Survival in a Vore World

[Cooke2134]

First post on here but long time lurker. I decided to give it a go at creating my first ever interactive. The story is heavily influenced by Kaledeen's Living in a Vorish World, but with slightly different rules.

As of right now I only have two full storylines finished, but have several other characters whom I plan to quickly add stories too as well. My intent is to create a world where the stories of all characters are interconnected to some extent but can easily be standalones as well.

I'm new to writing and interactives in general so I'm looking for feedback and suggestions!



https://aryion.com/iss/page.php?page=1&story=1342

[Cooke2134]

We're now approaching close to 100 pages! I added a poll just to get some ideas and opinions from anyone who has read.

Most stories are pretty much finished for the time being however I am still brainstorming how best to create Mengqi's story and tie it with Rachel and John. I also have yet to think of where to go with Callie yet but some idea will pop up soon enough.

[Quarters]

Interesting so far. In general, I'm enjoying it, though occasionally something pops out that seems strange. Mengqi's method of consumption is said to waste nothing in comparison to local methods, but wouldn't it leave the area soaked in blood? Also, the Adult section for vore women, at the time of typing this, includes Vanessa, but after clicking the name, the entry is for Muriel.

[Cooke2134]

Good catch on the Vanessa- Muriel link. Last night I was originally thinking of creating a character named Vanessa and changed my mind last minute on the name. I corrected it.

As for Mengqi I need to go back and make more edits to her stories. I'll admit that was my first time trying out hard vore and I didn't know how best to go about it. My hope for Mengqi is she ends up as someone who does both hard and soft vore as well as you see her improve her interactions with the world as she improves her English.