Looking for feedback on fire vore story!

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Looking for feedback on fire vore story!

Postby patman35 » Sat Jul 25, 2020 2:33 am

So I write smut and have fallen on hard times, leading to me to allowing vore to be accepted for commissions! While the commissioner liked this com I was wondering if I could get some feedback from some other people into soft Vore about it! Constructive feedback is always welcome!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/25482997
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