Seeking Critique (M/F 2D Vore Art)

[sharktorok]

I thought I would throw some of my art into the harsh fires of critique; lay it on me. As an artist I have at least one thing in every piece that I feel iffy about, but as everyone knows if you refuse to finish because the art doesn't feel perfect, you will never finish.

Specifically I'd like to know:

-What works?

-What doesn't work?

[Siuddithsi]

First, I like them. You have a solid drawing style, line art with shading and color. Good work for the style.

So the critique is for my preferences, just opinions so don't take it personal.

The pred in the first pic (shake it baby) seems derivative of another artist. Unfortunately I can't remember the name. There are enough differences there shouldn't be a problem but you might hear more about it.

Next, 2 of the 4 are legs and butt sticking out of the prey's mouth. Nothing wrong with that, I love legs and butts. But we aren't rated G, so it's totally acceptable not only to show the bare ass, but to stuff it with tongues or tentacles or such.

I love to see the prey's expressions, for this drawing 3 (catgirl vs tentacles) gets the win. But I can't help wonder what expressions prey #2 (green monster) would have had if she'd been swallowed feet first, or the tongue had...tasted her before swallowing.

My advice is to lighten up. Don't be hard on yourself and take advantage of the arena. Almost anything goes here, so don't feel constrained.

Hope it helps.

[sharktorok]

First, I like them. You have a solid drawing style, line art with shading and color. Good work for the style.

So the critique is for my preferences, just opinions so don't take it personal.

The pred in the first pic (shake it baby) seems derivative of another artist. Unfortunately I can't remember the name. There are enough differences there shouldn't be a problem but you might hear more about it.

Next, 2 of the 4 are legs and butt sticking out of the prey's mouth. Nothing wrong with that, I love legs and butts. But we aren't rated G, so it's totally acceptable not only to show the bare ass, but to stuff it with tongues or tentacles or such.

I love to see the prey's expressions, for this drawing 3 (catgirl vs tentacles) gets the win. But I can't help wonder what expressions prey #2 (green monster) would have had if she'd been swallowed feet first, or the tongue had...tasted her before swallowing.

My advice is to lighten up. Don't be hard on yourself and take advantage of the arena. Almost anything goes here, so don't feel constrained.

Hope it helps.

Thanks for this man! I always try to take a relaxed approach with my vore art (after all, it's ultimate fantasy expression) but as an artist I like to have periods of growth where I hear what people think of my stuff. I've been to art school so I know well what it's like to be destroyed in a critique

I love drawing amorphous worms and such, though vague blob monsters like in 2 are also fun to draw. The Cleaner is the creature you're thinking of, and I drew him as part of a commission who wanted that creature specifically, but I do acknowledge the need to stick out from other artists!

Thanks for the support man.

[Twister88]

Even though i'm by no means into monster vore, i'll have to agree with the previous poster and say that the art is well made. The coloring, shading and especially the facial expressions caught my attention right away, so kudos on that! My main advice, would be to add some more detailed backgrounds in the future, like a city or jungle. Since that tends to improve the artwork and make it more colorful, instead of just having an empty void as the background.

[sharktorok]

Here is a recent commission done for a patron! NSFW versions are available on my Patreon.

[sharktorok]

I've been experimenting with a new style