara and people-watch. Just gotta be careful not to be seen, don't want another incident like what happened on the ship ride over here. That was stressful."

hour's pass the sun high when I finally get out of the water. Deciding to start small I head toward the road north of the river to see if anyone's using it as it's a major trade route between Fanara and Witherford someone's bound to be using it.

It's not far from here, just a short slither away. After a while of traveling I pause, something seems off. The area is way too quiet. I turn my gaze to the trees, normally there are birds singing, instead, I only hear crows cawing in the distance.There is a light haze as well. Minutes pass before I decide to move on.

Approaching the road, the smell of smoke hangs in the air. Curious, I quicken my pace, while trying to stay concealed in the bushes and undergrowth of the forest. Just ahead I see a carriage that appears to be overturned. Smoke rising from it. Moving closer, I see several bodies lying on the ground, five all together. I notice one lying against the carriage, with the crest of Fanara on their armor..
I move from the bushes out onto the road, to see if anyone is alive.The ground is covered in blood , the cold dead eyes of the men wide open, The carriage is empty and spattered with blood."What the hell happened here?"I whispered.

Suddenly out of the corner of my eye I see movement to my left. Turning to look I see a man on horseback staring at me, eyes wide with his hands clenched tightly on the reigns. On his chest, the crest of Fanara, like the others. Frozen in place I just stare back at him, eyes darting to his small bow and dagger, heart pounding, scared out of my mind, "shit I was so distracted looking at all this mess I didn't even hear him approach, why did I think coming out on the road was a good idea? I should have stayed in the bushes, me being here, with all this, looks bad. Really bad."

The silence is maddening, both of us just staring at each other, then he finally speaks, "what the hell did you do!?"his voice cracking.
"I didn't do anything, I just happened upon this mess, it was like this when I got here." I reply
" Bull shit! I don't believe you! What the hell are you anyway, some kind of monster, lurking about attacking people in the woods?" He says drawing his bow.
"I already told you I didn't do this!, and I'm no monster, just calm down and let's just talk this out, no need for this to get violent!"
I begin to advance towards him slightly. "This is bad, if he decides to run and tell everyone back at the castle what he thinks I did, I'm in huge trouble! I can't let him leave alive."

Caught between a rock and a hard place my options are limited, "he is too far away for me to rush him, not to mention the fact he's on horseback.This is going to be difficult, I've got to get closer to him to have any chance of grabbing him."

I continue making small movements in his general direction to try and close the distance. "Don't come any closer, or I'll kill you where you stand!" I stop momentarily noticing he has an arrow ready to fire.
"Darn I'm not close enough yet, just ten yards away even if I charged him from this distance he'd still get the shot off, maybe I can use that to my advantage." I continue advancing towards him. "Hey now there is no need to be hasty, I just want to talk that's all."
"We can talk just fine from where you are, don't think I won't shoot you if you don't stop."He replies

Feeling like this is the only chance I have, I charge him trying to close the distance, startling him as he fires his arrow like I thought he would. Reacting as quickly as I can, I slide to a stop and wrap myself with my tail shielding my torso from his attack. His arrow strikes my scales, deflecting off of them harmlessly, catching him further off guard. I lunge out from my defensive stance,
"Oh shit!" he screams, starting to turn his horse to run.
Covering the last few feet just as he is starting to get going,I launch myself at him, but his horse is fast. I reach out trying to grab him before he gets away. The only thing I manage to grab is his quiver on his back, but he is one step ahead of me. Before I know it the strap snaps away from him leaving me falling to the ground arms swinging as I go.

I crash onto earth, knocking the wind out of me groaning, writhing on the ground, and nothing to show for it but a quiver of arrows, "dammit I almost had him, the fucker must have cut it off when i grabbed it. Things just got way worse. I've got to get out of here fast, before he gets back to town and reports what he thinks happened. might as well grab anything worth having before I make myself scarce., It can't hurt to take what's left behind, they won't need it anymore, the gold and silver will come in handy. I wonder what's in the carriage? I never got a chance to get a good look at it."

After gathering anything of value from the area, I turn my attention back to the carriage. Peering inside the walls and seats are lined in plush red silk, the windows look to be plated in gold as well. "huh this is a really swanky carriage. I wonder who it belonged to?" Continuing my search of the interior something glittering catches my eye . " what's this under here?” “oh it's a tiara, a very pretty one at that. Picking it up it's triangular in shape,crusted in rubies and sapphires. a depiction of a dragon showering a knight in flames at its center. I wonder what this is doing in he...re. '' Looking around the carriage frantically I see a marking on the interior wall next to the door. "oh fuck!, This is a royal carriage! No wonder they sent someone looking for it. Now everyone will think I attacked the king's family, oh fuck fuck fuck I think im going to be sick! This is absolutely horrible! Oh lord, why did it have to be a royal carriage? They will hunt me down, and there's no way I can talk my way out of this ahhhhhhh!!"

After a few minutes of absolute panic, I begin to regain my composure. "Ok, let's think about this logically, I don't see anyone that looks to be a royal, just guards, so the person they were escorting might be hiding nearby. I should look around for clues to where they went. I just hope they're alive or I'm so screwed!"

Leaving the carriage, I begin looking for tracks around the site in the mud, each passing minute critical to finding them. I contemplate just giving up and taking my chances running, and hoping it just blows over when I see three sets of footprints leading away from the carriage. One set is smaller than the other two and by its gate and how the mud is deformed would suggest the smaller of the tracks were running to the south, followed by the other two at a slower pace."Hmm someone left here in a hurry, and was followed, hopefully it's whoever was in the carriage, I better hurry.”

With a trail to follow, I rush off in the direction that they lead. Not long after, I noticed a scrap of light blue material snagged on a thorny bush. Upon closer inspection it looks to be made partly of cotton and silk "yea they definitely went this way gotta hurry I just hope I find them, whoever they are.” A few minutes pass, as I lose the other two sets of tracks on the trail, only the smaller set remains though it looks like they might have slowed down a little from how they're gate has changed, not long after, I see a white jeweled slipper stuck in the mud, its owner must have abandoned it in their hurry to escape. Picking it up I notice that it's slightly warm, meaning that they were here not long ago. "They gotta be close. They are female based on the evidence. Better hurry up and find her before whoever is following her does."

I continue following the trail. About five minutes later I see in the distance what looks to be a young woman in a blue sundress with brown hair running between the trees,
A few seconds later, I see two more people dressed in black and brown with hoods covering their heads. giving chase towards her, each of them look to be armed. Taking off, I follow them deeper into the forest. As far as I can tell the people chasing her are either bandits or slavers.

Continuing my pursuit, I watch as the girl suddenly trips on some tree roots and falls to the ground. She tries to get up and continue running but is grabbed by one of her pursuers, she begins to thrash around screaming, "Let me go don't touch me let me go you piece of shit someone help!"

Approaching the area I stay close to the bushes watching the scene unfold. The one holding her is a tall man with an average build,the other close behind, is shorter,and female judging by her ample feminine features; a strand of her long red hair hangs in front of half her face.
The male holding the girl speaks up, "oh stop fighting you’re not going anywhere." The girl continues to thrash, knocking his hood off his head, revealing his face. He has short black hair, brown eyes with a large scar across his right cheek, his colleague remains silent, slowly looking over the girl trapped in his arms.

I sit there contemplating on how to proceed, the girl being held continues her efforts to free herself from his grasp, kicking and flailing as hard as she can. "You have no idea who you are messing with! I'm princess Satera, daughter of the King of Fanara! Both of you will be hanged for what you have done!" She yells.

"Ohh we know who you are sweetheart, though it's not smart to go around advertising that. Nevertheless we have plans for ya so behave and you won't be harmed." the female bandit says. looking at her with an evil grin.
"Yea so many plans." The male bandit says groping her breasts through her dress.
"Don't touch me you fucking pig" Satera says. nailing the male bandit square in the nose.

A loud crack can be heard as the shorter bandit slaps her across the face saying "you're in no position to be telling us what to do sweetheart, so just shut up. There is no one here to save ya, or hear you scream; and scream you will before we are done. Tie her up Bog, we wouldn't want her to run off now would we. She has already caused us enough trouble for today".
"Right away mam." he replies, blood still pouring from his nose as he squeezes the princesses breast, eliciting a sharp pained squeal from the princess, then pulling a length of rope from his satchel, he starts binding her hands and feet.

Still out of sight in the bushes, I think about how to proceed. There isn't much I can do while both of them are present. I decide it's best that I just stay concealed and wait for an opportunity. To try and rescue the princess at a later time when I have the advantage. "It's too risky to attack them head on, it might be better to wait until nightfall when they are not as alert, and I have the element of surprise on my side."

By this time, Bog has finished tying up the princess, hefting her over his shoulder, "ok Ren she's secure!" he says waiting on the other bandit to give an order. "So what's the plan now? Damn I think she broke my nose." Bog says, twisting his nose, setting it back into place with a loud crunch.
"Oh quit your bellyaching Bog,” Ren answers, “you should have held her better if you were gonna play with her, and I already told you, we are taking her back to camp, then bringing her to the boss, so they can send the king a ransom letter for her return."

"Oh yea I forgot about that, I was hoping to have some fun with her beforehand you know." Bog replies.

"Yes I know, the only head that works is the one between your legs. Sometimes I wonder how you survive. All you do is think of screwing and when you get to fuck next, it's pathetic how simple minded you are. One day that dick of yours is going to get you killed." Ren says, rubbing the bridge of her nose with a very annoyed look on her face.

"Well no need to be rude I just like fucking is all, and I'm not simple minded I just know what I like, and that's sex.” he replies.

"Yea yea enough about that. Let's get back to camp, and you can have your fun. Just don't come crying to me if she breaks something else haha." Ren says

"Take the bonds off and I'll break more than your nose! satera yells."

"Har har har very funny, though I'll be the one breaking something tonight."Bog replies

With that Ren starts walking away with Bog not far behind carrying the princess, a look of indignation on her face as well as fear of what's to come.

Sticking to the shadows, I begin trailing them staying out of sight in the brush while close enough for them to be in eye-shot.

Two hours of traveling later, I see in the distance a tent next to a cave. Having never been to this side of the forest, I notice the trees here look sick, some are even dead, and the air smells like rotten eggs that were left out in the sun for a week. Looking eastward I can see some thorny bushes next to the camp and a small blackened area in the center for their campfires. Above it, a pot hangs from a metal rig.

Arriving, Bog drops the princess onto the ground hard with a thud, a look of pain plastered on her face as she writhes on the ground, "why are you doing this? " she asks with tears in her eyes.

" You broke my nose, so you get treated like a bag of dirt, should have played nice." Bog replies

"That's enough Bog! We don't need her injured, just get over it. You will get to take your frustration out on her in a more fun way later, so knock it off."
"Yes mam,"Bog replies.


Patiently I wait as several hours pass, and darkness rolls in. Ren and Bog sit next to the fire, scanning the area, when Ren stands," Ok Bog I'm turning in for the night just don't be too loud, because if I have to come out here I'm kicking your ass you got that?"
"Yes I understand, you always take the fun out of it all. one day you'll let me in your tent and I'll show you a great time just like the princess is about to get." Bog says with a wink toward Ren.
"Haaa yea no that will never happen. I don't want to be split in half. I've heard how you treat people with that thing, so keep dreaming bud." Ren says, waving off Bogs remarks.

With that Ren goes into the cave leaving Bog and the princess alone outside. Seeing my opportunity, I move to the bushes on the east side of the camp, away from the cave and next to the tent, not too far from the princess.
"Well I guess it's just you and me princess. time to make you a woman. I've never gotten to fuck a princess before. This should be fun." He says advancing towards her.
"Stay back, don't come near me!" she says, trying to scoot away from him.

Losing his shirt, Bog bears down on Satera, lust in his eyes. Princess Satera struggles to get away, but is stopped by her bonds as Bog grabs her by her legs pulling her towards him then starts to tear her clothes off,as she screams for him to stop .He rips the front of her dress open and her modest breasts pop out, Bog immediately starts roughly groping her breasts causing princess sateria to cry out in pain, sobbing while the assault continues.
It's hard to watch the princess in such a state being manhandled, the anguish and humiliation she is enduring,not to mention the mental trauma, just watching this makes my blood boil. Deciding I've let this travesty go on for far too long I start moving around behind them to put an end to this, and I know just how to do it.
Bog continues his abuse of the princess. Leaving the top half of her gown in shreds, and her breasts bruised from the rough treatment. Bog starts ripping the lower half of her dress to get to his real prize, her maidenhood, and just when he reveals her most private place, he is met by the bane of his existence. A chastity belt there to thwart the efforts of his conquest.

Princess Satera smirks for the first time," hah i cant believe you thought you where actually going to get to fuck me. Pathetic, you are just as dumb as you look. hahaha!"

Her laughter is cut short when Bog grabs her by the throat, squeezing it hard causing the princess to frantically struggle, panic in her eyes as her airway is cut off.

"So you think this is funny? Well let's see how funny it is when I'm through with you, there are other ways to get that belt off you see. Very painful ways." Bog continues his face twisting to a manic expression as he chokes Princess Satera. Satera starts to lose consciousness as the bandit’s grip tightens. "I’ll teach you to mock me you bit-"

Before Bog can finish his sentence he feels something wrap around his chest and arms snapping tight before he can react, pulling his hands away from the princess and pinning them to his sides.
"What the fuck?" Bog says confused about what's happening.
"So you like to abuse young women, do you? Well I for one love putting dirtbags like you in your place." I say my mouth right next to bogs ear.
Who the hell are you? What is this? Let me go dammit!"
“Oh don't you worry about who I am,me and you are about to get very well acquainted in just a moment, but answer me just one question. Why did you kidnap the Princess of Fanara?" I slowly turn Bog around, still wrapped up in my tail awaiting his response.
"Ha, you really think I’ll tell you anything? You don't scare me- What the hell?" Bog's eyes go wide, finally seeing what has him trapped so tightly. Beads of sweat appear on his face.
Lifting Bog slightly off the ground with the lower part of my tail, I hold him in the air just a couple feet away from me staring at him. Turning my attention to the princess, she is still lying on the ground behind Bog unconscious from her ordeal. Unaware of my presence at the moment.
Returning my attention back to Bog he is trembling his mouth slightly ajar. “I thought you weren't afraid of me, tough guy then why are you shaking so hmmm? Surely I as a woman don't frighten you". I pull him closer now just inches from his face, “now won't you answer my question, or do I need to squeeze harder?“
Bog visibly panicking stammers " I..I can't say! D..do y..your worst there are w... worse t.. things that will h.. happen to me if I t..tell you anything.”
"Worse things ehh well then if you won't tell then I have no use for you then" I say, squeezing him tighter, his face turning shades of red and blue from the pressure, unable to breathe. After squeezing him for a while I loosen my grip allowing him to breath his face returning to normal gasping for breath. "Doesn't feel good does it? Not being able to breathe? Now you know how she felt while you were beating her up and choking her."
Bog just looks around seemingly regaining his composure then yelling "Ren hel-!"
I cut him off by shoving the end of my tail into his mouth just as he screams for his companion. Looking around I don't hear or see evidence that he got her attention at least for now. "Ohhhh dumb move Bog. It seems you're a bigger liability than I thought. Remember when you said there were worse things than what I could do to you? Well you're about to find out just how bad it gets. Hope you're ready.”

I start shifting my tail lower away from his shoulders, all the while keeping my tail firmly lodged in his mouth to prevent him yelling for help again, Bog then hears some popping sounds then realizes where they are coming from. A look of horror on his face as my jaw dislocates and my mouth opens abnormally wide, and keeps getting wider and wider, at this point Bog is struggling and wiggling as hard as he can to escape but to no avail, the last thing he sees is my mouth enveloping him, plunging him into darkness. I continue pushing him into my mouth until he reaches the back of my throat. I remove my tail from his mouth and begin swallowing him using the rest of my tail to keep him restrained, slowly feeding him into me.

As I'm dealing with Bog, I see Princess Satera begin to stir having recovered from her abuse. I hurry to finish with Bog before she notices and causes a scene,swallowing much faster trying to get him packed away, but his struggles hamper my progress. Only up to his shoulders, I decide that I need to hurry this along even faster. I start shoving him down my throat, the large bulge descending much faster. Now past his stomach only his hips and legs remain his form starting to make my stomach expand as he is pushed in further. Another few large swallows and just his feet remain the muffled cries of Bog barely audible through my stomach. Now with Bog as just a writhing mass of bumps rolling around one last swallow sends his feet down to join him I trace the bulge as it travels down my chest reveling in the sensation. It's been a while since I've had the pleasure of eating someone.
Still lost in predatory bliss I've missed for so long, my euphoria is cut short upon hearing a piercing shriek of Princess Satera screaming as she stares at me in horror. Moving quickly, I rush over and slam my hand over her mouth to silence her incessant shriek.
"Shut Up I'm not here to hurt you but that all could change if you don't calm down, if I wanted to hurt you then you would be where this guy is, so are you going to behave?, or do I have to eat you too? Your choice” I gesture to the writhing mass of Bog's useless struggles.
The princess just nods her head tears streaming from her eyes
"Good now I'm going to let go of your mouth so no screaming. got it?”
Another series of rapid nods ensues
"Ok then," I say, releasing her mouth. I look around making sure we are still alone. "Ok let's get these bindings off you. We gotta get you out of here before the other one shows up." I say working to free her hands and feet.
"Why are you doing this? What are you doing here?" Satera asks, a perplexed look on her face.
"It's a long story, but we got to go, no time to explain." I replied, still removing her binds. Once her hand and feet are free I rise and reach to help the princess up. "Ok now let's get going… hey are you okay?" I say looking down at her but get no response, then I realize she is just staring at the large mass that is Bog, still slightly thrashing about. "Oh sorry I was in such a hurry I forgot he was still there, let me move him elsewhere."

"Huh what do you mean" Satera replies, visibly confused by what she just heard.
Waving off her comment I focus on flexing my muscles as the bulge in my stomach slowly starts moving down to the area where my tail starts, I flex harder finding it difficult to get Bog to go down. He is fighting against my stomach, and has wedged himself in there.
Finding myself at a stalemate I use my hands and start pushing down while Flexing as hard as I can after a few seconds of shoving, his lower half pops into my tail the area where my hips would be bulges out with his partial transition,"arghhh,just go down you stubborn little shit there's no use resisting might as well go down with some dignity I'm going to get you in there one way or another." But Bog continues fighting, starting to try and climb back out of my tail.
This shoving match continues for a couple more minutes when I realize why I'm having such a hard time. I lift myself higher off the ground, moving Bog to a more vertical position. I start pushing Bog down again; with the new orientation he slides down into my tail much easier, the bulge passes my hip area much faster than before and with very little resistance from Bog even though he is still fighting to escape, having no leverage now he slips further and further down my tail behind me.

"Whew, that took way longer than it should have, sorry that you had to watch that now let's go."

"Ok,but I never got your name,"satera responds reluctantly, shakily trying to get to her feet.
"Oh it's Dalina, now be quiet."

We begin to make our way out of the camp when I notice the princess is having a hard time walking." Hey, are you okay?”
"No, I don't think I can walk very well. That bastard must have hurt me worse than I thought." she says punching the bulge that Bog is making.

" You do realize you're not just punching him right." I say lifting her off the ground.
"Oh sorry, I forgot he was inside you. I've never seen anyone like you, where are you from? "
“I'll tell you later for now we got to get as far away as we can before she wakes up." I carry the princess out of the camp heading back to the north toward her carriage, Ren unaware of what transpired, at least until she wakes up. What a shock that will be.




After a while of traveling still carrying princess satera, and having put a good bit of distance between us, and the bandit camp I decide to slow my pace having expended quite a bit of my energy carrying the princess as well as hauling around my other more unwilling passenger I stop to rest next to an old oak tree.
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Some time later.



"Ok, we should be far enough away by now so we can rest for a moment."I say.
Satera doesn't respond, she just sits there in my arms looking ahead at the darkness around us. "Are you ok?"I ask.
"Hmm I guess so, with all things considered I'm as Ok as I can be, I hurt all over but it could be worse. I wasn't expecting today to turn out like this. Satera replies.

I can feel Satera shivering slightly as the moonlight illuminates the steam from her breath. "You must be freezing here, let me help with that."

"It's fine, really I'll be OK. I could say the same for you."Satera says

"Nonsense I can feel you shaking and as for me I'm not cold I used to live up in the mountains so I'm adept at dealing with the cold you however are not it wouldn't be so bad if your clothes weren't destroyed so please let me help." I reply while shifting my tail more closely to her.

"Well ok it is a bit cold but, i don’t see how you can help your just as cold as the air is.”sateria says while rubbing her hand against my scales.
“Well that's where I'm special, just give me a moment and you will see why.”

I start coiling my body and set satera down in the middle with her back to my chest and hold her close. satera shifts a little, probably uncomfortable with how intimately close she is to me.

“Well this is nice but I still don’t understand how this is supposed to hel…”

Satera words fall short as a sudden subtle heat radiates from my body building in intensity warming her.

”I see you're at a loss for words. I told you I was special, though this takes a lot of energy thus I don't often use it."I say shifting myself into a more comfortable position. ” So are you still cold?”I ask with a bit of sarcasm.

“No definitely not cold anymore. I wasn't expecting this. That's for sure i just assumed you were coldblooded well not completely coldblooded just cold heat wise you know I… I'm just going to stop talking now.``satera says with some tension.

Satera’s body also tenses up. Not wanting her to be stressed by what she said, I just pull her closer to me.

"you don't have to worry i’m a gentle person to be around most of the time it’s only when you act like this guy( i move my tail with Bog inside into view) that i get a bit nasty to be around so you have nothing to fear from me.”
i say moving my Bog filled tail section back out of sight.
'' I also wanted to apologize for getting a little short with you back at the camp. It was just a bit stressful for the both of us and I didnt want to alert Bogs companion to my presens and when you screamed I had to shut you up so I wanted to apologize for that also."I say, releasing my hold on Satera.

The tension in Satera’s body relaxes some and she leans forward away from me. “No, I understand I'm still slightly freaked out by everything that has happened, especially when I woke up and saw you there with that massive gut you had with all the writhing and struggling that was going on I panicked."Satera says, crossing her arms.
"So you can't blame me for screaming given the situation I found myself in. I was sure I was next and when you rushed me I nearly had a heart attack ,and the fact that you said you would eat me if I didn't keep quiet didnt help any."Satera says, turning to look at me.

"I understand why you said it now. But I still don't understand why you saved me in the first place, or where you came from.”she turns back around and she just stares off into the cold darkness that surrounds us.

“ Just so you know I never meant to scare you but that failed miserably in the end."I say reaching out my hand to rub her back.

"As to why I saved you, I happened across your carriage while I was traveling through the forest ,and stopped to investigate when I had a run in with one of your guards while I was there. I kinda tried to kill him and failed in that endeavor." I say, while pulling my hand away from her and I begin fidgeting with my hands.

"That's when I discovered your tiara on the floor under one of the seats and put two and two together.
Then when I went searching for its owner only after finding and following some footprints I came upon you running through the forest with those bandits chasing you and everything else you know." I say watching her sit there Satera occasionally glancing back at me.
" The reason why I saved you was to save my own skin really for what happened earlier with the guard. It's selfish. I know but I didn't want the whole kingdom to come crashing down on me for a misunderstanding."

As for why I'm here in your lands, let's just say there are some troubles back at home. A crazed prince has gotten out of hand and lets leave it at that.”I say, growing slightly concerned with the amount of silence between us.
“ It's OK, I understand now. But why did you try to kill a guard you couldn't talk it out?”satera asks, turning slightly towards me.

“ No we couldn't talk it out! look at me i'm a twenty-three foot snake person I did try to calm the situation but he wasn't hearing any of it. I say gesturing to my body.
Once he pulled his bow out I knew there was no talking so I did what I thought needed to be done."I remark crossing my arms.

"Fortunately for you he got away or I might have just fled the area and not even worried about what happened.” I say while rubbing my eyes.

Satera returns to laying against my chest; she seems more relaxed letting herself fall limp against me. “ Well I'm glad you came to save me. Who knows what would have happened if you'd not been there especially when Bog got upset with my chastity belt in his way i thought for sure he was going to kill me.” Satera replies, with her hand rubbing against my scales.

“Yea that's what put me into action i was so fed up with how he was treating you."I reply by moving my right hand up onto her head.

"I wish you could have seen how much of a bitch he turned into when I got ahold of him."
I gloat while wiggling my bloated tail."It was pathetic, though once he got his wits about him again he yelled for his partner so I shut him up by jamming my tail into his mouth, and the rest is history.” I say, flicking my tail near Satera’s face.

Get that away from me I don't need to be gagged."Satera says, giggling while pushing my tail away.

We sit and talk for a few more minutes and joke around but the merriment ends when I sense someone approaching. They are still a fair distance away.

“ Satera there is someone headed our way and they are closing fast.”I say, quickly raising myself up while holding her.

“what?How do you know that? I don't see or hear anyone.”Satera says, looking out into the dark forest.

“ I can smell them and sense their body heat. It smells like Bog's companion, and she's on a horse. I say in between flicking my tongue out to test the air.

“ What?How did she find us so quickly? Oh what do we do now?”Satera says frantically, pressing herself closer to me.

I look around at the ground and see exactly how she's been tracking us.
“That's how I've been leaving a rather convenient trail to follow. I guess the added bulk of bog made it more noticeable than it normally would be.”I say, slapping my head.

“ Well, can we lose her somehow? We can't let her find us.”satera asks with some panic.

“ No i don't think so ,and climbing a tree won't work either she would just look up from where the track ends. There is only one option that will guarantee your safety though you may not like it.

“ What do you mean you're not thinking of eating me because if so that's not happening.”Satera says glaring at me. “ No not eating per say but it will involve you going inside me.”i say tightening my grip on her slightly

“ what?! No way I'm not going inside you for any reason. Why can't you hide me behind a tree or something?
That seems way safer to me and I don't have to get eaten.”Satera says, lifting herself away from me.

“I already told you I'm not eating you and no I can't risk hiding you out here in the open." I reply shifting back into a seated position and I move my tail to block Satera from climbing off of me.

"If she gets her hands on you I might not be able to save you again. Least of all catch her this is your only option please don't make me force you.” I say moving my hands to her shoulders.

“ ok. But what do you mean not you're not going to eat me? I'm confused how else am I going to get inside you and won't I just suffocate in there anyway.”Satera says, still trying to climb off of my tail.

“This is how.” I say opening a large slit below where my snake and human halves meet.

“What the heck is that, and why are there two holes?”Satera asks Leaning in slightly with a hint of panic.

“ Look we don't have time to debate this, just know you won't suffocate as long as you go into the upper one no harm will come to you now get in there.”i say getting more agitated increasing my grip on her shoulders.

“ wait what do you mean as long as i get into the top one what's the other one fo mphf.”

Satera’s question gets cut off by me forcefully stuffing her head into myself immediately satera starts kicking and flailing.
I quickly begin dragging her inside with powerful muscle contractions and in a matter of moments satera is completely engulfed, with the slit snapping shut behind her.

The only evidence is a small struggling bulge down the length of my midsection. “Look I'm sorry I had to do that but you need to calm down and stop struggling."i say rubbing the struggling mass.
If I wanted to hurt you in any way I would have done so from the beginning so please calm down before I have to make you pass out.”I say with some discomfort.

All I get is more violent struggling and muffled what I can only assume is curses.
The bulge she is making wobbles and shakes violently, hand prints and bulges of different sizes roll around my midsection. I lean back against the tree to brace myself still trying to get her to calm down without hurting her.

“Ok I'm sorry. But you leave me no choice, you need to take a nap. I'll let you out later after I deal with this. I can't have you acting out while I'm preoccupied.”

With that I start to squeeze down on her With some force which only increases the violence of her struggles so much that it causes a slight twinge of pain. I start to increase the pressure and hold it.
Over the course of a few minutes her struggles slowly come to a stop.
I immediately release the pressure not wanting to asphyxiate her completely and she stays still afterwards.
Concerned I might have overdone it. I concentrate on if I can feel her breathing. I'm relieved once I feel her breathing.

“Shit you're a strong little thing. Now I know how Bog felt when you were fighting him ,and I'm just trying to protect you.” I remark, while rubbing the area she's in trying to soothe the discomfort she caused.




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A different story this time taking a break from splinterfell

Postby unreal216 » Wed Aug 17, 2022 1:47 am

Briiinnnng goes the bell signaling it's time for everyone to be in class. The school day is almost over at Everbend High. I stand in the hallway watching the last few students running through the hall to their classes. I have this period off and could just go home but I decide to roam the halls instead. There is almost always something happening around here.

I start down the hall towards the cafeteria blue lockers line the halls with classrooms in-between. As I make my way down the hall I decide to cut through the gymnasium to shorten my trip when I hear some voices coming from the girls locker room. Curious, I enter the locker room to investigate the commotion. I carefully open the door and sneak into the room heading in the direction of the noise; it's just a couple locker rows down. A second later I hear a familiar voice yell "Leave me alone, why do you keep messing with me!"

Then another unmistakable voice replies "Because I can what are ya going to cry now
you're such a wimp if you want me to stop then do something about it."

Moving to a better spot to verify my suspicion I look through a gap between the lockers and see the school bully Sabrina and my best friend Amanda. Sabrina has Amanda shoved up against the lockers right now and I realize what's about to happen if I don't act fast.

Sabrina has a reputation for being an opportunistic predator she often is seen running down the hall's with a bloated struggling belly attempting to evade the administrators chasing after her.

I start maneuvering around the lockers to where they are trying to be as quiet as possible. Sabrina still hasn't moved and has Amanda pinned against the locker.

"You know i've been waiting for a moment like this to come around again ever since that bitch friend of yours Cassandra interrupted us last time but no matter there is no one here to save ya now."Sabrina says with a sadistic look in her eye.

Amanda begins to struggle trying to get away from Sabrina but is firmly lodged between her and the lockers "Let me go you fucking monster why do you have to be such a bitch all the time haven't you eaten enough people this year." Amanda says continuing to struggle frantically.

I continue advancing towards them using the lockers to hide my presence. They are just a few feet away now.

"Oh it's never enough you put yourself in this predicament by hanging out in the gym alone. I just took advantage of it and once I'm done with you I'll get Cassandra next just like I got Kelly." Sabrina replies then running her tongue across Amanda's cheek.

"Ahhhh stop that you fucking freak!"Amanda screams recoiling from Sabrina.

"Oh don't be a wussy if that bothered you then what's about to happen next will be so much worse hahaha hope you're ready." Sabrina says then opens her mouth wide ready to engulf Amanda.

"Just let me go, you disgusting freak."

Wasting no time I lunge out from behind the lockers and grab Sabrina pulling her off Amanda just before she's able to get her mouth on her. Sabrina, confused about what's happening, starts struggling in my arms trying to get loose "what the hell let me go dammit" Sabrina yells her face bright red.

"Sorry can't do that, I won't let you eat another one of my friends, you psychopath."I say struggling to hold onto her.

"Cassandra you fuck let me go you will not ruin this for me again arrrgh let go dammit."
Sabrina screams, struggling more violently than before. Amanda is standing against the locker seemingly in a bit of shock from her ordeal.

"Amanda! A little help would be great. I can't hold her forever you know!" I yell starting to lose my grip on Sabrina.

"Oh! Sorry, here I come." Amanda says rushing over grabbing Sabrina by the arms.

"Thanks, just hold her while I get a better grip on her."I say quickly, moving my arms to pin Sabrina's down against her sides.

Sabrina is still struggling hurling curses trying to get away from us but to no avail.

"Hey we need to deal with her and I can't do that very effectively from here while holding her so I need you to take care of her."I say fighting to keep her pinned.

"I don't know, I don't think I could handle her, I'm not very good at the whole predator thing, you're much better than I am."Amanda says with a worried expression.

"You will do fine. I'm here and will help but I need you to do this soon. I can't hold her much longer."I say pushing Sabrina towards Amanda.

"If you think I'm just going to sit here and let you two decide on who is eating who then you are crazy! The only one eating someone around here is me. This little wimp couldn't eat a burger if it fed itself to her. She's worthless and only deserves to be ass fat and nothing more."Sabrina says, continuing to struggle.

Then something in Amanda's demeanor changes and before I can say anything Amanda had Sabrina's head in her mouth
swallowing her with alarming speed in just a couple swallows she has Sabrina's whole upper torso down her throat and continues at that pace. I move my grip lower to help Amanda swallow Sabrina. Her hips and legs are all that remain and after a few more swallows from Amanda the only evidence of Sabrina is the bulge of her feet traveling down Amanda's throat to join the rest of her in Amanda's belly.

With Sabrina contained inside Amanda's violently shaking belly with all sorts of bulges shifting all over its surface. I flop down onto one of the benches and look at Amanda standing against the lockers with an exasperated look on her face , her belly hanging out from under her blue tee shirt with her hands supporting her bulging belly. She winches occasionally when a particularly hard struggle occurs but she seems to be handling her well enough.

"Hey you ok? Why not come and sit down, no need to strain yourself while she's acting up in there." I say patting on the bench beside me.

"Bwuurp. Excuse me, that's better I think I will. She's really squirming in there." She says. Amanda squeezes her stomach muscles making Sabrina's form more evident and hindering her movements as she sits on the bench next to me leaning back.

"So how are you doing? She's not giving you too much trouble is she?" I ask watching Amanda's stomach as bumps pop out in various places." I think i'm doing ok for the moment i didn't think i had it in me to tell you the truth i guess i'm better than i thought haha."

"Yea i guess so i would have thought she would have put up more of a fight than this if i'm honest." I say when a particularly large bulge pops out at the top of her stomach causing Amanda to jump and cover her mouth the bulge continues to travel up and Amanda's face starts turning shades of red obviously struggling to resist what is happening. Then the bulge is slowly forced back down with a series of hard swallows from Amanda forcing it settle down in her stomach once again Amanda coughing after what just happened.

" Oh shit! Are you ok?"I ask.

"Yea I am now it felt like she was trying to force herself into my throat that hurt like hell. Don't try that again! there is no getting out so just accept it and digest!"Amanda says smacking her gut prompting another series of more violent struggles.

"Ok as long as you're ok. I've never seen someone struggle this hard for this long. Surely she must be getting tired by now." I say watching her stomach continue to shake and bounce.

"Yea I know it doesn't feel too good . My stomach is starting to ache pretty bad with how hard she's fighting. Hopefully she gives up soon."Amanda says, wrapping her arms around her stomach trying to stop the struggling inside.

Then Amanda suddenly sits up and another large bulge pushes up like it did last time only this time it successfully forces its way into her throat. Amanda's eyes start watering trying to resist her prey's latest attempt at escaping but it continues ascending up her throat until Sabrina's face bursts out of Amanda's mouth.

"I'm not going to be eaten by the likes of you!
when I get out of here both of you are dead you hear me dead!"Sabrina yells trying to force her way out of Amanda .

Amanda's face is bright red but she is somehow holding Sabrina in her throat even with Sabrina pushing against the bottom of her belly without much hesitation Amanda brings her hands up to her mouth and starts trying to force Sabrina back down her throat.

"Get your fucking hands off me you can't keep me in here stop trying to resist I won there is no way you can get me back down so stop trying. Sabrina says frantically struggling against Amanda's hands.

But even with all her tough talk Amanda slowly forces Sabrina back into her mouth all the while Sabrina continues hurling curses then with a loud snap Amanda closes her mouth and continues forcing Sabrina back down her throat. Amanda's face turns a slight shade of blue due to her not being able to breathe and start swallowing harder to force her back down faster, then finally Sabrina is forcefully deposited back into Amanda's belly.

Finally able to breath Amanda sucks in a gasping breath and her face starts returning to her normal color. "Fucking hell that hurt like a bitch I thought I was gonna lose that fight almost passed out. She's strong as hell. I've never seen anyone do something like that before. What the hell does she do all day squat cars for fun?"

Completely stunned from what I just witnessed I just stare at Amanda not even registering what she just said.

"When the hell did Amanda get that adept at being a predand, and why was she saying that she was bad at it if she was able to do whatever that was?" I think still staring at her.

"Cassandra are you ok?Cassandra." Amanda says, trying to get my attention.

"Huh? Oh sorry I was just amazed at how you handled that. Are you okay?" I ask, still watching her stomach wiggling much less violently.

"Yea I'm fine now I didn't mean to scare you. I've been taking some vore classes so I could defend myself if I needed to but also had to take predator related ones as well which was not the plan. I just wanted to be able to escape being eaten, not how to eat people."Amanda says while absent-mindedly
rubbing her belly.

We continue sitting in the locker room while the activity in Amanda's belly slowly comes to an end. Her belly has expanded a bit from all the acids that have been flooding into it for the past hour.

"Well how are you feeling? I haven't seen her move for a while." I say.

"I think she's gone. I haven't felt anything either and I'm pretty bloated so even if she was still with us she would be drowning in acid by now so it's safe to say she's gone. Though she put up a hell of a fight before she went down haha. But we better get out of here before the faculty finds us and we get into trouble though I'm glad to be rid of her."Amanda says, struggling to stand not used to the weight.

"Yea let's go at least we got a story to tell everyone tomorrow." I say as we head out the door into the gymnasium and head for our homes.


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Re: the ending of rescue in splinterfell forest.

Postby unreal216 » Thu May 18, 2023 2:43 am

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Some time later.



"Ok, we should be far enough away by now so we can rest for a moment."I say.
Satera doesn't respond, she just sits there in my arms looking ahead at the darkness around us. "Are you ok?"I ask.
"Hmm I guess so, with all things considered I'm as Ok as I can be, I hurt all over but it could be worse. I wasn't expecting today to turn out like this. Satera replies.

I can feel Satera shivering slightly as the moonlight illuminates the steam from her breath. "You must be freezing here, let me help with that."

"It's fine, really I'll be OK. I could say the same for you."Satera says

"Nonsense I can feel you shaking and as for me I'm not cold I used to live up in the mountains so I'm adept at dealing with the cold you however are not it wouldn't be so bad if your clothes weren't destroyed so please let me help." I reply while shifting my tail more closely to her.

"Well ok it is a bit cold but, i don’t see how you can help your just as cold as the air is.”sateria says while rubbing her hand against my scales.
“Well that's where I'm special, just give me a moment and you will see why.”

I start coiling my body and set satera down in the middle with her back to my chest and hold her close. satera shifts a little, probably uncomfortable with how intimately close she is to me.

“Well this is nice but I still don’t understand how this is supposed to hel…”

Satera words fall short as a sudden subtle heat radiates from my body building in intensity warming her.

”I see you're at a loss for words. I told you I was special, though this takes a lot of energy thus I don't often use it."I say shifting myself into a more comfortable position. ” So are you still cold?”I ask with a bit of sarcasm.

“No, definitely not cold anymore. I wasn't expecting this. That's for sure i just assumed you were coldblooded well not completely coldblooded just cold heat wise you know I… I'm just going to stop talking now.``satera says with some tension.

Satera’s body also tenses up. Not wanting her to be stressed by what she said, I just pull her closer to me.

"you don't have to worry i’m a gentle person to be around most of the time it’s only when you act like this guy( i move my tail with Bog inside into view) that i get a bit nasty to be around so you have nothing to fear from me.”
i say moving my Bog filled tail section back out of sight.
'' I also wanted to apologize for getting a little short with you back at the camp. It was just a bit stressful for the both of us and I didnt want to alert Bogs companion to my presens and when you screamed I had to shut you up so I wanted to apologize for that also."I say, releasing my hold on Satera.

The tension in Satera’s body relaxes some and she leans forward away from me. “No, I understand I'm still slightly freaked out by everything that has happened, especially when I woke up and saw you there with that massive gut you had with all the writhing and struggling that was going on I panicked.''Satera says, crossing her arms.

"So you can't blame me for screaming given the situation I found myself in. I was sure I was next and when you rushed me I nearly had a heart attack ,and the fact that you said you would eat me if I didn't keep quiet didnt help any."Satera says, turning to look at me.

"I understand why you said it now. But I still don't understand why you saved me in the first place, or where you came from.”she turns back around and she just stares off into the cold darkness that surrounds us.

“ Just so you know I never meant to scare you but that failed miserably in the end."I say, reaching out my hand to rub her back.

"As to why I saved you, I happened across your carriage while I was traveling through the forest ,and stopped to investigate when I had a run in with one of your guards while I was there. I kinda tried to kill him and failed in that endeavor." I say, while pulling my hand away from her and I begin fidgeting with my hands.

"That's when I discovered your tiara on the floor under one of the seats and put two and two together.
Then when I went searching for its owner only after finding and following some footprints I came upon you running through the forest with those bandits chasing you and everything else you know." I say watching her sit there Satera occasionally glancing back at me.
" The reason why I saved you was to save my own skin really for what happened earlier with the guard. It's selfish. I know but I didn't want the whole kingdom to come crashing down on me for a misunderstanding."

As for why I'm here in your lands, let's just say there are some troubles back at home. A crazed prince has gotten out of hand and lets leave it at that.”I say, growing slightly concerned with the amount of silence between us.
“ It's OK, I understand now. But why did you try to kill a guard you couldn't talk it out with?”satera asks, turning slightly towards me.

“ No we couldn't talk it out! look at me i'm a twenty-three foot snake person I did try to calm the situation but he wasn't hearing any of it. I say gesturing to my body.
Once he pulled his bow out I knew there was no talking so I did what I thought needed to be done."I remark crossing my arms.

"Fortunately for you he got away or I might have just fled the area and not even worried about what happened.” I say while rubbing my eyes.

Satera returns to laying against my chest; she seems more relaxed letting herself fall limp against me. “ Well I'm glad you came to save me. Who knows what would have happened if you'd not been there especially when Bog got upset with my chastity belt in his way i thought for sure he was going to kill me.” Satera replies, with her hand rubbing against my scales.

“Yea that's what put me into action i was so fed up with how he was treating you."I reply by moving my right hand up onto her head.

"I wish you could have seen how much of a bitch he turned into when I got ahold of him."
I gloat while wiggling my bloated tail.``It was pathetic, though once he got his wits about him again he yelled for his partner so I shut him up by jamming my tail into his mouth, and the rest is history.” I say, flicking my tail near Satera’s face.

Get that away from me I don't need to be gagged."Satera says, giggling while pushing my tail away.

We sit and talk for a few more minutes and joke around but the merriment ends when I sense someone approaching. They are still a fair distance away.

“ Satera there is someone headed our way and they are closing fast.”I say, quickly raising myself up while holding her.

“what?How do you know that? I don't see or hear anyone.”Satera says, looking out into the dark forest.

“ I can smell them and sense their body heat. It smells like Bog's companion, and she's on a horse. I say in between flicking my tongue out to test the air.

“ What?How did she find us so quickly? Oh what do we do now?”Satera says frantically, pressing herself closer to me.

I look around at the ground and see exactly how she's been tracking us.
“That's how I've been leaving a rather convenient trail to follow. I guess the added bulk of bog made it more noticeable than it normally would be.”I say, slapping my head.

“ Well, can we lose her somehow? We can't let her find us.”satera asks with some panic.

“ No i don't think so ,and climbing a tree won't work either she would just look up from where the track ends. There is only one option that will guarantee your safety though you may not like it.

“ What do you mean you're not thinking of eating me because if so that's not happening.”Satera says glaring at me. “ No not eating per say but it will involve you going inside me.”i say tightening my grip on her slightly

“ what?! No way I'm not going inside you for any reason. Why can't you hide me behind a tree or something?
That seems way safer to me and I don't have to get eaten.”Satera says, lifting herself away from me.

“I already told you I'm not eating you and no I can't risk hiding you out here in the open." I reply shifting back into a seated position and I move my tail to block Satera from climbing off of me.

"If she gets her hands on you I might not be able to save you again. Least of all catch her this is your only option please don't make me force you.” I say moving my hands to her shoulders.

“ ok. But what do you mean not you're not going to eat me? I'm confused how else am I going to get inside you and won't I just suffocate in there anyway.”Satera says, still trying to climb off of my tail.

“This is how.” I say opening a large slit below where my snake and human halves meet.

“What the heck is that, and why are there two holes?”Satera asks Leaning in slightly with a hint of panic.

“ Look we don't have time to debate this, just know you won't suffocate as long as you go into the upper one no harm will come to you now get in there.”i say getting more agitated increasing my grip on her shoulders.

“ wait what do you mean as long as i get into the top one what's the other one fo mphf.”

Satera’s question gets cut off by me forcefully stuffing her head into myself immediately satera starts kicking and flailing.
I quickly begin dragging her inside with powerful muscle contractions and in a matter of moments satera is completely engulfed, with the slit snapping shut behind her.

The only evidence is a small struggling bulge down the length of my midsection. “Look I'm sorry I had to do that but you need to calm down and stop struggling."I say rubbing the struggling mass.
If I wanted to hurt you in any way I would have done so from the beginning so please calm down before I have to make you pass out.”I say with some discomfort.

All I get is more violent struggling and muffled what I can only assume is curses.
The bulge she is making wobbles and shakes violently, hand prints and bulges of different sizes roll around my midsection. I lean back against the tree to brace myself still trying to get her to calm down without hurting her.

“Ok I'm sorry. But you leave me no choice, you need to take a nap. I'll let you out later after I deal with this. I can't have you acting out while I'm preoccupied.”

With that I start to squeeze down on her With some force which only increases the violence of her struggles so much so that it causes a slight twinge of pain. I start to increase the pressure and hold it.

Over the course of a few minutes her struggles slowly come to a stop.Once I'm sure she won't cause any more problems I immediately release the pressure not wanting to asphyxiate her completely there is no movement for a while afterwards.
Feeling concerned I might have overdone it due to the lack of movement. I start concentrating on if I can feel her breathing or any sign of life. A few more tense moments pass until I finally feel her breathing. A wave of relief washes over me now that I know she's ok.

“Shit you're a strong little thing. Now I know how Bog felt when you were fighting him ,and I'm just trying to protect you.” I remark, while rubbing the area she's in trying to soothe the discomfort she caused. “I wish i didn't have to do that to her but she left me little choice in the matter. I’m not looking forward to when I have to let her out. Hopefully she stays knocked out until all of this is over."

I turn my attention in the direction that Bog's companion is approaching from ,and wait for her to arrive. There is no sense trying to run or hide at this point, I wouldn't outrun her horse anyway. I see an area to the east a short distance away where the trees are much closer together where I can more easily defend myself if it comes down to a fight and take away her advantage of being on horseback.
Having relocated I start preparing the area for her inevitable arrival leaving some surprises for her to find when she gets here.

Not wanting to leave any further trails to my new hiding place I partially climb up the trees and move from one to another until I'm a fair distance away from where my tracks end and wait for her, this takes a lot of effort with the added weight I'm carrying and I'm slightly more tired from this than when I started. Satisfied with my location I settle down to recover my strength and wait for Ren to arrive.

After some time I begin to hear the sound of a horse approaching from the south. The hoofbeats of her horse continue to get louder until I see the glow from a torch flickering between the trees as she approaches.

My heart quickens as she gets closer I can barely see her face, the shadow from her hood partially concealing it, the only thing I can see is a few strands of her brown hair hanging down the right side of her face.

As she gets closer Ren starts slowing her horse down to a walking pace then she stops having reached the end of my trail.
"I know you're out here you can't hide might as well come out i'll find ya sooner or later."Ren says as she gets her horse moving while looking around the area moving her torch around." I know you can't have gone far so stop yer hiding and come out now!

You took some things from me and I want them back, and if I get em back there won't be any trouble." Ren says continuing her search.

I continue watching her search the area taking care to keep out of the light as she moves, always keeping a tree between me and her while trying to not make any sound.

As this cat and mouse game continues I start to notice that she is steadily getting closer to where I am and no matter where I move or how quiet I am the distance keeps closing and it's getting a lot more difficult to stay hidden.

This continues for some time and she's getting really close. I'm barely able to stay outside the range of her torch light. "What the fuck!"I yell when I feel a sudden burst of movement where Satera is startles me causing my tail to shift suddenly and snaps a small tree in two.

"There you are. Ren says as she appears from around the far side of the tree I'm hiding behind a fair distance away from me.

The light from her torch making my presence clearly visible I abandon any hope of avoiding conflict. "Yea here I am, you found me. I say moving away from the tree I was previously hiding behind.

Ren just keeps her distance, seemingly surprised for some reason.
"This is curious. I knew I was tracking a Slithari from the Titan Scale Tribe but you are not what I was expecting, especially your lack of scales and more human appearance."Ren says, starting to circle me still maintaining her distance.

" Yeah it shocks most people that encounter me for the first time, usually I'm the last thing they see. So what do you want with me anyway?I reply sarcastically.

"Oh you know exactly what I want, more specifically what you took from my camp back there and I want it back."

"I'm not sure what you mean. I've been to a great many places. I tend to lose track of where I've been recently and as you can see I'm not carrying anything but what I have on."I reply mockingly, as I shift my tail in front of me making the prominent bulge Bog is making overtly obvious.

"Heh so you think you're funny ehh, I had a suspicion that's where Bog had ended up. I told him his dick would get him killed one day just didn't expect it to happen so soon that buffoon.

Well that answers the question of Bog, now what of the other one that was at my camp where is she?!" Ren says roughly as she starts to approach me.

"Oh yea that camp must have slipped my mind. I assure you what you see is all I have with me I know nothing of anyone else." I say keeping the upper section of my tail hidden from her view.

"Yea that's a load of shite I found their clothes in the same area as well as your tracks nearby so stop jerking me chain! I might have been born at night but it wasn't last night! I know you have her somewhere so where is she?!''Ren yells, growing more agitated and continuing to approach.

At this point I start backing away from her trying to keep some distance between us. I continue slowly retreating back to thicker parts of the forest I had scouted earlier.
" Oh now I remember there was a girl I didn't bother with. I let her go. She ran northwest last time I saw her but that was a while ago."I reply, stopping in a thick area of trees and small bushes.

There is a long silence between us for a while, time almost seems to stop just the light crackling from the fire from her torch breaks the silence.

"You know you think you're smarter than you actually are but I know you have her here somewhere. I'm no fool if she had run off as you say I would have found her long ago.

I scouted the area before I followed you and there were no tracks other than yours leaving the campsite." Ren says stopping her horse just short of the thickest part of the forest.

"You know this whole plan you have of trying to bait me into bringing my horse into dense forest like this won't work. As I've said, I'm no fool. I've been doing this for a while now and you're not as smart as you think you are. You will have to do better than this to get one over on me. Maybe Bog would have fallen for it but not me. Ren says, staring at me, her left hand resting on the saddle pommel.

" Well ya got me all figured out but like I said I don't have anyone else…."I say when Suddenly a series of violent struggles begins causing me to slightly lose balance and gives away my secret at the worst possible time.

"Fucking hell of all the times now you decide to act up shit!" I yell thoroughly pissed off with how things are currently going.

"Hah clever trying to hide her in there all this time too bad she had to act up and ruin huh. Well now that it's established that you do indeed have her, how about you hand her over and no one gets hurt. What do ya say? Not like she matters to you in the end." Ren says, extending her arm out to me.

"Hmmm let me think…. How about you go and fuck yourself how about that! I'm not giving you jack shit if you want her so bad then come and get her!" I say adjusting my stance ready to defend myself.

"Hmmm I was hoping to avoid having to resort to violence but it seems that you leave me no choice. But before I kill you and rip her from your entrails, what is your name? I like knowing who's life I'm about to snuff out." Ren says, dismounting her horse and begins making her way to my location.

"It's Dalina and you'll not be snuffing me out ,on the contrary it will be you that suffers that fate if you don't reconsider the action you're about to take."I reply, shifting my body to the front of me in a defensive posture.

"Suite yourself you're not the first of your kind I've bested in combat many have fallen before you and you will die just the same as they did prepare yourself. Ren says drawing a jagged edged sword from its sheath and discarding torch the light flickering as it hits the ground. Ren begins circling around me, her blade at her right side. I adjust my stance as she continues circling trying to anticipate what she's planning. The fading light from her torch barely illuminates her face, the light reflecting in her eyes. She stares intensely at me, never breaking eye contact, not even blinking once.

This continues for some time until another sudden movement from Satera breaks my focus for a split second when A searing pain tears through my right arm. " Arghhh what the hell" is all I can say before Ren is already upon me. I barely dodge a series of slashes from Ren's sword.

Continuing to try and evade the constant barrage of her attacks I'm continually driven back.
Finding myself in a more dire situation than I anticipated, I sweep my tail up in front of myself blocking Ren's attacks. I try to counter her by thrusting my tail at Ren to throw her off balance but she dodges my attack jumping away from me and disappearing behind a nearby tree.

I attempt to pursue Ren as she's retreating into the trees but lose track of her. I begin frantically looking around the area trying to locate Ren. I take a quick glance at my arm and see that a small dagger is embedded into it, blood running down from the wound dripping off my fingers.

"You know for someone who's supposedly a ruthless killer you sure can't aim for shit. I hope you didn't think this tiny ass dagger would have been able to kill me!" I say pulling the dagger from my arm. Surprisingly there is no pain. Only then do I realize that my whole right arm has gone numb.

"Ha! I'm not delusional, I knew that wouldn't have killed you on its own.
It was never meant to be a lethal attack. You may be strong but you're not very smart letting outside influences distract you from a life or death situation and death is all that's waiting for you when this is over."Ren replies, her voice seemingly coming from every direction.

I continue searching for Ren around the trees. The light from the torch barely illuminates the area, its deathly silent only the occasional gust of wind rustling the branches overhead causing me to flinch. After some time of searching I wind up back at where Ren first found me. Suddenly the area goes dark. I quickly shift my position into a defensive posture once again as I'm doing so my tail runs into something laying on the ground.
"The heck is this? oh yeah now I remember this might come in handy later."

The area is almost completely pitch black except for the small amounts of moonlight scattering through the branches. I'm initially unable to locate where Ren's hiding, when Suddenly I sense a presence behind me and I hear a subtle whistling sound.
Reacting swiftly I throw my tail up behind me covering my back with a solid impact and twanging sound bounces off my scales.

Shifting my position I turn to face Ren but when I get myself turned around nothing is there, another whistling sound again from another location shifting again I block the attack.

"You know I'm not falling for that trick again so stop being a coward and fight me! Or are you too scared? come out here if you're so confident." I taunt wrapping my tail around the object laying nearby waiting for her next move.

There is no response, only the wind rocking the trees and the creaking of the branches. The littlest noise causes me to jump every second that passes feels like an eternity.

I begin to feel light headed from the amount of blood I've lost from the wound to my arm alongside a feeling of weakness that has been spreading from my arm now moving to my whole body. "I've got to stop this bleeding or I'll be in trouble soon. What the hell did she do to me? Damn her I'll get that little bitch if it's the last thing I do."

More time passes and there's still no sign of Ren. I start to worry more as the effects of whatever poison she has afflicted me with continues spreading. My vision starts to get blurry and my reaction time starts to get sluggish,
and normal things I had been doing just minutes earlier become much more difficult to the point I can barely stay upright.

"Haha you look downright pathetic. What's wrong? Not feeling well."Ren says from somewhere in the darkness.

"Ehhhrr. what tha hell did… you do to…me you… fucking…bitch?" I reply attempting to locate her through my blurred vision while trying to keep myself steady.

"Oh that's just a little something I cooked up just for your kind. Really packs a punch doesn't it. Though usually I don't have such a hard time applying it, your hide is exceptionally durable more so than your brethren." Ren says. As her blurry figure appears from the shadows.

"Yea it does… i didn't anticipate.. poison when this .. kick..ed off now it seems that I'm at a disadvantage I underestimated you because of your size. Miniscule as you May be." I reply.

"Ha, still so arrogant even when you're beaten. But all that tough talk did you a lot of good now didn't it look at you barely able to stay upright." Ren says as she heads toward me.

"Yea but I'm still standing ar..nt I apparently your poison is as good as you think, and your combat skills are just as shitty if you have to rely solely on your poison crunches. I'm sure you couldn't manage without them some deadly swordsman you are." I say, sarcastically.

" you know as fun as this is, you know hurling insults at each other I've got business to get to so let's just end all of this excessive banter and finish this." Ren says now standing just in front of me, sword drawn.

"Anything else you want to say before I run you through?" Ren says. pressing the tip of her sword to my chest.

"Yea catch."

"Huh catch? What's that supposed to mea…" Rens sentence is abruptly cut off as I use all the strength I can muster and smack her with the tree I had knocked over earlier sending her tumbling across the ground and slamming against something hard several feet away an audible gack being forced from her on impact.

Having expended almost all my remaining strength with that attack I collapse to the ground in a heap. Ren lies on the ground motionless.
It's oddly peaceful just laying here on the cold ground that is until Satera makes her presence known with her aggressive struggling.

"Ghaaa! Let me rest for a minute, will ya just calm down and I'll let you out." I say as I struggle to get up off the ground, turning my attention back to Ren making sure she hasn't moved.
Satisfied that she won't get back up I begin the process of releasing satera. Wave-like contractions gradually start moving her up my body towards the exit.
It's a slow process my muscles weak from the stress and poison assaulting them after a couple minutes of pushing the bulge that is satera arrives at the exit and the slit sealing her away from the world pops open Satera’s arm shoots out then another covered in slimy liquid grabbing the sides of my body and begins to pull herself out. Next Satera’s head emerges grunting from the efforts of her extraction followed by her chest
Wanting to hurry and get this over with, I push hard to assist her removal from my body and almost immediately she is shoved out onto the forest floor covered in slime and dirt.

With Satera finally freed I once again flop onto the ground completely exhausted "finally that's over with." I just lay there too tired to move. My whole body feels like a lead weight. I shut my eyes to let them rest for a moment.

"You have some nerve you know manhandling me like that I can't believe you!" The piercing voice of Satera rings out, snapping me back to reality, opening my eyes. I see the rage filled face of satera looming over me, her skin and hair still slick from her time inside me.

"Hey I did what I had to do to keep you safe and you didn't want to cooperate. You can't be mad at me for that or would you rather me let Ren have you." I say weakly struggling to raise myself off of the ground.

"Well we could have discussed it more before you just shoved me inside you that is no way to treat a princess. I've been through enough today. I didn't need to be treated so roughly again let alone by you." Satera responds while crossing her arms.

"Well sorry but I didn't have to argue with you and it was the only option I had to keep you out of harm's way and not risk you being captured or killed. I know you just met me and this hasn't been the best first impression but at least you're ok." I say as I finally get upright, turning to look at Satera standing in front of me, her face having softened some.

"Yeah well I get that you were trying to protect me and all and I appreciate that I'm sorry that I blew up at you today has just been so horrible I." satera responds her arms dropping to her sides and her eyes welling with tears.

" Hey don't cry I'm sorry how everything happened but you're safe now." I say slowly moving over to her ,and wrapping my arm around her satera turns pressing her face to my chest as her emotions break down and the stress overcomes her.

This continues for a few moments as I rub my hand on her back soothing her when she finally starts to calm down.

"I'm sorry I just couldn't hold it in anymore, look at me all disheveled and a whining mess." Satera says, rubbing the tears from her face as she looks up at me.

"It's not unreasonable to breakdown after the events that have unfolded today anyone noble or not would have a hard time keeping their composure heh i've seen some break and fold under the half as much pressure but you are the strongest iv seen by far your human it would be impossible to expect you to be unaffected by this." I responded, still rubbing her back.

" What happened while I was inside you. it was awfully rough for a while being jostled around and with all the yelling." Satera asks, pulling away from me.

"Ren is what happened. After I crammed you inside me I tried to evade Ren and was marginally successful. That is until you woke up and caused me to destroy a tree
alerting her to my presence.
And long story short a fight happened. I got stabbed and cut, hence all the blood." I say pointing out my wounds.

" Oh my I was so caught up in myself and my anger that I completely overlooked your condition. Are you going to be ok? Satera asks as she inspects my body.

" yeah I'll be fine once I get a chance to rest. She had a poison on her blade that's really affecting me but I think I know what it is now that I think of it. I should be able to counteract it relatively quickly." I say ripping my cow hide bra off and tearing it into pieces making makeshift bandages out of them.

" Well I'm glad you will be OK but where's Ren did she run off?" Satera asks, helping to apply the bandage to my arm.

"Ren? Oh I hit her with a tree and she landed over there I say pointing to a tree lying on the ground a few yards away.

But as I'm looking I suddenly realize that I don't see her body where it was earlier. She's gone.

"Satera, Ren's gone. She was over there just a few minutes ago but now she's gone." I say pulling her close to me and weakly shifting my body to protect her.

" what!? How is she gone, where is she?" Satera nervously asks, pressing herself closer to me.

I begin carefully scanning the area looking for any sign of Ren's location while tightly holding onto satera.
This continues for several agonizing minutes as every rustle of the branches or little noise causes me to flinch.

Snapp! The sound of a twig cracks through the air, reacting off instinct. I Immediately spin around to see Ren charging at us just feet away with a deadly determination in her eyes, and an obvious limp to her gate as she runs her sword ready to strike.

Without thinking I turn to cover satera ,and strike out with my tail using the last of the strength I have left my heart pounding when surprisingly my tail makes contact sending Ren flying once again but this time the overwhelming scent of iron hangs in the air with a slight mist landing on my body.

The sounds of gasping, and screaming coming from rens location
I start to turn to look when my hand scrapes against something sharp upon closer inspection i see a shallow cut on my arm.

"What the heck just cut me, and why is Ren screaming like that? All I did was slap her with my tail and it wasn't even that hard."

"Uhhh Dalina. Could you put those away now? Satera yells, pressing herself against me like she's trying to climb my torso. "Huh what are you talking abou…"

Looking down i then see a series of long curved spines covering my lower body the glistening of blood covering the area that hit Ren.
"What the hell where did these come from?" I say as i struggle to lift Satera up and away from them.

" I don't know? They just popped out when Ren was attacking and you swung your tail at her. Then she was flung over there and she started screaming. Sateria replies, holding onto my neck to help support herself.

"Really? That's never happened before. Let me try and put them away. I'm just glad you didn't get hurt. let's get out of here in case Ren has any more surprises left. I say, as I concentrate on retracting the spines covering my tail, and struggle to get up and moving.

I hurry along as fast as my body will take me back to the north determined to put as much distance between us and Ren as possible.
The screaming and groaning continues as Ren thrashes on the ground clutching at her abdomen hurling curses and blasphemy out into the night air, her voice fading as we disappear further into the forest.

Some time later my strength finally gives out, the adrenaline keeping me going having worn off. I slouch to the ground, setting princess satera down as I lean against a nearby tree.

"Hey are you okay?" Satera asks, kneeling down at my side.

"Yea… I'll be fine.. I just need to rest
For a bit…is all."I say, leaning my head back against the tree, closing my eyes.

"Are you sure? You look terrible. Is there anything that I can do for you?" Satera responds as she runs her hand across my head.

"No.. but don't worry.. I think I know..how to counteract.. the poisons effects. Just give me a second and I should be fine. I say as I straighten out my body.

"What are you doing?" She asks as I finish adjusting myself.

"Remember when you asked about where that other hole lead when I asked you to get inside me?" I say turning my body to face the princess.

"Well yea. what about it?"she replies With a concerned look on her face.

"Oh don't worry… it has nothing to do.. with you but pay attention, and you…will get your answer.. but I would advise that you..back up a bit it's..going to get…a bit hot in a moment."I reply as the lower part of my body that Bog is located in begins to quiver.

Soon after the large mass begins moving up my body, strong contractions push him along. It's a slow process but gradually he is moved further and further until he comes to a stop momentarily. After some hard contractions the bulge lurches forward a bit being forced through the sphincter that leads to his destination, the tight organ swelling as he is crammed into it.
"What did you just do?"Satera asks as she watches the mass get slightly smaller and more compact as it continues its journey.
"Just…huff…wait you will see.. in a mom—ent." I say. As I finally finish.

Satera now having backed away to a safe distance watches Dalina with a quizzical look on her face as a series of somewhat loud growls and gurgling noises come from where the mass is in her tail, then a small amount of steam begins rising off her body and steadily increases in intensity the closer to where bog is.
As this is happening the bulge in Dalina’s tail starts to get smaller at a rather alarming rate as the wounds on her body begin to heal and,Dalina begins to squirm a bit as this is going on.

This continues for some time as the bulge in her tail has dwindled down to almost nothing and the steam that was rising off her body fades as she seemingly is close to finishing with all of the wounds that just moments ago were deep laceration’s now there is almost no evidence that it happened at all.

Now that I’m done with repurposing bog to actually be useful for something i begin to try and sit up still a bit weak from the amount of energy it took to break him down as quickly as i did. Opening my eyes i see Satera staring at me from a small distance away, her eyes wide from what she just saw. “ Um?.. are you ok Satera?” I ask as I rise up still slightly struggling to get my bearings. “I’m not sure. I’ve never seen anything like that. He just melted away in a matter of minutes and, now you're not injured, I had no idea you could do that.”
“ Yeah, no one but you knows about that now, hell not even my own tribe knows about that. I've only ever had to use it one other time and I didn’t see any reason to tell anyone since I’m already abnormal.” I say as I lean against the tree I’m next to.
“ I see, and what about the surprise spikes you nearly skewered me with when Ren attacked us back there?” Satera asks as she walks over to me.

“Now that.. that is new, I’ve never had this happen before. I didn't even know I had those. I can’t explain how that happened.” I say as I run my hand across my tail curiously.
“Huh well lets just hope they don’t pop out unexpectedly then I don’t particularly want to be a pincushion anytime soon. Satera says still keep
A bit of distance between us.
“Don’t worry, I doubt that will happen but, i got to get you back to your people who knows what that scout will say to them when he gets back to the castle so we better hurry before they come looking for you in force I don’t want to be skewered because of a misunderstanding.” I say as I extend my hand to Satera.
“ Quite I would much rather get back and not spend another second in this horrid forest. I can't wait to get a bath and not feel so filthy.

Some time later …

The sky begins to brighten as the first specks of light peeks through the trees as we approach the area where satera’s tribulation started. Satera is in my arms having gotten tired a few minutes after we started. As I look at her. I’m still surprised that most of her wounds are completely healed, just like mine are since, she came out of me earlier I’m still unable to understand how that happened, since even when I’ve had others held inside of me with scrapes, and wounds they always came out in the same shape they went in.

“ Well we are almost there, I bet you're ready to get home.”I say.
“I very much am, I just want to forget about everything that happened yesterday”. Satera says as a shiver runs through her body.
“ I can understand that you did go through a lot. I'm sorry you had to endure all of that, especially some of the more unpleasant situations you were in.”I responded as we continued back to her carriage wreck site.

Some time passes when I begin hearing shouts ahead of us.
“Princess Satera! Are you out there! Then the sounds of horses can be heard heading in our direction. “Well it seems our time together has come to an end.” I say as I stop and set Satera on the ground.
“You're not leaving me here are you?”satera says, turning in my direction.
“I can’t be here when they find you. That would only cause problems for me and they would only see me as a monster and would most likely attack first and ask questions later.” I say as I back away from her.

“But you saved my life. I'm sure that I could talk to them and I wouldn’t let them harm you.” Satera says as she runs up to me grabbing my hand to try to stop me from leaving.
“I’m sorry satera but soldiers would think i mean to harm you as soon as they look at me ,and would rush in to get you to safety and I don’t want to kill anyone if I don’t have to. I'm sorry but I must go.” I say as I remove her hand from mine.

Satera just stands there for a moment as I begin to retreat into the forest trying to get out of sight. “Wait! Wait at least give me a proper farewell.” She says as she suddenly runs up to me, and wraps her arms around me squeezing me as hard as she can tears running down her face.
I return her affection as I embrace her for a moment but the moment is cut short as the sounds of the soldiers approaching the area gets louder.

“I’m sorry but I must go now before we are found but i'll still be here to make sure you get home safely.” I say as I break away from her embrace as she is hesitant to let me go, but finally releases me her eyes red from the amount of tears she shed. I linger for a moment then quickly disappear into the forest as she begins shouting for the soldiers from Fanara to help them find her. Soon the sounds of horses flooded the area she’s in and as soon as they had arrived they quickly faded into the distance.

Now that my part in this is finished i head home up to the north not long after i arrive at my cave i immediately find a spot and curl up totally exhausted from everything that’s happened.

Several days pass when I’m awoken by the sound of shouting outside my cave “Dalina! This is the captain of the king’s guard of the kingdom of Fanara you have been summoned to the castle by order of the king.

The end…..














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