Dukinu wrote:well nice work dude
Thanks!
Dukinu wrote:well nice work dude
soline wrote:It's looking fantastic! I'm looking forward to seeing what else you produce!
The reflection of her body in the TV screen is a nice touch too.
Skittles209 wrote:Reminds me of Ohh's work on gumroad. It would be nice to see more 3D model art and stuff. Cool stuff.
goodguy wrote:maybe (most probably) its just me, but I kind of expected more interaction between the unbirthed and the unbirther
perhaps even turn him into one of her eggs and have one of the other girls turn into a futa to re-birth him with her cum? IDK, I have weirdo ideas
but do let me say, the style of the comic was really good, I liked the poses quite a bit
the models were well proportioned, not too volumptious, I liked the models chosen
but maybe its jsut me, but when I see regression, I sometimes like to see absorption, and thne even banter form the 2 parties, like, "why am I so small"- "you are my egg", "this sucks!" "-my frie dwill fertilize you and you will be reborn" such and such (not literally that, but I like the pred to talk to the prey, if not necesarily evil, I do like taunting and interaction)
but overall, unbirth/10, not bad, the topics advertised were covered, and the images were well structured to show what was meant to be conveyed, the text was not overtly intrusive, if perhaps a little "too" out of the way, I would have preffered to see the character dialogue on different parts of the page where I could easily associate them with the speaker, not necesarily taking over the main part of the screen, but them beign left or right with a single transprent line to the speaker might have made a small difference as to how the text was distributed
but otherwise, solid effort man, cant wait to see more of your work!
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