How is that looks like?

by **MEGADRAGSTER288** » Thu Jun 20, 2019 3:08 pm

I have build her just alone! Completely alone! I never seen well woman's shapes! So how is she? It's just an art!

by **SilhouetteofKid** » Thu Jun 20, 2019 5:23 pm

It's good but her anatomy is weird.
Her torso and legs are bulky but her waist is very thin.
Her arms are angular and weirdly disproportioned.
The hair looks fine, though that one hair on
the left side of her face is strange, and her
face and expression are pretty good.
All the lines are bold and don't have variation.
Bold lines can work if there's a bit of depth in the image
and I can see that with the legs and thighs. The torso
though looks flat compared to the lower half.

Overall, it's good but the anatomy needs work.
Hope this helps. ^^

by **MEGADRAGSTER288** » Thu Jun 20, 2019 6:20 pm

OK, it's suck, I know! But I have drawn the legs with that way, cuz she have muscles! That is why I have drawn these strange lines on her body, and also made the legs that thick, cuz they are muscles, but I can change that too, but for now, I see no reason to do that yet, not just yet! If there is another way on how women muscles are drawn, then I will follow it! Anyway, for the bold lines, I'm pretty sure you are right! As for the waist... I don't know for real, cuz I have seen girls with thin waist, but... I think you are right! Maybe I will rework her and see what can I get from here! Anyway, thank you very much for advice! Will reupload this image again with some done changes! But... I wanna help! And please don't show mercy! Tell me the exact fails of this image! I need honesty, and I'm not afraid to hear "you are loser, go outta here cuz you don't know to draw"! It's about how we say:

"Don't afraid of negative comments, but learn of them! You should be really afraid if you don't mind to change something on you, although you have got an advice!"

PS

Just saying... Don't count this in the comment above:

"if this forum is pornsite or anything else... Well... I don't care about that much, cuz I wanna show art, and learn some missing skills, and art isn't to be necessary a porn site art. I said that, cuz I have seen more weird things here, than the image that I just sent!

Come on! Really? A girl eat man, or girl? How it's called -
vore stuff? Isn't this a bit sick?

Well who cares? What about me, is to show some art! Don't you think that I have dirty mind or something like that! I'm pretty clear person that likes to draw

!"

by **SilhouetteofKid** » Fri Jun 21, 2019 4:02 am

MEGADRAGSTER288 wrote:OK, it's suck, I know! But I have drawn the legs with that way, cuz she have muscles! That is why I have drawn these strange lines on her body, and also made the legs that thick, cuz they are muscles, but I can change that too, but for now, I see no reason to do that yet, not just yet! If there is another way on how women muscles are drawn, then I will follow it! Anyway, for the bold lines, I'm pretty sure you are right! As for the waist... I don't know for real, cuz I have seen girls with thin waist, but... I think you are right! Maybe I will rework her and see what can I get from here! Anyway, thank you very much for advice! Will reupload this image again with some done changes! But... I wanna help! And please don't show mercy! Tell me the exact fails of this image! I need honesty, and I'm not afraid to hear "you are loser, go outta here cuz you don't know to draw"! It's about how we say:

"Don't afraid of negative comments, but learn of them! You should be really afraid if you don't mind to change something on you, although you have got an advice!"

PS

Just saying... Don't count this in the comment above:

"if this forum is pornsite or anything else... Well... I don't care about that much, cuz I wanna show art, and learn some missing skills, and art isn't to be necessary a porn site art. I said that, cuz I have seen more weird things here, than the image that I just sent!

Come on! Really? A girl eat man, or girl? How it's called -
vore stuff? Isn't this a bit sick?

Well who cares? What about me, is to show some art! Don't you think that I have dirty mind or something like that! I'm pretty clear person that likes to draw !"

I don't think calling you a loser is necessary. ^^;

And I won't say you can't draw. You clearly show basic drawing skills and that's good.
Honestly, anyone can draw. Isn't hard to pick up a pencil and draw something. After that is kinda the hard part in my opinion.
But yeah, I won't hold back, I'll critique your work as best as I can.

by **MEGADRAGSTER288** » Fri Jun 21, 2019 9:33 am

Thank you very much! It's highly appreciated!

Until then... I have rework the drawing as best as I could! Check it out! Some things I didn't done cuz I told why, above!

by **SilhouetteofKid** » Fri Jun 21, 2019 10:51 pm

Hm, it's an improvement but I still see some problems.
Like her neck is very thick, the forearms are tubes and
don't match part up to the shoulders. Her is waaaay too wide
and the hair looks flat. The waist is still thin and
the breasts are balloons. Unless that's
how you prefer to draw it. The shorts look painted on to the character
rather than being worn. The legs are just blobs once you
get past the thighs.

To kinda help, here's some references.

I couldn't really find some more realistic ones but you should get an idea
from the poses and anatomy to figure out what needs adjustments.
Hope this helps.

by **MEGADRAGSTER288** » Sun Jun 23, 2019 4:35 pm

Ooh OK! Thanks

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