Eat mice

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Eat mice

Postby WUDIXIAOFANG » Sun Dec 27, 2020 2:08 am

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Re: Eat mice

Postby TETRO » Sun Dec 27, 2020 12:12 pm

Very nice! Have you considered opening a gallery here?
"Be polite,
be professional,
but have a plan to eat everyone you meet."

-The Predator's Handbook
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Re: Eat mice

Postby BadlyDrawnDedede » Sun Dec 27, 2020 4:35 pm

Oh, this is good! Like, really, really good! I'd absolutely love to see what other content you have and plan to make in the future! If you need any help on how to get a gallery, just hit me up, and I'll be more than happy to help!
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Re: Eat mice

Postby WUDIXIAOFANG » Sun Dec 27, 2020 10:16 pm

Thank you. I have successfully opened the gallery
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Re: Eat mice

Postby Nikkidafox » Mon Dec 28, 2020 10:55 pm

The art itself is very nice, but the dialogue is... clunky to say the least. I assume English isn't your first language?
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Re: Eat mice

Postby WUDIXIAOFANG » Tue Dec 29, 2020 9:22 am

Yes, English is not my native language. Currently, I can only use translation software. You can make suggestions to make the lines better, and I will make changes.
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