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Check and Mate

Postby Karbo » Sun Mar 03, 2013 7:37 pm

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I just finished a new vore comic. :)
It's a bit ala Hard choices. It takes place in Hell with two succubi, Chalyss and Menyssan, playing a game of chess the infernal way, where damned souls are used as pieces and are eaten once captured. However, Chalyss's side quickly realize their succubus is a complete beginner! She's not at all on Menyssan's level, and they have to help her out in order to not end in her rival's belly.

That comic is a bit of a return to the sources for me, Menyssan being the first character I ever created ( back then I wrote a vore story with her, my first and only writing in english actually ^^ . http://aryion.com/g4/view/17472 if you want to check it )

The comic is 66 pages long and feature a lot of vore, with plenty of mawshots, internal views, a bit of digestion and POVs.
It's available here : http://www.e-junkie.com/karbo/product/4 ... k+and+mate
And you can visit my store page here : http://www.e-junkie.com/karbo

I hope you will enjoy it ! ^_^
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby Luckless » Sun Mar 03, 2013 7:50 pm

Looks dope!
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby Wolfwood » Mon Mar 04, 2013 1:08 am

Got it without a moments waste :P and it was epic ^^

Although it made me very aware of my nerd status... my first thought reading it was 'cosplay chess' >_>... or what i wish cosplay chess was like :P lol
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby Tanmanm1 » Mon Mar 04, 2013 1:21 am

I think this was your best comic yet!
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My favorite part was at the end when Menyssan ate all the remaining pieces and let out that huge burp!
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby Bifurcation » Mon Mar 04, 2013 2:08 am

Nothing wrong with a comic made for purely vorish purposes! I found this one to be quite good what with the well written execution of the chess/succubi idea, the experimentation with new POVs, angles, and (my personal favorite) the intense inside shots.

I was also thinking, you know there are other pictures where even larger stomachs are involved. Maybe those succubi play go! 8O
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby Karbo » Mon Mar 04, 2013 5:56 am

Glad you liked it ! :-D

Bifurcation: Hahaha XD well with her enormous stomach, I bet Menyssan could totally do that :gulp:
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby kamcio1010 » Mon Mar 04, 2013 4:46 pm

FINALLY! You make amazing comics :D
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby Wolfwood » Tue Mar 05, 2013 12:37 am

Bifurcation wrote:Nothing wrong with a comic made for purely vorish purposes! I found this one to be quite good what with the well written execution of the chess/succubi idea, the experimentation with new POVs, angles, and (my personal favorite) the intense inside shots.

I was also thinking, you know there are other pictures where even larger stomachs are involved. Maybe those succubi play go! 8O


This whole thing does make me wonder what other games succubi play. As you say, Go would be a feast ^^
...and tabletop football would be hilarious, Mhuhahahaha :P
Minesweeper would be messy... >_>
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby Agora » Wed Mar 06, 2013 8:04 pm

Duuude, you need to post this kinda news on your gallery or I won't know! Something's horribly wrong when I learn about your new comic from a non-vore friend linking me to the whole thing posted illegally on some other site, lol.

I'm getting this as my reward when I finish my new story!
Have a pre-emptive "it's f-ing amazing!".
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby Avant » Wed Mar 06, 2013 8:20 pm

This is your best one yet. Even with Menyssan, my favorite character of yours by far, featuring in it I couldn't help but love the other succubus too. Everything from the maw shots and internals to the lovely full body angle's was just perfect. Good job.
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby Tanmanm1 » Wed Mar 06, 2013 8:22 pm

As usual, people on *insert obvious website here* don't care that they're taking money away from Karbo. It seems that every time he releases a new comic, it ends up there. The really sad part is that it only took me a couple minutes to find it. I won't post the the name of the website for obvious reasons.
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby maleperduis » Wed Mar 06, 2013 10:14 pm

Faaaaaantastic work! A sexy scenario, my personal favourite of your monster girl species (the succubi), lots of playful teasing which is always really fun, and absolutely gorgeosuly drawn as always.

It also answers my question I had when I saw the first chess picture you did: why are the pieces on the winning side so smug? It's because they're people who got sent to hell, so they're probably dicks!

I agree with Agora though, you should really put something in your gallery advertising this now that it's available. It's very easy for things to get lost in the forum and not be seen
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby vorefanatic314 » Fri Mar 08, 2013 8:06 am

SPOILERS>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>


That was fantastic :) Like some other users have said, this is your best one yet (but they just keep getting better and better!) I particularly liked the relationship between the evil queen working with Chaylss so she can not be eaten, and the little twist at the end was great (I wonder if the evil queen could hear that Chaylss was just toying with her the entire time playing dumb? That would make for one sweet defeat!)

END SPOILERS>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Anyway, great job as always, and looking forward to more work by you :) Job well done, Karbo!
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby Karbo » Sun Mar 10, 2013 8:30 am

Thank you for the kind words ! :-D
I am really glad you liked it, I put a lot of work into this one :wink:
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby vore111 » Sat Apr 06, 2013 12:56 pm

the problem with your comics is that i just can't get enough of the i wish there is a new one every day
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby Karbo » Tue Apr 09, 2013 2:36 am

Thank you XD
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby Vilanda » Sat Apr 27, 2013 1:25 am

I can't wait to check this out. =) This week hopefully.
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby Karbo » Wed May 01, 2013 2:46 am

I hope you will like it :)
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Re: Check and Mate

Postby Zapor » Mon May 19, 2014 2:00 am

Well, that and I learned =)
Frankly: I like how you draw manga, but the plot is very bad. Why? I explain:
1) All of your work has the same meaning. A sacrifice. there is a giant naked girl. Girl eats and destroys its victim. End of story.
"Checkmate" was no exception. We see two naked succubusplaying chess and devouring people finally destroying their souls. One of the figures - evil queen - trying to beat Menissan, but eventually loses it and eat. End of story.
If you changed the ending and the evil queen won - it would be surprising would make interested in your creativity of others,even appeared to morality and meaning in the manga. But no, you went under the old scheme, which has not changed since your first works. You just could not come up with anything new. However. I have no right to condemn you for it: Obligatory porn with eating and death is your preference, and so you can not listen to me.This is your creativity and your right. But I was not impressed with the story. Do not be offended. please!
2). Why the hell just souls? I think nagas, mermaids, dryads, fairies and other giantess of Felarya, devouring and killing people deserve hell lot more. Why not Menissan devoured nagas or fairies? Why this injustice? I rememberthat sinful souls tastier. soul former predators should be the most delicious and attractive for Menissan. I will be very glad if you can tell me this aspect.

Graphically as your work is superb: a stunning POV, interesting angles, nice looking characters, rich detail and good shade + competent staff position on the page. However,there are some issues purely anatomical - for example, why no predators larynx and trachea, where does the gastric juice at Menissan as she could digest human without even leaving a trace of where the foam in the stomach and other trifles. However, I will not ask you about this, because it is your drawing style, and the style is not for the judge =)In general, you have turned the typical manga Felarya: awesome picture, a lot of vore-porn and boring story that is still not visible for naked tits and gaping mouths.

My verdict: very nice, but, alas, stupidly. In general, I like... I think... ^^;

PS: Sorry for my english, I used Google translator
Funny fact:
I completely position myself as vore-artist, but practically ALL commisions which I did are devoted to foot-fetish!
WTF, dudes?! xD
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