tail vore animation & other stuff =w=

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tail vore animation & other stuff =w=

Postby plumipette » Mon Feb 10, 2020 12:04 am

hi!! i've never posted here so forgive me if i'm doing something wrong but i was looking for critique on my stuff!!
i'm very new to this sorta art so if you have critique for any of the art i've posted on my gallery page (specifically the comic things but also anything is fine =w=b) it would be very super welcome but i'm also looking for stuff about this animation i just made! i really haven't done much animation stuff so i'm not sure about it -w-(c and i would like to get better at it!!
thank you!!
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Re: tail vore animation & other stuff =w=

Postby boomerangfish » Mon Feb 10, 2020 6:13 pm

Very nice!
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Re: tail vore animation & other stuff =w=

Postby AlluringPredation » Wed Feb 12, 2020 7:28 pm

This is totally my thing. The one key issue is the bouncing of her breasts, and I don't see a cause for them to have them jiggling. I would have loved to see the struggling in her tail cause her body to bounce (assuming she's sitting on her own tail?), with her tits lagging behind to create a reason for this bounce.
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