Opinions of writing for Visual Novel's, please

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Opinions of writing for Visual Novel's, please

Postby tst12 » Wed Aug 17, 2022 8:12 pm

Hi so I'm curious to see if people think my thoughts make sense. I've been known to write games of various sorts (many sitting in mothballs somewhere in the forum.)
I am publishing a spoiler/sample flowchart of a conversation you have with other characters. Please tell me if you think this makes sense or is guessable or not!

However, I am thinking of this.

IF YOU WANT THE GAME TO BE UNSPOILED, DON'T READ ANY FURTHER.

Spoiler: show
You are going to be eaten by your landlord. Your roommate tries to find someone else to eat her (otherwise, she suffers the same fate.) However, to win the game you need to absorb her memories (as is possible in this game) and so you need to convince her, through conversation, to suddenly wind up in your belly instead of the other girl standing nearby. To read this:

Wavy boxes are my own commentary.
Italics are choices.
+1 Alisha points or -1 Alisha points are a score of how much that character likes you... which will only matter later, but not in this scene.
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Re: Opinions of writing for Visual Novel's, please

Postby mrsirman » Sat Aug 20, 2022 12:26 pm

Your path makes sense with the choices. It's great that you explained your thoughts with the wavy boxes. I don't think it would be to hard to guess.
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