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Rwby Same-Size Vore Writing

Postby mindstorm » Sat Jul 25, 2020 10:14 am

This is my first time writing for the vore community, but I have been lurking for long enough that I wanted to try my hand in contributing something. Its about 4k words, and takes place right after season three

Contains F/f, F/m, same-size oral vore, digestion, sexual content, femdom, fatal vore. Two girls one Futa

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Yang stared out of the window next to her bed. She watched as golden autumn leaves fell gracefully from wooden branches above. She felt as if there was a bond with the discarded leaves and herself, both left in the wake of the cold autumn wind to wither forgotten on the ground.
Her right arm itched. Yang shifted her free hand to scratch it, but quickly realized that it was just a phantom itch. Her right arm was gone, along with her friends. She lost both just a few days ago, at the fall of Beacon, her home. It seemed she was all alone again. Weiss was called back to Atlas, Blake ran away, and Ruby, who just the other day tried her best to cheer her up, had not talked to her in two days.
In fact, the whole house had seemed too quiet for a few days. Yang had not seen or heard from Ruby or her father. She paused, unsure if she even wanted the attention. Then she called out for her sister. “RUBY” she shouted. An eerie silence filled the air. She shifted in bed, with thoughts of abandonment still fresh on her mind, panic started to set in. Before she could act on it though, she heard two sets of footsteps coming up the stairs. “Good, you still here” Yang thought to herself as she wiped away a tear before it could start to run down her pale face. When the footsteps got close to the door, she heard another sound along with them. It sounded like a chunky soup sloshing in a rubber bottle, or a half empty milk jug being swung side to side. The door handle started to turn, and Yang was hit with a massive feeling of dread.

Two days earlier

Neo had perched herself in a tree overlooking a quaint looking log cabin in the middle of the woods. On her left, was a small dirt road that went from the house, to the distant main road. Neo stared down at the window that sat below her, about two hundred feet away. The blond bitch from the train was lying in bed, looking helpless. Neo rolled her eyes. What a waste, lying in bed all day waiting to die. Neo might have obliged her wishes, but she knew that Yang was not her target. She was after Ruby, the girl who killed Roman. She was here for revenge, and she knew just how to get it. She wasn’t alone, of course. Cinder was waiting for her to send a message when the freak of an uncle left so they could get the jump on them.
Neo sat there with a bord expression on her face, like she wasn’t about to go on another killing spree. The joy she got from her victims was, to her, immaculate. To take a life was one of her favorite pastimes. What mattered to her the most though, was to make sure that they know how little their lives mattered, that in their last seconds they lost all hope. Nothing got her off like that.
Soon after the red head girl entered Yang’s room. Neo smiled as they hugged. Soon a plan had formed in her head. As this happened the uncle made his way outside and stumbled down the dirt road, flask in hand. Neo smiled and her heart rate started to rise. Her stomach growled in anticipation and she found that one of her hands had made its way into the front of her pants. Using all her self-control she removed her hand and pulled out her phone. “It’s time”. She sent the message and within a few minutes she saw a figure moving tree to tree. Night was falling soon, and they knew that sleeping food put up less of a fight…


Moving under the cover of darkness, Neo and Cinder circled the house, and paused outside an opened window. Neos gut started to burble. There was food inside, and her gut could wait no longer. Her stomach began to fill with acid, like a dog’s mouth salivating before diner. Her squelching gut began to slosh as it grew in anticipation for her meal. Cinder noticed. With a smirk she silently reached around Neos waist and gave her tummy a few rubs, feeling the liquid sloshing inside. As she did so, Cinders own gut roared in protest, filling with its own acids. Soon both their soft sloshy guts were starting to ride out the front of their shirts.
They entered the house with hungered haste. The weird uncle had taken the dog with him as he left, so they did not worry about the pet alerting their owners. They moved through the house to find father and daughter both passed out in front of the tv. A half-finished plate of cookies laid next to the small girl on the sofa, and the blond father sat far back on the recliner. “They look so content” Cinder thought to herself, but was interrupted by her acid filled gut, gurgling and begging to be fed. Neo and Cinder moved quickly and began to start their work. Cinder started before Neo, swallowing the father before he even knew what happened. Ruby awoke from the noise coming next to her. The sound of Cinders shirt ripping from the massive increase of size from her belly shook Ruby. Neo took pleasure in Ruby seeing her father die, groping herself as she watched the silver eyed girl. Before she could say or do anything, Neo scooped up Ruby and sent her down her throat with several very audible gulps. Ruby’s pajamas slid off as she fell deeper inside Neos gut. Neos outfit began to rip with every swallow. Ruby finally hit the bottom of Neo belly, the basin sagging with it meal now in place. Panic set in as she realized her fate. Ruby opened her mouth to scream but found no air, only acid and liquid. Ruby’s lungs filled as she struggled but she found no sanctuary from the hell that was Neos now engorged gut. Ruby then settled down, with her final moments being thoughts of her friends from Beacon, and her sister who was the world to her. In less than thirty seconds, Ruby Rose had expired in a fleshy bloated tomb of meat and acid.
Both girl’s outfits were ruined and had to be discarded, but they brought extras for later. First, they had to sleep off some off the meal they just enjoyed. People took a long time to digest, a week or two, but in a few days, they could at least get by looking like they had twins that were due soon.
As both bodies were still fresh and in one piece, their bellies were tight and distended, with outlines of arms and legs easy to see, but soon they would start to break down, turning into a meat slurry that would sit in their gut for a good amount of time while their bodies tried to process all that food.
They both laid down on the sofa, their bellies gurgling as they plopped down. The sound of digestion soon started, and the room was full of exotic and unusual sounds. This turned both of them on, but with fresh food in them, they couldn’t do much without throwing up, so they waited in heat, getting more and more horny with every gurgle and grow that came from the mountain that was their guts.



They slept for two days, working the solid corpses into more a manageable liquid slurry with meat chunks clinging onto thin brittle bones. Their bellies now took on a smoother rounder appearance. The girls didn’t look pregnant, as their guts were just a little too big and exceptionally soft and squishy.
They were awoken by a yell upstairs, a call for Ruby. They looked at each other, admiring the pale fleshy orbs that protruded out their midsections. Cinder grabbed both of their guts and gave them a good shaking. The orchestra of sounds that came from a sloshy gut was one of the greatest things they had ever heard. They looked up at each other and smiled, seeing that they were far along enough to have a little fun with the big sister upstairs. Slowly, they both rose from the sofa, bellies sloshing and gurgling as they got their balance after shifting so much weight to their fronts. Unclothed, they make their way to the staircase and both took each step one at a time, their stomachs making an uproar each time they shifted their weight up a step. Neo, who was behind Cinder on the stairwell, had a great view of Cinders ass. When Cinder reached the landing, Neo grabbed Cinders cheeks and gave them a nice spread. Cinder eyebrows shot up, and after a short pause she rolled her eyes and continued down the hall as Neo followed even closer. Finally, they made it to the door...



Yang could not believe what she saw. Cinder and Neo had walked right in her room, and were now standing by her bedside, bellies soft, full and extended. Their massive guts swayed with each step they took. It’s was clear that they were full of something.
Neo was the first to approach Yang, giving her a smug smirk as she stopped in front of her. She then shook her torso side to side, making a voluptuous sloshing noise, as if her belly contained an entire swirling lagoon. Her belly was so soft and heavy that it swayed with a different rhythm to her hip, delayed by a good amount of time from slosh to slosh. Cinder appeared from the other side of the bed; her belly so close to Yang that it took up a good portion of her view. Yang heard a gllrnnnnn that seemed to originate from somewhere near the bottom of Cinders grand gut. Cinder gently bent down, the insides of her stomach like river rapids as her meal shifted with the angle of her gut, and started to gently rest on the bed next to Yang. Cinder, just a few inches away from Yang’s ear, started to whisper to her. “How does it feel, knowing that what family you had left, now rest sloshing in my gut?” Yang’s pale face turned an impossible shade whiter. “Don’t act so surprised, we’ve been here for a few days, sleeping off the meal that was your sister and father.” Neo, now dripping wet from seeing Yang’s suffering, picked up a photo of Ruby that laid on Yang’s bedside, and pushed it up against her gut. Yang, after seeing the picture next to the huge white that Neo had pressed to her face, realized Ruby’s demise in Neos now sloshy gurgling gut. Neo, getting off even harder now, took both her hands on either side of her stomach, and started to slosh it up and down. She wanted Yang to hear. The sounds of Ruby’s partially digested remains filled up the room and paralyzed Yang. Cinder followed along and began a sort of belly dance, swaying her gut side to side. Both bellies were mere inches from her face, on either side, shaking the simmering meat chunks and liquid remains. It was too much for Yang. She remembered her father, teaching her how to fight, and how to cook, the struggles he faced as a single father. She thought of Ruby, how she was so excited to go to beacon. The friends she made. Ruby’s unwavering love and passion that had kept her team going through so much. She thought of what Ruby would be like as an adult. All the things she could have done, all the people she could have saved. Ruby never even got to tell Weiss how she felt. Ruby was barely eighteen, so young, and now she was gone, a bubbling slurry inside the insane woman in front of her. All her hopes and dreams snuffed out. Yang’s sadness and grief overwhelmed her, and her entire world crashed down around her with the two full stomachs sloshing next to her. Yang couldn’t even stop them; she had no energy to fight. They had won. However, the one thing that pissed Yang off most, was how hard she was getting. Her baby sister sloshing around in the mute’s gut, for some reason turned Yang on more than she had ever been before.


Cinder and Neo were having the time of their lives. Nude, bellies out, delighted to be sloshing the remains of the blond’s family in her face. The feeling of human stew shuffle within them and the pure power fantasy of shoving it in Yang’s face made them lust for more. Neo was the first to notice the bulge coming from under the bed sheets. She slowed her sloshing and looked to Cinder, who, after seeing Neo stop, also saw the blond’s large protrusion holding up the covers. The girls both looked back at each other, and silently agreed what to do next. Neos heart rate skyrocketed, and her head started to spin as she started to pull down the sheets, marveling at the girls breathtaking bust, and the shaft that held up the bed sheets that seemed almost impossibly large. Cinder, with a pompous smile, slowly whispered in Yang’s ear. “Are you really that hard after hearing your poor sister stew and slosh inside another girls gut?” She exhaled with a small giggle, “You know that fucked up, right?” Yang, still unable to speak, could only look back up with her fragile lilac eyes. “Don’t worry big sis, Neo and I will take care of that for you, after all, we have a big meal to work off…”. Cinder gave Yang’s ear a succulent lick that caused Yang to let out an unintentional moan. After Neo had stripped Yang’s bed sheets, both girls leaned over and started to suck on Yang’s breast. The sensation surprised Yang, and she let out a weak yelp.

Neo was a little less experienced, and was unsure what to do. She chose to stick with just gentle sucks and a few licks. Cinder, on the other hand, went to work. Her tongue drew small circles around the blond’s nipple, making Yang jump with shock with every completed motion. Yang was naïve as far as sex goes, and the sensation was too much for her inexperience. The girls continued to suck as Yang grew closer and closer to Cumming. Yang’s hips begin to softly buck helplessly in the air. Her dick started to twitch, a growing payload was churning in her sack, just begging it be let out. Cinder violently grabbed a handful of golden hair, and with force pulled the girls head to her own. She dug her face in the blond’s scalp, closed her eyes, and with great effort gave a voluminous inhale, taking in the smell of the beauty’s hair. Still inhaling, she grabbed the girl’s nipple and gently twisted it, sending the woman over the edge. With a grunt, Yang felt her first load work its way out of her balls and string by string land in a hot puddle on her flat stomach. The girls stopped sucking and Neo gave Yang a pouty face. “That was supposed to go to us, did we tell you that you could cum?” Cinder said teasingly. Yang, now completely giving herself over, answered “no mistress, please forgive me”. Cinder and Neo, content with Yang’s submission, decided what to do next. Neo jumped up on the bed, her thighs on Yang’s pillows. Neo shifted herself over Yang’s mouth, her belly sloshing with every move on the spring mattress. Neo then descended onto Yang, who obeyed and started to lick her immediately. Neo couldn’t make any noise from her vocal cords, but her breathing became heavy and fast, letting Yang know she was doing a good job.

Cinder, feeling left out, knew what to do. She crept down to the end of the bed and pushed her face down on Yang’s well-maintained crotch. What laid before her was a dick of immense caliber, balls that seemed to burden Yang with their fullness, and under that was a gorgeous mound, glistening with wetness. Cinder then sharply inhaled, fully enveloping her nostrils with Yang’s scent. The black-haired girl grabbed Yang’s balls with gentle authority, and gave them a few rubs. Cinder could practically hear Yang’s burly broth boiling in her balls, sloshing back and forth as she gently swung and toyed with her massive sack. She then lowered her mouth down on Yang’s shaft while slipping her fingers in both of Yang’s holes. Yang’s legs spasmed with surprise, and locked Cinder in with her thighs. Cinder’s mouth gave a satisfying plop as her suction moved off the tip of Yang’s dick, and she pulled Yang’s legs apart and gave her ass a hard slap, pausing to knead the fat on her backside. She wanted Yang to know she was in charge. Cinder then hopped up on the bed behind Neo, her innards stirring with the motion. Cinder hovered above Yang, her pelvis humping her lips up against Yang’s sensitive tip. Yang let out a guttural sound of pure lust. The sound was muffled by Neos thighs, as Neo moved forward and backwards pining Yang’s head on her pillow. Cinder, unsure she could wait any longer, pushed herself down on Yang and let her enter. Yang felt like she was in heaven, feeling Cinder’s folds embrace her. Neos hips continued to buck on Yang’s face, and Cinder decided to follow along with the rhythm. Soon, all three of them were moving to the same beat. The sound of sloshing potbellies filled the room.
Slosh, Slosh, Gurgle, Glorp, Spurt, Churn, Blorp, Burble, Worble, Glunk,
Cinder laid down on Yang, hips still connected and thrusting. Yang felt Cinders belly lay out on her, nearly covering her waist side to side. She could feel the contents of the meal Cinder had flowing through her gut. Meat chunks and bone fragments road up on her, sloshing with every thrust.
Cinder, now laying down behind Neo, saw an opportunity, and began to lick Neos behind. This new feeling caused Neo to lean forward, pushing her liquid gut on Yang’s face. Yang’s world became nothing but soft skin, and she heard nothing but the sloshing and growling of Neos massive gut shaking with sweaty humps, every hump moving toward a desperate primitive attempt to finish. Yang knew that every slosh was nothing more than her sister melted down and turned into bloody liquid meat soup. Yang couldn’t breathe, her whole world at that moment was Cinders walls grinding up and down on her, Neos belly pinning her head down and covering her nose, and Neos crotch, firmly planted over her entire mouth, humping her like she was a toy. Yang felt another load start to churn in her balls. The heat from it alone was enough for Cinder to notice. Cinder cried out “Not yet! Do not cum until I tell you to”. Yang was getting dizzy from the lack of oxygen. Cinder slapped Neos ass, causing her to jump up. Yang got a deep breath before the massive drooping dangling ball of flesh fell back in her face with a nasty sounding gurgle. Cinder, with heavy breathing murmured “I’m getting kinda close, how about you Neo?” Neo looked back at Cinder stuck her tongue out playfully. Yang felt like the load in her balls was already halfway up her dick, held back only by Cinders clamp like tightness.
Cinder, never stopping her pace, gave out a warning “Almost there… ALMOST THERE” Neo, feeling that Cinder was about to cum without her, doubled her efforts hoping not miss out. Cinder’s moaning increased in volume, but Yang could barely hear her. Neo, now moving twice as fast, was sloshing her belly so much that the heavenly noise was almost deafening. Yang felt Cinder tighten even more, and knew she was about to cum. Suddenly, in her head saw the sweet innocent face of Ruby Rose looking at he. Then she saw the panic and fear that she felt in the few moments she lived suffocating in Neos gut. Then, as Cinder yelled something and a shook as she pulsed on Yang’s dick, Yang imagined her sweet sisters face as she was digested into the sloshing mess that hung fermenting above her right now. Yang’s hand shot up and planted itself firmly on Neos ass, desperate to feel it up. Yang’s sack suddenly began to swell and grow, filling up to deliver as much sperm as two horses. Neos gut sloshed and made the nastiest, nosiest gurgle yet. Yang couldn’t hold it anymore. Yang’s churning hot balls fired off the hottest, longest load she ever had, right inside of cinder. Her entire sack pulsed along with her dick as Cinder stiffened up as she rode out her own orgasm. The sound of Yang’s load traveling through her dick could be heard like hot glue pulsing through a firehose. Yang’s hand moved from Neos ass and grabbed hold of Neos guts, sloshing around the wet remains of her sitter as she pumped inside Cinder.
Cinder felt herself being filled up, and when she felt full, she jumped off Yang and pulled Neo down on Yang’s still shooting dick. Neo was so close to Cumming, that when Yang entered her and started filling her up, she immediately came. Neo laid down on Yang and pulled her face close so she could look her in the eye as she was filled up. The only part of Neo moving at this point was her hips as she continued to milk Yang. Every thrust was pure heaven for both girls. Cinder watched as Neos ass pivoted up and down on Yang like a machine. Cinder could see and hear every time Yang shot another string inside of Neo, seeing it crawl from the base of her dick, to the tip right into Neo. Soon, Neos movements slowed down, and with one last thrust, Neo felt the last of Yang’s balls pump and audibly empty into her with a loud splurt.

Neo collapsed on top of Yang, now completely devoid of energy. The sound of all three girls panting filled the room. Cinder, who was drenched in sweat, slid down and cuddled up with the two girls. The three girls, once enemies, now slept together, with the only sound to be heard was the burbling and churning in the guts of the villains.



Yang woke several hours later. She sat up and stretched out her three appendages with a satisfying grunt as the sleep started to leave her eyes. She turned her head to the window to find that is was dark outside. Only the light of the moon lit her chambers. Blurry eyes now adjusted to the world of the living, she noticed a plate of cookies positioned just on the edge of her bed. Under the plate was a parchment. Yang picked it up, and after examining it, gave a small grin. She retrieved her scroll from the nightstand and started to punch two new contacts…
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Re: Rwby Same-Size Vore Writing

Postby mindstorm » Sat Jul 25, 2020 2:00 pm

Any critiquing would be much appreciated
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Re: Rwby Same-Size Vore Writing

Postby Fimbulvinter » Mon Jul 27, 2020 4:32 am

First, some boilerplate formatting. I suggest you either leave a space between each paragraph, or indent the first line of each paragraph so as to help to break up the wall of text effect that several sections have. splitting it up into more bite sized chunks of text makes it much easier for a reader's brain to digest it, while it can often just glaze over large walls of text and miss something.

The actual vore isn't bad, a bit too graphically digestive for my taste, but that's me, not you.

I feel that Emerald would have been a better choice than Cinder for this story though, since given the events of the fall of Beacon, and the injuries Cinder sustained there, she's not going to be up and about or talking for quite some time, and this clearly takes place between the season 3 finale and post credits sequence when her injuries would have been at their worst.
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