Eat mice
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Re: Eat mice
Very nice! Have you considered opening a gallery here?
"Be polite,
be professional,
but have a plan to eat everyone you meet."
-The Predator's Handbook
be professional,
but have a plan to eat everyone you meet."
-The Predator's Handbook
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TETRO - Participator
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Re: Eat mice
Oh, this is good! Like, really, really good! I'd absolutely love to see what other content you have and plan to make in the future! If you need any help on how to get a gallery, just hit me up, and I'll be more than happy to help!
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BadlyDrawnDedede - Somewhat familiar
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Re: Eat mice
Thank you. I have successfully opened the gallery
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Re: Eat mice
The art itself is very nice, but the dialogue is... clunky to say the least. I assume English isn't your first language?
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Nikkidafox - Participator
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Re: Eat mice
Yes, English is not my native language. Currently, I can only use translation software. You can make suggestions to make the lines better, and I will make changes.
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