Early criticism

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Early criticism

Postby spanxthanx » Sun Aug 30, 2020 9:08 pm

I'm looking for early criticism about the writing style in a book that I'm trying to write.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1M0GIOz ... tU03B/view
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