So, I'm making the cover for my next story, which is going to be a femcan story about a guy getting roasted in an oven, and I'm having a bit of trouble deciding on a version here. In the story, the meat is "self-glazing" and I kind of wanted to do the finished product as it was pulled out of the oven for the cover, but I'm not entirely satisfied with what my noob skills have been able to produce, but it's not bad either. I am a bit worried it might spoil the look of the underlying meat, though. What do you think?
Glazed
Unglazed
Edit 1: I actually ended up going with unglazed. I released the story here if you want to read it: https://aryion.com/g4/view/607815
Edit 2: Since the forum rules seem to want me to limit myself to one thread in this forum, I've decided to repurpose this thread into a kind of general discussion thread. Every once in a while, I like to ask what other people might think about story ideas, or like in this post with which version of something they like better.
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Re: Glazed or unglazed? (femcan question)
Personally a fan of the non glazed
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Had an idea that might be a bit cathartic to pretty much anyone who's worked in retail and had to deal with a Karen. Basically, I'm trying to choose between two different ideas, which both involve a stereotypical Karen going to a meat store in a Dolcett-world to get a whole-roaster.
One involves her having some problem and asking to see the manager, who then threatens to have her made into meat for causing such a fuss. Naturally, she thinks she's special and immune to all that because she's the wife of some rich powerful type. So they call him up to confirm this, but it turns out he's frustrated with her, too, and tells the store they can maker her into a roast for him and have her delivered, with a both extra thrown in for their trouble.
The other idea involves her unknowingly being the meat to begin with, having been set up by her frustrated husband, which is what causes the dust-up and demand to see the manager, because she refuses to believe it until she hears it from him over the phone.
I guess another decision would be, should she be prepped for a live-roasting or not.
One involves her having some problem and asking to see the manager, who then threatens to have her made into meat for causing such a fuss. Naturally, she thinks she's special and immune to all that because she's the wife of some rich powerful type. So they call him up to confirm this, but it turns out he's frustrated with her, too, and tells the store they can maker her into a roast for him and have her delivered, with a both extra thrown in for their trouble.
The other idea involves her unknowingly being the meat to begin with, having been set up by her frustrated husband, which is what causes the dust-up and demand to see the manager, because she refuses to believe it until she hears it from him over the phone.
I guess another decision would be, should she be prepped for a live-roasting or not.
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