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New: Choose-your-own-ending stuffing story! - 12/11/2022

Postby Indighost » Sat Jan 22, 2011 8:57 pm

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Hi everyone.

I have been a lurker on the site for the past three years or so. During that time, I put together a bunch of F/various, vore/stuffing/digestion stories that I enjoyed writing and re-reading. Recently I felt that if there was a possibility that anyone else might enjoy them (or have a suggestion for improving my further writing), then I was obligated to post them. So I have.

My favorite authors in the vore community have always been El Portero and Magnyss669 (a guy who did stories of old Frostbyte's characters), although I enjoy many authors on the site. Recently I have been a fan of Yoshi Lover, JT, and JQVore's stories, although I am still exploring the archives.

Brief summaries of my stories:

Clever Gretel Meets Tom Thumb (Non-furry, F/various, stuffing, vore, digestion, Post-vore **Scat**)
As a kid, two of Grimm's fairy tales were my favorite: "Tom Thumb", a story about a tiny little guy who gets continuously eaten by animals, and "Clever Gretel", a story about a mischevious cook who loves to stuff herself full of food. In this story they finally meet one another. What could possibly go wrong? 55 pages. Although it includes various types of vore, the main themes are definitely digestion and stuffing. Ends with an over-the-top scat scene.

Liza's Story (Furry, F/various, stuffing, vore, digestion, Post-vore **Scat**)
For me, furry stuff is a learned (ie not natural) fetish. At first it seemed weird to me. However, after a lot of thought, I came around to enjoy it for what it is. Furry animals are cute, why not make them sexy too, just for fun? Liza's Story (in 4 parts) is a story written with that in mind. It is in many ways similar to the above, but with a different setting. The main character is a cow morph and a competitive eater, while her mouse friend has a special shrinking ability. Chapters 1 and 4 contain over-the-top scat scenes while 2 and 3 do not contain scat. Ch. 3 is the centerpiece with about 40 pages.

*I should note that these stories are written as porn specifically. That is, I made sure nearly every scene had some fetish-related element in it. So their goal is to be porn first and anything else later. This is to differentiate them from some other stories on the site, which seem to be written as stories first, and porn second.
*I also recognize that scat fans are a minority, and there is a lot in my works.That's ok--No pressure to comment if you're not into this particular fetish.

Your comments and constructive criticism are welcome and appreciated! :)

Link to my writing gallery:
http://aryion.com/g3/showgallery.php?id=197948
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Re: 5 new F/various, vore, stuffing, digestion, scat stories

Postby ElPortero » Sun Jan 23, 2011 8:44 am

I am going to write the following in enormous, capital, underlined, italicized, bold, red letters, because it needs to be stated thusly:

READ THIS MAN'S WORK!

IT IS AMAZING!


Seriously, I am very jealous right now, in the best way possible. I'm being beaten at my own fetish writing game, and I've never been happier to say it. I am utterly blown away at the quality of these insanely sexy stories.
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Re: 5 new F/various, vore, stuffing, digestion, scat stories

Postby MilkChocolate » Sun Jan 23, 2011 3:56 pm

dude... if el portero says your awesome, then i absolutely have to watch you with no questions asked
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Re: 5 new F/various, vore, stuffing, digestion, scat stories

Postby quizmaster » Sun Jan 23, 2011 5:25 pm

I know what you mean. It's like when (a) God tells you something is awesome.
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Re: 5 new F/various, vore, stuffing, digestion, scat stories

Postby Indighost » Sun Jan 23, 2011 9:09 pm

Thanks El Portero, you are kind.
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Re: 5 new F/various, vore, stuffing, digestion, scat stories

Postby JQVore » Sun Jan 23, 2011 10:09 pm

ElPortero wrote:I am going to write the following in enormous, capital, underlined, italicized, bold, red letters, because it needs to be stated thusly:

READ THIS MAN'S WORK!

IT IS AMAZING!


Seriously, I am very jealous right now, in the best way possible. I'm being beaten at my own fetish writing game, and I've never been happier to say it. I am utterly blown away at the quality of these insanely sexy stories.


I concur to this statement :)
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Re: 5 new F/various, vore, stuffing, digestion, scat stories

Postby Cicatrix_Manet » Mon Jan 24, 2011 9:31 am

Not even kidding, i'm usually a harsh critic but these stories are in my opinion the best vore stories written.

I get it. You've been reading my thoughts and created stories just for me. As flattered as i am by the gesture, your invasive methods will not go unpunished. Professor X will hear of the misuse of your powers.
I...uh...well I...what?...sorry...nevermind
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Re: 5 new F/various, vore, stuffing, digestion, scat stories

Postby ElPortero » Mon Jan 24, 2011 11:17 am

Indighost wrote:Thanks El Portero, you are kind.

And you are f-ing talented.
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Re: 5 new F/various, vore, stuffing, digestion, scat stories

Postby Gutswimmer » Mon Jan 24, 2011 2:08 pm

I'm going to go out of my way as a lurker here with the express purpose of applauding both Indighost for his nearly magical abilities as a writer, and to the history of mankind for the series of events that culminated in his existence. Indighost, you have sailed the ship of prose smoothly from the shores of mere erotica, and across a vast sea of a so-called "suicidal fantasy taboo". You have arrived all the richer at your destined port-of-call, which can only be described as the manifesto of the most keen psychological analysis of the human mentality of guilt, intimacy and pleasure, from which the makings of bizarre sexual fetish are born. I tip my hat to you, sir! May the wind be at your back, and may your soul arrive at heaven an hour before the devil knows you're dead!

P.S.: Veni.
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Re: 5 new F/various, vore, stuffing, digestion, scat stories

Postby Indighost » Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:14 pm

Glad you guys enjoyed!

My goal was to create works in which (a) you may Veni, as they say, at any given point in any story, and Veni again when you read it later, off of a different scene, and yet (b) also have fun reading at the same time. I.E., such that there is not a pressing need to skip to the end of the story because there are interesting and varied treats along the way.

I also find Gutswimmer's mention of a "suicidal fantasy taboo" to be interesting--thanks for bringing that up. When I first realized I was into vore/micro-macro, I looked it up on Wikipedia, and at one point over there they were suggesting it was inherently self-hating (they used the word self-effacing). After years of reflection, however, I decided that this was not the case. Vore can be an act of justice, not necessarily cruelty; it can also cause the eater to become vulnerable/weak (due to the big belly). There are really a lot of different paths vore can take. Therefore, another intention with these stories was to prove that vore can be good, lighthearted fun. :)

I welcome any further comments about what you liked about any story or what could be improved. Please comment on the items themselves as well!
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Re: 5 new F/various, vore, stuffing, digestion, scat stories

Postby Sora » Tue Jan 25, 2011 1:24 am

Wonderful stories Indighost, well done!

Keep up the great work!
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Re: 5 new F/various, vore, stuffing, digestion, scat stories

Postby Decimos » Tue Jan 25, 2011 4:37 am

Truly awesome bits of literary sexual indulgence in some of the most gratifying of ways - either my favorite stories, or perhaps their tied...but nothing short of it. The progression and characterization...love for Liza's story mentioned, I have become utterly infatuated with Clever Gretel - as unhealthily so as one can be with a fictional character. The sexual catacombs of my mind are filled with appended instances in which I travel the castle as a brother or acquaintance of Thumbelina sent to unravel the dark mystery of her disappearance, the intense, horrifying truth bubbling slowly to the surface while I foster a conflicting, platonic romance with both Gretel and Martha, so fond of the pair - and this is in the rare instance that I'm not simply numbed into a stupor reading over the vividly detailed descriptions of Gretel's feasting throughout the genuine article.
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Re: 5 new F/various, fulltour, stuffing, scat stories: 150 pages

Postby Indighost » Wed Mar 30, 2011 12:06 am

Liza's Story - Chapter 5: Liza Fights a Dragon

The saga continues!

First, Liza and Mary Jane lay out some unfinished business from last weekend. They decide to go hiking, but then the mouse goes off trail. A disturbed mouse relates a creepy story. And finally, a dragoness gets hungry. It's all downhill from there. Will our heroes survive?! 23 pages.

*Link to the story: http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=201071

Basic outline: Plot > Sex > Scat > Sex (briefly) // Plot > Vore > Stuffing > Digestion > Scat > Inflation & Torture > Stuffing & Digestion > Vore

A note:
-I intended this chapter to be 15 pages. However, when I wrote half of it, I had written 23 pages. So I cut it off at what I hope is a good stopping place. I'll do the rest later.
-I am not a psychologist. That said, I find the idea of 'Stockholm Syndrome' interesting. Let me know what you thought about my implementation of it, whether or not it was believeable.

:o :-D **Please feel free to leave comments, criticism and suggestions on the item's page or in this topic.** :-D :o
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Re: Indighost's Stories: +1 new F/etc. story as of 3/29/11

Postby Indighost » Fri Apr 22, 2011 8:39 am

Liza's Story
Chapter 6: The Cow's Revenge
Written by Indighost, 2011

Description:

Swallowed by a huge dragoness...for most victims this is the utter end of the road. But Liza's got something up her sleeve (or rather, down her throat). Yet even if she survives the belly, how will she escape? Will Mary Jane be able to persuade the tortured Mariska to help, and if not, to rally the rest of the mice? Have the authorities begun to take notice of the pair's bizarre adventures? Find out!

Features:
*An extended in-belly sequence.
*An F/F/F vore scene, with simultaneous Unbirth.
*An extremely languorous lesbian sex scene at the end, with plenty of big bellies and big boobs.

Link to story:
The Cow's Revenge

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Re: I's Stories: LS6: Furry F/F/F, Unbirth, Elasticity, Sex

Postby Indighost » Wed Jun 29, 2011 8:24 pm

Kelsey's Uninvited Guest
Written by Indighost, 2011

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A brief, light-hearted stuffing & vore story. Kelsey and Hannah are two teachers at a suburban private school. Kelsey used to harass Hannah a lot, but this weekend, Kelsey is really depressed, and Hannah's attitude softens. This used to be a fanfiction of something...you win a prize if you can guess what :) Otherwise, enjoy.

Features:
*Accidental vore with unwilling pred
*A relationship that began as coworkers and became friends turns into something more
*Feeder/Feedee scene at the start.
*Light F/F sex.

Link to story:
Kelsey's Uninvited Guest

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Re: I's Stories: updated 6/29/2011 with 1 new human vore story

Postby Indighost » Wed Jul 13, 2011 10:15 pm

Just uploaded an RP I did with Datahog. The Hog himself is an excellent writer and a great guy to chat with. He has a couple excellent digestion-related stories you should check out :)

The RP log in question is a furry story about a first-time predator attempting to waylay her first meal, with the help of local predator's club. Yet I'm gonna make you read the whole thing to find out if it's full tour or not :3 Contains scat.

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Update.

Postby Indighost » Mon Aug 22, 2011 10:21 pm

Just uploaded a 49-page monster.

As I have been saying on my blog, this one is a little more story than vore.

However, it still contains boatloads of stuff, including stuffing, unaware vore, f/f sex, macro/micro shenanigans, three different swallowing scenes, struggles to escape the stomach, some more successful than others, and plenty of belly aches and belly rubs.

Check it out and leave me a comment on my gallery.
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Re: Indighost's Stories: 1/06/12: Two new Furry stories

Postby Indighost » Fri Jan 06, 2012 9:27 pm

2 new vore stories this weekend.

1. Liza's story chapter 6.5. Basically, it's the scat aftermath of the previous chapter, plus a little character drama and some sexy scenes.

2. Jessica's new friend. A skunk girl stuffs herself with food, and gets a tummyache. She needs a little help from her dog friend, Sasha. Gift for the illustrious coaster14.
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Re: Indighost's Stories: 5/29/12: a 103-Year-Old fanfiction.

Postby Indighost » Tue May 29, 2012 7:48 pm

Hey vore friends,

I was bored one day and re-read the classic children's book "The Wind in the Willows" by Kenneth Grahame. This book was written in 1909. Well, to no one's surprise, after I had read it, my thoughts rolled around to the topic of Vore, and lo, this story was born. *Warning, it's full of nasty detail, and it contains some mild sexuality as well.

The Rogue in the Jaws of Life

So, all in all, rather evil to pervert such an innocent old children's novel, but at the same time, rather fun, I think.
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Re: I's Stories: New Story. F/everything, sex, stuffing. 46

Postby Indighost » Fri Sep 28, 2012 10:51 am

New story posted 9/28/2012!!
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Liza's Story
Chapter 7: The Intestinal Investigator
Written by Indighost © 2012

Description:
46 pages. 75% porn. What’s this story about? F/fucking everything. Vore, stuffing, and otherwise. Sex (3.5 scenes, straight and lesbian), unaware MILF fulltour, micro endo, unbirth, furry, object swallowing, a bit of bdsm, accidental romance, digestion, indigestion, two scat scenes, and of course a little bit of drama. Basically, our furry friends help the police investigate some vicious predators.

For new readers: The setting is a cartoonish furry North America, where magic exists alongside modern technology. This is a super perverse, super depraved, drawn-out, melodramatic vore and stuffing and endosomatophilia story. There is lots of everything. You have been warned!

*Scat Haters: If you can survive the fart on page 15, there's nothing further until page 33.

Tags:
Accidental Romance, M/F Sex, Pony, Mouse, Cows, Detective, Digestion, Indigestion, FBI, Police, Full Tour, F/F Sex, F/f, F/m, F/M, Soft Vore, Drama, Object Swallowing, Scat, Stuffing, Gas, Endo, Fart, Belch, Burp, Endosomatophilia, Micro, Unbirth, MILF, Dog, Furry, Anthro, Unaware

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