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Re: French_snack's thread [formerly: Hello! I'm new...]

Postby French_snack » Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:07 am

Continuing my Felaryan "Riverlands" series:

https://aryion.com/g4/view/401463
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Postby French_snack » Tue Jul 04, 2017 5:26 am

Is it tummy time for Patricia? Find out here, in a new story:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/403976 .
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Postby Lupe » Tue Jul 04, 2017 11:29 pm

Glad to see more from you, as always!
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Postby French_snack » Mon Aug 07, 2017 6:06 am

Defenders of the Empire! continues with chapter eight: https://aryion.com/g4/view/409406 .

This one has vore in it, with women eating live creatures and women being eaten.
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Postby French_snack » Thu Aug 10, 2017 2:19 pm

Back to Felarya, where we catch up on what Milly's been doing:

https://aryion.com/g4/view/410204
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Postby French_snack » Mon Aug 28, 2017 12:53 pm

The first chapter of my Defenders of the Empire! spin-off is now here!

https://aryion.com/g4/view/413165

It's set about a quarter of a century after my initial series. I'd been looking forward to writing it; I hope you enjoy it!
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Postby French_snack » Thu Sep 14, 2017 1:01 pm

My entry for the Felarya group contest: https://aryion.com/g4/view/415947 .
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Postby French_snack » Sun Dec 10, 2017 6:47 pm

Finally back to writing! Here's a Felaryan story:

https://aryion.com/g4/view/430395
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Postby hersnack » Mon Dec 11, 2017 5:12 pm

Very glad to see you writing Vore again. I think you are the best Vore writer. I particularly liked the part about the human woman eating the mermaids. A regular human girl as a pred was a very nice touch. Also I think it is a tribute to your writing the way you made the Harpy seem somewhat sympathetic despite the fact that she had just eaten a women alive. Very Good!
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Postby French_snack » Mon Dec 11, 2017 6:17 pm

hersnack wrote:Very glad to see you writing Vore again. I think you are the best Vore writer. I particularly liked the part about the human woman eating the mermaids. A regular human girl as a pred was a very nice touch. Also I think it is a tribute to your writing the way you made the Harpy seem somewhat sympathetic despite the fact that she had just eaten a women alive. Very Good!


Thank you very much! I do like to show the predators as "ordinary people" that we can relate to, to some extent.

I have another story in which Ayna (the human girl) eats a neera (a mouse-girl), and in one of Wiking's stories she eats two tomthumbs.
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Postby Jakar » Tue Dec 12, 2017 1:40 am

Hope this doesn't come off too critical or sounding like I'm demanding you write to my preferrences but...I miss the prey perspective stories you used to do. Ignore what I'm about to say if your tastes have changed and you simply don't enjoy writing them anymore.

As you said above, you like to show predators as 'ordinary people'. I think you've built your worlds up brilliantly to reflect that. Too well in fact. What once was a boon to making the vore seem realistic has become the focus. I read each story still, getting glimpses of the situations I'd like to picture myself in if I lived there (briefly)...but those moments take a back-seat to the soap opera style framework it rests on.

And I think the problem I'm having is all due to it not being through the eyes of the prey. When it's done via the predator, I almost can't fault you for it. The writing style sticks to the theme like it should, these women, with some exceptions, are fine with vore, it's normal. It would be weird for there to be paragraphs upon paragraphs of the act when it's your average day for them. Why would what's happening in her mouth or in her guts take a spotlight when her character has moved on from it in the story? The vore feels like it has become yet another tool you use to add flavour (pun intended) to your world.

But when you see it from the prey side it takes on a whole new meaning. It's still that wonderfully detailed scenario you've worked hard on over the years but rather than the vore being background noise, here it's the payoff. The reward for letting yourself imagine for a few moments 'what if I was there'. As they approach these women, they know they might not be special, they might only be seen as food. Most accept that. But none of that stops it from being the most important moment of their lives. It adds so much more weight and impact to the stories. Even if they're just one of many on a tray full of people lined up to be eaten, it matters to them. That in turn, makes it matter to the reader.

At least in my opinion.
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Postby French_snack » Tue Dec 12, 2017 4:44 am

That's an interesting remark; thank you. I write what inspires me, and I suppose I have indeed felt a bit less inspired to delve into the prey perspective. Maybe because I've done it so often already. But I'll think about it, and we probably will see some more prey perspective again at some point. Not in the next story, but probably when I return to the IVC (where the prey, indeed, are willing).
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Postby Jakar » Tue Dec 12, 2017 6:35 am

And thankyou for taking it so well. I mean no malicious intent. I believe there's less than you think though. Open to debate, especially when you sometimes do a bit of prey perspective in the IVC, the transformation stuff kinda skirts the boundaries...but for the kind of stories I came to and still do adore you for, ones like the first 3 entries to your IVC folder. There's probably like <15 of those types altogether. Possibly more if there's a few gems in the Felarya series but I gave up on those for the reasons I stated. Maybe just seems like it was done often if those types were hard to write due to your tastes but I'm sticking with my point that it's a small percentage of your vast library.

Anyway, that's just me nitpicking your sentence saying 'maybe because I've done it so often already'. Sorry. Couldn't have asked for anything more than you thinking about it. It'd just been a long while and I was beginning to suspect they were never coming back.
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Postby French_snack » Sun Dec 17, 2017 9:11 am

A fairly short Felaryan story: https://aryion.com/g4/view/431403 .

Now that I’ve got a bit of time to write, here’s what I currently have planned.

Story 199 will be quite a short and simple transformation vore story, called ‘What you wish for’. This story is all planned out, and has been for months; I simply need to write it.

Story 200 will probably be the European regional qualifier for the IVC. I haven’t planned it out at all yet.
We already know who the three North American qualifiers for the world final are; who will the three Europeans be? Sahiba is an automatic qualifier, but will the qualifier be her opportunity to shine, nonetheless? Will Oksana be there? What about the girls from London’s Vore Restaurant? Or will we see some fresh new vore talent shine through? No European has won the world trophy since Cherry gobbled up forty-five people in Kobe… five world finals ago!
In any case, hungry tummies will be filled, close to bursting!

Story 201 will be the ninth and penultimate chapter of the first series of Defenders of the Empire!. Battered and shrunk by repeated assaults from the all-powerful New Republic, can the remnants of the Empire possibly still survive? Will the brave Imperial soldiers and officers have to fight on until the bitter end? And as the desperate Empire takes measures to protect itself, how far will those officers, like Captain Shevrek, be willing to follow ruthless orders?

Story 202 will continue Ayna’s tale in Jake’s world of Ayralef. Is there any hope for Ayna to go home to her tribe? And does she still want to? For now, she’s trying to find her place in this strange and alien society, and to work out what her place there will be. She seems to have made a new friend, an outsider as well – but can the two of them ever really understand each other?

Story 203 will take us back to the southern seas of Felarya as two bold shipfuls of little dridders explore the vast unknown. When we last saw them, they had just spotted the coast of a new, undiscovered land. But… where are they? And what undreamt wonders or perils now await Feyrin and her friends?

All this, and more, as soon as I find the time!
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Postby French_snack » Tue Dec 26, 2017 5:28 am

I hope you've all had a merry Christmas? Here's a late present: a short transformation vore story.

https://aryion.com/g4/view/432667
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Postby French_snack » Sat Feb 03, 2018 4:24 am

I've posted a poll here on whether you prefer a (female) vore pred to be single or not.
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Postby French_snack » Fri Mar 09, 2018 6:05 am

Talana returns, to help save the Empire from the fierce New Republic! In the penultimate chapter of her series:

https://aryion.com/g4/view/445778
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Postby French_snack » Sat Mar 24, 2018 5:07 pm

My entry for a Felaryan group contest on deviantArt: "Protectors":

https://aryion.com/g4/view/448303
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Postby French_snack » Tue Mar 27, 2018 11:24 am

... And my other entry. This continues the tale of Tina the tomthumb.

https://aryion.com/g4/view/448857
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Postby French_snack » Thu Apr 26, 2018 4:22 am

Continuing my Felaryan story arc:

https://aryion.com/g4/view/454810
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