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Oral vore~
Here is my first digital vore drawing hehe I hopw you like it<3~
Last edited by TastyDoodles on Sat Aug 01, 2020 10:33 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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TastyDoodles - New to the forum
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Re: Oral vore~
This is very cute and a pretty good start : my own first uploaded vore drawings weren't that good
There is still -but it's true for the whole career of any artist- room for improvement, but the general proportions are great, and details are not bad either. I like the vivid coloring, but I think your shading should "sharper" (with more contrast between light and dark areas), and you should apply the "top light" rule (just think that the light come from just above, and start by shading everything that is on the bottom side, them add shading to spots obscured by bodyparts or object above them, like you did with under your pred's belly). It's just my very own opinion, so don't stress yourself about that, anyway
Welcome among the vore artists : I hope you will continue and create a gallery here on Eka's portal!
There is still -but it's true for the whole career of any artist- room for improvement, but the general proportions are great, and details are not bad either. I like the vivid coloring, but I think your shading should "sharper" (with more contrast between light and dark areas), and you should apply the "top light" rule (just think that the light come from just above, and start by shading everything that is on the bottom side, them add shading to spots obscured by bodyparts or object above them, like you did with under your pred's belly). It's just my very own opinion, so don't stress yourself about that, anyway
Welcome among the vore artists : I hope you will continue and create a gallery here on Eka's portal!
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Frakass - Participator
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Re: Oral vore~
The pic looks really good. Here's to hoping you do more!
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JaredTheCat - Heavy user
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Re: Oral vore~
It looks great to me, and I love how you can see the prey's facial expression . I can't wait to see more from ya !
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PastarinoDongarino - New to the forum
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Samesize Vore W.I.P
Heres a quick sketch that im working on uwu what do you think? I hope you guys enjoy~
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TastyDoodles - New to the forum
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Re: Samesize Vore W.I.P
This looks great so far, I can't wait to see the finished product
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PastarinoDongarino - New to the forum
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Re: Samesize Vore W.I.P
Very nice. I can't wait to see more
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Straxacore - Intermediate Vorarephile
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Re: Samesize Vore W.I.P
Awesome, I'm looking foward to this.
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