I love your mawshots, theyre awesome.
I hope you dont take this the wrong way, but just a little tip, the only problem with it is the obtuse angles at the sides of the mouth. They're there when the mouth is shut, but they disappear and almost go totally straight when open so the mouth opening has smooth edges all the way around. If you were to do that, your mawshots would be literally perfect.
Again, sorry for that, just wanted to try and give some constructive crit
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out ( mawshot p4 )
I...uh...well I...what?...sorry...nevermind
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Cicatrix_Manet - Intermediate Vorarephile
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out ( mawshot p4 )
SputnikDX : this is noted XD
YuriFan : No you are right, DA posters are very expensive indeed. Mostly because they are printed on demand rather than printed in mass I believe. I'm actually browsing different sites to see if I can find a much more satisfactory formula for posters, cards and such
Cicatrix_Manet : No problem ! I welcome criticism but um I don't understand what you are meaning in that particular case
YuriFan : No you are right, DA posters are very expensive indeed. Mostly because they are printed on demand rather than printed in mass I believe. I'm actually browsing different sites to see if I can find a much more satisfactory formula for posters, cards and such
Cicatrix_Manet : No problem ! I welcome criticism but um I don't understand what you are meaning in that particular case
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out ( mawshot p4 )
Karbo wrote:Cicatrix_Manet : No problem ! I welcome criticism but um I don't understand what you are meaning in that particular case
Thanks, i was worried you might see it as offensive.
Yeah i didnt explain what i meant very well . What i meant to say was in your mawshot pictures there are pointed angles at the side of the mouth. When the mouth is closed it's where the edges of the lips would be, its difficult to explain. I was just saying when you draw an open mouth, you leave these edges in, so the open mouth has a sort of diamond shape. If you were to avoid sharp edges when drawing the opening of the mouth, so that it was more circular, it would look alot more realistic. Still dont know if i'm explaining it well enough, its hard to explain, but i hope you get the idea. Thanks for being open to criticism though ^^
Maybe someone else can summarise what i'm trying to say a bit better coz even re-reading this it looks difficult to understand
I...uh...well I...what?...sorry...nevermind
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Cicatrix_Manet - Intermediate Vorarephile
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out ( mawshot p4 )
Oh I think I understand what you mean. and you are right
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out ( mawshot p4 )
Hello there Karbo i just got that second comic there and i thought the story was very interesting and i'm hoping that there are going to be some "evil" giantesses or nagas.....hmm...i guess i really like to see evil women in comics gobbling up someone
If you wouldn't mind a little construcive critisism. I think that adding more texture to the giantesses lips you know to soften them up even more.
If you wouldn't mind a little construcive critisism. I think that adding more texture to the giantesses lips you know to soften them up even more.
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out ( mawshot p4 )
Thank you , glad you liked it
Mhh at a point there might be some yes^^ and thank you for the remark. I think I will do the 4th tome in a different style of shading that could make this sort of things easier to do
Mhh at a point there might be some yes^^ and thank you for the remark. I think I will do the 4th tome in a different style of shading that could make this sort of things easier to do
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out ( mawshot p4 )
A little pre-vore picture
It was one of those idea that get stuck in your head and that you know just won't go until you have drawed it XD
That's how they play Chess in hell
It was one of those idea that get stuck in your head and that you know just won't go until you have drawed it XD
That's how they play Chess in hell
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 - New picture P5
A very old picture ( actually my first ever where I tried anime style ! ) that I updated a bit
And a doodle page about dryads ^
And a doodle page about dryads ^
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 - New picture P5
I will second the request for a non-electrical copy. Yes I know it is very expensive, but apparently the artist behind DominicDeegan has found a reasonable way of doing it. Maybe you can message the guy and as him how he does it.
I would loooove to buy a hard copy of you delicious works~♥
I would loooove to buy a hard copy of you delicious works~♥
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 - New picture P5
Personally, I am not much for oral vore, at all, though I found the later part of the tome between Melany and Lea to be rather thrilling, if only because of the suspense and presentation, so your penmanship is quite deserving of recognition. ^^
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 - New picture P5
Karbooooooo!!! When do you plan to release tome 4?! I just can't wait for the plot to further devolope! Who cares about the vore scenes! (yeah, whom do I expect to fool! )
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 - New picture P5
XD
Well actually I just posted the first page on my DA account ( http://karbo.deviantart.com/ ) !
( not a vorish one yet though )
The manga is clearly advancing well and I'm really happy with how it is turning out ^_^ without being absolutely certain, I'd say it could be finished one month from now
Well actually I just posted the first page on my DA account ( http://karbo.deviantart.com/ ) !
( not a vorish one yet though )
The manga is clearly advancing well and I'm really happy with how it is turning out ^_^ without being absolutely certain, I'd say it could be finished one month from now
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 - New picture P5
I'm very excited to collect these ^^
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