SleepTight's Story Announcements

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SleepTight's Story Announcements

Postby SleepTight » Wed Sep 04, 2019 3:01 pm

Hi everyone. I just uploaded my first very own original vore story to my factory fresh gallery :-D

https://aryion.com/g4/view/549629
Linda just wanted to earn some quick bucks filming a simulated vore porn scene, but she ends up being flushed down the drain due to her own carelessness.

Warning: contains digestion and scat.

Please let me know what you think about the story in the comments. I'm very interested in your honest opinion, both on the content itself and on the writing style. I hope you're merciful though, as I said, it's my very first time :oops:

I already have some more story ideas, mostly centering around human on human vore with unwilling or accidental prey, so I'm planning to publish more in the not so far future. I will update this thread when they come out.
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Re: SleepTight's Story Announcements

Postby SleepTight » Sat Sep 21, 2019 5:48 pm

My second story is out. I've decided to post two versions, one with a scat ending, the other without.

No Scat version: https://aryion.com/g4/view/552871
Scat version: https://aryion.com/g4/view/552875
Alicia wants to fulfill her vore phantasies, but things go seriously wrong.


I was contemplating only posting the non-scat version, since after fully writing out the digestion part I thought that it should stand on its own. However, I had already written the scat ending by this point, and it is kind of necessary to lead into the continuation of Jerry's journey that I'm planning, so I uploaded both versions.
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Re: SleepTight's Story Announcements

Postby Guest14456 » Wed Sep 25, 2019 9:51 am

I saw your second story on my watched tags feed when you published it, almost read it, unfortunately I'm not into m/f. If you ever release a female pred story I'd be glad to give you some feedback !
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