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Postby Seeguy » Mon May 31, 2010 1:31 am

A short story I wrote some time ago. This will be the first fetish porn I've ever put out on the Internet. Tell me what you think.

Just My Type (Softish, M/f, F/m, transformation, tentacles)
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I couldn’t believe my luck. She was beautiful, dark haired, bright eyed, and she was generous of hip and bosom. After a pleasant conversation at a nearby bar, she invited me back to her place. On the bus ride over we engaged in quiet, giggly conversation. She made a number of obscene suggestions into my ear, playful and coquettish. She seemed like just my type.

I couldn’t believe my luck. He was slender with slightly broad shoulders and short light hair. There was a certain boyish innocence to his approach, which I always enjoy. Still, I knew when I asked if he wanted to go back to my place, that he would say yes. On the bus I tried to get a blush out of him, but he stayed cool. I was a bit disappointed, but still he seemed just my type.


She unlocked the door and insisted I enter before her. As she followed she turned a light on. The house was small, but she had decorated carefully, tastefully. I took a seat on a very comfy tan couch. She closed the door and locked it, then scurried out to another room.
“One minute,” she shouted, “got to visit the little girls room.”
“Take you time,” I replied, “I have all night.”
I sat for a bit and glanced around the room. There was the typical living room stuff: coffee table, television, a couple bookshelves. I heard a flush, and heard her coming back to the living room.

*******
“Good,” I said, “’cause all night is exactly how long I plan to use you for.’
He pulled the collar of his shirt with a finger, as if letting steam out.
“Woo,” he said, ” Not sure I have that much in me.”
“Oh trust me,” I looked his yummy body up and down, “I know how to make you last.”
“Mmm, You want to get started?” he asked.
In a bit,” I went into the adjoining kitchen. “Do you want anything to drink? Anything to eat?” As I asked, I slipped off my shirt, pants shoes, and socks, leaving me in nothing but my favorite specially reinforced bra and panties, (Frilly and pink, if you must know.) My stomach rumbled, and I was ready to eat.

*******
“Sure,” I called after her, “I am quite hungry, famished if you must know”
I prepared to drop this charade as soon as she came back in, and deploy my tentacles and pheromone spewers. She came back into the room wearing nothing but frilly pink underwear. I knew that this would be an excellent meal.

*******
As I approached there was something off about his sitting posture. It didn’t seem important. As I drew closer I said, “I’m quite famished myself, but I think I’ve got quite a succulent meal right here.”
As I finished I made my Ogre blood come to the fore. I felt my body expand. Muscle and fat grew thicker, and my height shot up by two feet. My hands and feet grew large and strong, without losing their slender feminine grace, I might add. My finger and toenails turned a matte grey running toward black. My skin took on a healthy green shade. I felt my throat and teeth changing, and stretching into the perfect instruments for devouring attractive young men whole. I licked my thick green lips with my lengthy purple tongue. My pink undies remained to my delight. Even when I’m a slavering man-eating beast, I have a very girly side.
I was about to force my nice young man to service my big stinky green Ogre body in every perverted way I could think of, before slurping him down into my belly. That’s when the tentacles lunged at me.

*******
I changed quickly to my true form, not listening to what the young woman was saying.
I became a slimy, blue, fleshy thing with numerous tentacles sprouting from my gaping, pink, almost vaginal maw. I love it, the feeling of myself extending, stretching. When I change I become the classic tentacle monster of hentai. I have three basic tenril types in this form. From the top of my body sprout long veined appendages that end in slightly luminescent bulbs. These bulbs squirt a chemical that relaxes my victims and makes tham give into the pleasures I subject them to. Around my midsection, on either side of my mouth, are long suckered arms I use for grasping, fine manipulation, and some penetration. From around my base sprout my favorite, they are essentially long prehensile cocks. I can lengthen and thicken them at will and spurt lube and spunk from them.
After giving a pretty young lady a good thorough tentacle fucking, she goes into my maw to be slowly digested by my innards.
After my change, which takes only a second, I lunged at the young woman with my tentacles only to find that she had changed as well..

*******
He had changed into some kind of anime tentacle monster. That was unexpected, but my stomach was still grumbling to be filled. My tongue salivated the thick ogrish fluids that eased the passage of many tender young men down into my tummy.
Why not? I thought to myself, after all, I was a big fan of calamari. Tentacles might prove tasty.
I grasped at the flailing tentacle and got my steely grip around one. I squeezed and pulled.

*******
She yanked on one of my graspers. Her strength seemed at least equal to my own, if not greater. Then came a big shocker. She opened her great toothy maw wide.

*******
I stuffed it right into my big jade jaws. Wrapping my lips around the tube, I tried to suck it in like a strand of spaghetti.

*******
Her powerful throat muscles went to work. I could see them standing out on her dark green neck. It was warm and wet, and not at all unpleasant in a way. I couldn’t believe it, I who had devoured hundreds of women over the years, was actually physically enjoying this young lady’s attempts to swallow me.
Whether or not I liked it, she was actually beginning to make progress despite the efforts of my other arms trying to pry her off. I tried spraying my pheromones at her. A gentle mist drifted over her. I hoped this would render her as docile as it normally did to humans.

*******
As I gulped down the tentacle, which was quite tasty by the way, he pointed an arm with a swollen mass at the end of it toward me. As I downed another few centimeters of him, the bulbous mass squirted a fine mist at me. I had no clue what it was but it smelled great, like electricity and sex against a backdrop of jasmine. I grabbed at some of the other tentacles flailing at me. That’s when it happened.
As soon as the first bit of tentacle hit my stomach, it convulsed madly. I fell on my knees and began retching.

*******
She was vomiting up my arm. I felt relieved, but also oddly insulted. Once she had disgorged the last of my arm she spoke. “What the hell are you??”
“I could ask the same of you.”
“Are you some kind of vore?”
“I’m unfamiliar with that term.”

*******
So there I was having a conversation with an anime style tentacle monster.
“A vore, you know, a being who hides among he herd of humanity while you’re secretly a monster who preys on them.”
“Oh,” he said, “ That pretty much describes my existence. I meet young women I like and then I eat them, usually after having my tantacular way with them.”
“Well, I am too, I’m a big green ogre girl who expresses her affection for nice cute boys by forcing them to pleasure me, then gulping them down whole.”
“Oh,” he said.
“Scoot,” I said, “let me sit down next to you.”

*******
The two of us talked all through the night. We discussed our preferred hunting techniques, we talked about our upbringings.

“My family are all like me. Mom, Dad, little sis, all tentacle monster, all positively gluttonous.”

“Girl tentacle monsters? Do they go after boys or girls?”

“Boys mainly. Although has a habit of tentacle raping the bejesus out of women she finds particularly annoying.”

“Hmm, I’d think girls would be more fun for tentacled people, what with the extra orifice to penetrate.”

“Guys have an opening in the crotchular region as well.”

“You mean?”

“Yes, my sister, in particular enjoys working some thin, and sometimes not so thin, tendrils into a young man’s penis. She takes great pleasure in the screams of agony and ecstasy she manages to elicit.”

“Whoo, sound like a very artistic young lady.”

“What about your kin, are thy ogres as well?”

“My mom is, never met my dad.”

“Oh.”

“Hey, don’t say, ’Oh’ like that. My mom provided for us perfectly well, and it’s not like he just ran out. Mom ate him to nourish their developing fetus. It was a grand paternal sacrifice, she told me.’

“So you’re half human?”

“Yeah, but that doesn’t mean I feel bad about eating them or anything. I mean, they’re just so damn tasty.”

“What’s your name?”

“Katelin, most people call me Katie.”

“I’m Peter.”

*******
I extended a tentacle towards her hand.

*******
I took his tendril in my hand, squeezing gently.

*******
“So Katie, you maybe want to try this again next week?”

“Maybe, I might want to bring someone along, if you don’t mind?”

“Not at all, I had a similar thought myself.”

“Alright, so, same time next week.”

*******
She lay on her couch naked, green, and beautiful. Her strong arms held the struggling young man’s face down to her sopping, aroused cunt. I had tentacles thrusting into all three of his girlfriend’s main orifices, and, thanks to my pheromones, she was loving it.
Kate cooed as we mutually enjoyed raping this young couple, picked up over an hour ago at a club. Her dark purple nipples stood out erect from her dirty green tit flesh.

*******
I watched Peter spray down the girl with viscous fluids and shove his phallic tentacles into her pussy. And ass. Finally he crammed her mouth full as well, silencing her lustful moans and groans. He offered to use his pheromnes to make the boy wild with desire for me, but it didn’t appeal to me. I wanted to feel him thrash and struggle, as I forced his face deep into my aching, stinking, hungry, cunt.
Peter was enjoying himself but keeping an eye on me. I knew he was enjoying watching me as much as I was enjoying watching him. What he did next I’ll never forget.

*******
I wrapped a long tentacle around the young man’s ankle and hauled him up. As I continued fucking his girl, I dangled him over Kate’s head.
“Open wide milady, I’ve a tender morsel for you.”

*******
I couldn’t believe it. Peter wanted to feed me. The very idea made my heart flutter, and my stomach grumble. I opened wide, as requested, and looked up into the terrified young man’s face.

*******

I lowered him slowly, like a peeled grape to her gaping maw. His head was slowly enveloped by her mouth, as I passed him down. Then Kate took over. She gulped him down four big swallows. Her belly expanded with outward with it’s new occupant.
“Mmm,” She licked her lips, “Yummy.” She rubbed her bulging belly, green as a fresh avocado. She seemed totally blessed out. I was about to enjoy my own tasty, writhing, little morsel when Kate stood up.

*******
What a sweet gesture. I could feel the pathetic boy in my belly squirming, and heard his muffled pleas for mercy. Overwhelmed by lust and sated gluttony, I decided to repay peter in kind. I stood up and strode over to the girl he was vigorously tentacle raping.
“You hungry?” I asked.
“Oh, yes,” he said.
I grabbed the girl as he released her from his clutches. Hefting her in my arms, I plunged her headfirst into his awaiting maw. His toothless, almost vaginal, mouth clamped around and pulled her out of my arms. He slurped her in slowly, like a strand of pasta.

*******
“Did you enjoy yourself?”

“Oh, absolutely.”

“How long will it take you to digest your handsome young meal?”

“All night, yours?”

“All night with a nice pretty young woman struggling in my innards.”

“Ahh, I love it when they struggle.”

“So, what now?”

“Well I’m all stuffed, and horny, and my young man didn’t really get a chance to finish me off. Plus, I’m pretty sure I just felt something thick and warm wriggle it’s way up my backside.”

“Slimy also, same time next week then?”

“Same time next week, but only if you put some of those in my sopping wet, horny ogress cunt.”

We were both so happy to have found someone who was just our type.
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Re: Just My Type (Softish, M/f, F/m, transformation, tentacles)

Postby Jaxonvorist » Mon May 31, 2010 8:00 am

nice
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Re: Just My Type (Softish, M/f, F/m, transformation, tentacles)

Postby Wierdost » Mon May 31, 2010 3:20 pm

Excellent story sir!
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Re: Just My Type (Softish, M/f, F/m, transformation, tentacles)

Postby Liz » Tue Jun 01, 2010 2:20 am

Nice work - a good read
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Re: Just My Type (Softish, M/f, F/m, transformation, tentacles)

Postby blergle » Tue Jun 01, 2010 4:56 am

I love it. That was like a great sitcom pilot. Thank you!
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Re: Just My Type (Softish, M/f, F/m, transformation, tentacles)

Postby Seeguy » Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:55 am

Thanks for the praise, but I would also like criticism, if possible. I'd like to know what people think I could improve. I'd also like to know if readers found the story genuinely erotic. I haven't really shown this sort of work off to the public before, and need honest criticism if I'm going to improve. Did people find the character's realistic? Was there too much or too little description? That sort of thing.
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Re: Just My Type (Softish, M/f, F/m, transformation, tentacles)

Postby Wierdost » Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:31 am

Well first off, the things your got right were the characters, there views and getting their personalities across. As a result, I'd say yeah, it was erotic. However, some more description is always nice, just a little more detail to their actions and what they're experiencing would top it off nicely. Other than that, I thought it was excellent and very original from a lot of the other stuff I read on Eka's.
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Re: Just My Type (Softish, M/f, F/m, transformation, tentacles)

Postby Seeguy » Wed Jun 02, 2010 11:59 am

Here is a more revised version in my Gallery.

http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=187961
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Re: Seeguy's writings

Postby Seeguy » Fri Apr 01, 2011 10:34 am

Empowerment My first ever GTS fiction.
Contains: F/various soft
F/various hard
crushing
insertion
non-consent
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Re: Seeguy's writings

Postby Nerva » Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:15 am

Not so interested in your second story, but your first... that was pretty novel. You don't see a lot of predator couples in vore works, and I really do hope you consider further writing along those lines, whether it's with Peter and Katie or other characters.
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Re: Seeguy's writings

Postby Imrhys » Sun Apr 03, 2011 11:36 am

Nerva wrote:Not so interested in your second story, but your first... that was pretty novel. You don't see a lot of predator couples in vore works, and I really do hope you consider further writing along those lines, whether it's with Peter and Katie or other characters.


I second this. :gulp:
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Re: Seeguy's writings

Postby Seeguy » Tue Jul 05, 2011 1:56 am

I've got a spanking new story up: Substitution
I'm not totally fond of the title.
Contains: M/F
Soft Vore
Oral Vore
minor digestion content
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Re: Seeguy's writings

Postby Seeguy » Thu Apr 23, 2015 3:04 pm

Hey folks, I've got a new story up: Ebony's Story (http://aryion.com/g4/view/297134)
Contains: F/F
F/M
Soft Vore
Digestion
Reformation
Non-Fatal

I've also set myself up to start taking writing commissions.
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Re: Seeguy's writings

Postby Seeguy » Tue Jun 02, 2015 11:59 pm

New Story

Sharon Wants A Giant http://aryion.com/g4/view/297134

hope you all like it.
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Re: Seeguy's writings

Postby DenellEposey » Wed Jun 03, 2015 10:13 am

Nice story man. Very erotic. I think you write it with deep feeling. I appreciate it. It is worth read.
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Re: Seeguy's writings

Postby Seeguy » Mon Feb 15, 2016 10:58 pm

Got a new one up.

Having Steven for Dinner
http://aryion.com/g4/view/332536

It's a commission piece for an anonymous client.

Features:
Prep and Cooking
Gore
Furry characters
A tiny bit of Hard Vore at the end.
A group of pred women preparing and cooking a gay fox man.
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Re: Seeguy's writings

Postby Seeguy » Mon Oct 24, 2016 3:38 pm

I've started a Patreon page. I plan to post new work their at least twice a month. Check it out! https://www.patreon.com/Seeguy_Shade
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Re: Seeguy's writings

Postby Seeguy » Thu Mar 26, 2020 6:32 pm

It's been a long time, but I've uploaded a new story for people who like slimegirls and engulfment.

https://aryion.com/g4/view/591869
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Re: Seeguy's writings

Postby Seeguy » Sat Mar 06, 2021 2:13 am

Another year, another story. I've been a little more focused on Size related content recently, but I wrote up a tentacle monster story you might find interesting,

https://aryion.com/g4/view/674391
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