Latex Cleavage Vore

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Latex Cleavage Vore

Postby dergrossmann » Fri Jan 28, 2022 12:39 am

Hey everyone!
I really like cleavage vore and latex and feel like there isn't enough content so I am learning to draw to help with that. This is my first vore drawing, I'd love critiques and comments!
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cleavage vore, breast vore, unwilling prey, latex, female pred, bodysuit
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Re: Latex Cleavage Vore

Postby PatchyZone » Fri Jan 28, 2022 1:35 am

The face could kind of use a bit of work, but otherwise it's a good drawing for a first time!
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Re: Latex Cleavage Vore

Postby Whereaminow27 » Fri Jan 28, 2022 3:36 am

Pretty good for first drawing!
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Re: Latex Cleavage Vore

Postby Miridium » Fri Jan 28, 2022 7:38 am

There's definitely room for improvement but a pretty good first drawing nonetheless. Keep at it!
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Re: Latex Cleavage Vore

Postby thequietmanno1 » Fri Jan 28, 2022 9:40 am

I too think there needs to be more of this around. it's a good attempt, maybe working on the shading in the background to give a sense of distance from her to the 'wall'' she's in front of, to make her presence in the foreground 'pop' more.
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Re: Latex Cleavage Vore

Postby ParallelBlack » Fri Jan 28, 2022 2:49 pm

Love to see this concept! Even better when the pred is zipping themselves up to seal the prey inside~

As others have said, lots of room for improvement. You should start off with working out general proportions for the body as a whole, but also put some focus into the facial structure specifically. People tend to overlook odd bodies more than odd faces.
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Re: Latex Cleavage Vore

Postby ALAMOS123 » Fri Jan 28, 2022 3:11 pm

looks great fir a first shot! i'm no artist so i can't be much help in terms of that, but i'd love to know more about this character you made! always great to see people talk about their preds
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