Hello, comrades.
As recently as yesterday, I joined the creative community of this site. Moreover, I even published my first work (after which this section is named). However, unfortunately, I have not received any comments about the quality of the work I have done.
Therefore, I would like to ask you to share your opinion about my short story here. With the help of your feedback, I will be able to make each story and the whole story much better.
I will be extremely grateful to you.
The story itself may be found here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/741878
Eaters lead the investigation.
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Re: Eaters lead the investigation.
It would help if you described what the story is about, and what sub-genres are involved. Not everyone is into every kind of vore.
Everyone has a plan until they end up in someone’s belly!
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GastricAztec - Advanced Vorarephile
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